j-dilla vs lilrenegade89
 

ite check 10-15 lines due in 25 min

im'a murder dis fag
his rhymes startin ta lag
all ya gunna c is meds carryin the body bag
he open a fourtion cookie n the scripture said
watch ur back u gunna b dead
full fledged homo walkin new york streets
askin for money n head from every man he meets.
lookin for drugs n cocks
livin in a cardboard box
dis clan member born in texas
pull a drive by in my mother fuckin lexus
my words are infectious.
but dis gaybo ain't layin in da grave rite next-ta us
dis nigga layin in the water six feet deep
i don't think ne one will find him in this bloody creek
but the dog ill catch his smell he hasn't bathed in a week

All this bitch talks about is dick, bitches, and nonesense.
He thinks he's all hard shit, when his heads weightless and dense.
You dont have half my skill, you wish you could but my styles too bold.
this little bitch named renegade is only fifteen years old.
Your an infant, small time, your styles indominant.
Shoot your ass down like a plane, or hose you like a fire hidrant.
You fucking smell worse than a landfill, spray ur shit down with popourri.
"You vote on mine, Ill vote on your" thats not how you "up the ranks" here on RB
Renegade, should be 'Bitchmade', cause ur a wack as rapper
You must get ur shitpushed in, rumors are you a fudgepacker.
Im going to antaginize you, shut you down like the World Trade
How many people you going to kiss ass to get a vote that you perswayed.
Its simple to concur, you would do anything for a win paid.
I'll cut you down like Green Gaint, you'll be beggin' for some First-Aid.
So Renegade... what did we learn today?
Your a small time joke, probably will never leave Altoona PA.
My suggestion is ur obsession for "BATTELIN" better end quick.
Learn how to spell some words right, ur an illiterate prick.
A confession, you brown nose wanna be emcee
Stick to something your good at, cause rappin' aint it.
You have no whit, like a .0001 baseball player you cant hit
Chewin' dip but you cant spit, you might as well quit, before an STD you transmit.


You said 10-15 but I just couldnt stop.

um mother fucker i doon't mean ill vote for them i mean ill vote on thier battle
u stupid fucker

o btw spit
10 - 15 lines
re do this shit
or ur dq ed
o and u didn't check in in time so that is another rulse u brok redo
ill also do a redo

ok he don't have to redo but here is my full spit

im'a murder dis fag
his rhymes startin ta lag
all ya gunna c is meds carryin the body bag
he open a fourtion cookie n the scripture said
watch ur back u gunna b dead
full fledged homo walkin new york streets
askin for money n head from every man he meets.
lookin for drugs n cocks
livin in a cardboard box
dis clan member born in texas
pull a drive by in my mother fuckin lexus
my words are infectious.
but dis gaybo ain't layin in da grave rite next-ta us
dis nigga layin in the water six feet deep
i don't think ne one will find him in this bloody creek
but the dog ill catch his smell he hasn't bathed in a week
renegade roll w/ a switch blade
slit ya throught n gush out kool aid
this corruptable mc follow me for lyrical aid
in the rap game he a duce a spades
me im the ace ill put this bloody knife in the side of ya face
dis mutha fucker is a lyrical retard
u better take ya ass ta bosten school yard
u won't know a good ryme if it hit u in da face
dats y ima make ur ass a discrace
ur bankrupt debt to the floor
ur so broke u can't even afford a front door
bitch im a tell your ur style is a failure
so go the fuck back to ya dirty ass trailer
ur ice is fake u got it for a quartor
with only 50 cent ur cash flow getin shorter

renegade, u cant cut me, u got the dullest blade.
You a little inspect that annoys me and I got the Raid.
Your shit is so fucking repetitive and too overplayed.
Fucking his senile grandma is the only way he gets laid.
Saying that I didnt 'follow the rules', too many lines, not on time.
He is making me redue this battle because of no confidence in his last rhyme.
Renegade, if you'd like we can redo it again and again.
Or if you want we can do this 'till the first time that YOU win.

uppin # one

man you fucked the rules, this is shit.
you should agree with the fucking rules

Lilrenegade Dawg U A Bitch.. I Give My Vote To J-dilla Because His Shit Was Why Better. And Lilrenegade U's Fuckin Shit Up So U Can Find A Way To Win. U Stupid Bitch..

Vote=j-dilla

fuck u let him win this battle u bitch u can't rap u too scared u only do text casue ur a pussy

fuck u. u wigger. suck my miother fuckin dick bitch. u aint nuttin but a hoe any mother fuckin way bitch i wouldnt waste my time on u bitch..

fuckin punk ass

chronicclown is a bitch and don't know what the fuck he's talkin bout! if you wanna cut on renegade first get ya mothafuckin rhymes straight! BATTLE ME BITCH AND WE'LL SEE SET IT UP LIKE THIS 10-13LINES! DUE IN 10MIN NO DICKRIDING AND IF I WIN YOU MUST ADMIT YOUR A BITCH TO ANYONE YOU BATTLE! TAKE IT OR LEAVE IT!

mods dq j dilla he spit too many lines and missed the checkin time if he didnt make extra lines he woulda made check in so please dq him it aint gettin votes ne how

LIL i see u have elevated nice battle i like the one punch it had me rollin "lookin for drugs n cocks
livin in a cardboard box" i wass fellin that hommie u had good structuer you are now a good MC in my eyes..........good battle nigga

j-dilla WoW u need to eleivate you had some weak ass punches and no personals...."All this bitch talks about is dick, bitches, and nonesense.
He thinks he's all hard shit, when his heads weightless and dense" if his head weight lees then how the fuck could it be dence you arnt to smart now are u work on your shit hommie check in LL for some help and to see how shit is really done..........and i think u went over the line limit....................
v/lilrenegade89

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