...J-Dilla v. Malice...
6-12 lines.
Feeds if you feel needed. 30 mins. |
Who am I rapping? Your not Malice, your not Pusha-T
I'll unload The Clipse in my 12 guage to leave holes in your Gucci. Your no Gangstarr, no Kweli, just a wanna be rapstar So far it aint lookin' good, your less average then par. Malice is defined 'feeling a need to see others suffer'. Thats spectating me raping your mother as I continually fuck her. You scream in agony, hatin' me by all means. Nightmeres of watchin J-Dilla ripping ur mom as she screams. I continually will diss you but for one reason you miss me, Cause instead of beating the fuck out of you, I just beat up ur mothers pussy. Your triyin' to see whats real, but to you its all blurrrrrs Conspicuous about ur record, too embarrassed by the numbers. |
J-Dilla, wat tha fuck? i heard u was a gay-thrilla
Bitch u a spud, an my mouths a potato peela So i'll cut you up, consider yaself served You wont pass this test cuz tha scale aint curved Crazy mufucka reppin tha soulcal Ya words are all beef, an Im eatin the whole cow Its not your day, Theres one thing I've got to say J-dilla takes beats(beatings) like Dr. Dre time limit 30 minutes it took me 5 to rip it J's dick is fallin off from how hard he grips it Cuz i got him shakin an scared, on the ege of his seat His palms are sweaty like ron jeremys in heat! (ron jeremy=famous porn starr) |
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ma guy malice is coo, i think he killed j dilla, malice got ma vote
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didnt poll vote.. oh well. 0-0 still needs votes
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yo if u could hook a brutha up wit soom votes next time u battle and yo line is
good ile get u a vot here tha link to tha battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110581 |
Votez cmon, dont sleep on dis yall... ........
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malice got this one for sure. his lines came accross quicker and more fluid like as if it was in person. i liked the beef/whole cow line a lot. sorry j-dilla, but your opener was good.
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malice got this shit wit ez he had dope punches that hit hard and his flow was decent dilla u was ight but ur opener u complemented him sayin he had gucci but either way it goes u lost cause ur flow was off and ur punches didnt hit hard
Vote:Malice plz drop a vote here since i took time to vote on yours http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111173 |
come on yall, we need votez in this, poll vote if u can an exlpain pleaze, or they wont coun.!.!.!
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hey buddy, a 12 guage, doesnt have clips, it has shells
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Cmon can we get this battle voted on an closed, favors will be returned
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ONE SIDED BATTLE.MALICE TOOK DIS EASY.BETA AT EVERY THING IN MY OPINION!!SOORY J-DILLA U JST DIDNT CUT IT.EVALUATE!!KEEP IT UP BOTH OF U'S.
V/MALICE(SIMPLY BETA) PLZ RETURN DA FAVA:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110860 |
ite both came rly rly played here...shit bout gunz gangsta and served....wak
but mallice gets this, he had structure j(your shit came to streched) mallice gets flow as j was streched in places, j your punches were not good they came played, you need to put some clever and witty punches in, instead of rapping bout how gangsta you are man, wallice you get punches but they wrnt good man elavate, personals(not much both need to add) but mallice gets tho's 2. not to good battle but o/well v-mallice make sure you hit this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111366 thx man...........pz |
oi make sure you return the favor man with an honest vote..with the link above............................................. ...thx...................pz
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i can't vote but my advise wont hurt.
both verses were mad played..nothing was really new between the both of u the killing people lines are just weak..and both verses need some creativity and clever fabrications of punches, wordplay, and definatly an increase in vocab..elevate both Malice came way iller though..better flow, better like 2 punches, and flow vote on this battle, needs 1 vote to end..thx knowledge -vs- dizzy hommel peace |
Here's how I saw it.
Flow=Malice, he had a strong structure and it was easy to read to a beat and sounded good in my head. J, you need to work on your structure a bit and your rhymes seemed a little forced. Punches=Malice, his punches just hit harder. J, most of your punches were just like Mom shit which is played out, work on your punches and it will help out. Personals=Malice again, he just had more personals as well, it didn't really seem like J had any personals. J, work on your personals, a few good personals are good things to have in your arsonal, or the abitlity to come up with a few good personals rather. Vocab=J, he had a bit more vocab than Malice. Malice I think this is an area you could work on, good vocab opens up all kinds of options for your verse. Over all=Malice, you had good punches, good personals, and a good flow to it, if you work on that vocab I think you have some good potential here. Just keep working and elevating. J, you need some work on developing your punches, personals, flow, and a little on your vocab, you have some potential, you just need to work at it, keep posting and elevating. Vote=Malice, he took this with an over all stronger verse than J. |
Shit I forgot to ask for votes on my battle. Here it is. Thanks.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108625 |
Yo i cant up anymore J.. so u mite want to if u wanna get this battle ended
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yo j u wanna up dis battle to get it over wit or what?
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Ayo... J obviously dont give a shit bout dis battle so i guess close it if u can since nobody's votin an fuck the win or the lose
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aiight my vote goes to Malice his flow was better and smooth and also his punches were hitting hard..he had a good opener and closer aswell.!
j...your verse was ok but your flow was patchy and had no structure,your punches were missing the target however a couple landed.your opener was weak and your closer was not that much better.... |
Seen as i peeped your stuff can you peep mine please....
ill have 100posts in about 5mins so ill cum back and poll it!... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113483 |
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