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jimmywhite vs Dev
iight i dunno what the fuck the rules are on this site so fuck it
holla back who spits first |
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30 minutes to drop... you drop first, ill follow... ....starts from now... |
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ya spits aint shit, wanna hit and start hatin? i mean whats DEV? {D}ick {E}nlargement {V}acation? IM SICKER~THAN~THA~GAME, so you the PICK~OF~THA~LAME, im startin to wonder whats shorter...YOUR DICK~OR~YA~NAME? cmon pussy, cmon and push-me swearin an shouting, ITLL STILL BE OBVIOUS, this battle is like gary colman against yao-ming. ya shits like a 'LIMP DICK', CUZ EVERYTHIN IS 'HARD~AS~YOU', cuz you just a 'pussy with beef' like 'lesbian barbeques.' i aint gunna argue-wit-you, so come back wack, with an attack of bitch ass battle raps ya sister wrote for you in her math class. BITCH ILL 'BLAST~THIS-GEEK', havin ya period LASTIN-FOR-WEEKS, ya HALF ASSED lines aint hard, like unmasculant-cheeks! THROW A 'PUNCH BACK', like 'quazimoto rhymes', ya HUNCH'S~WACK, you like the fuckin CHIP AND DALE, the way you MUCH~ON~SACK! holla back |
Its 2004, not 92… yet this kid’s droppin played lines
I wouldn’t mind another time…but half of them are mine So unless their blind… they've made the association Good this is only text… and you've got bad pronunciation! God father in ya sig… don’t make you a playa White never won the title… So like him you’re a failure A 147 break I don’t think so… you’re plain snookered Again its jimmy white that cues… gets a first round knock out So that last bar don’t rhyme… but you highlight the multi So we’re even… except JW equals,,, ya Just Worried… |
nice shit dev, good battle
holla back wit some votes on this battle!!! |
ya spits aint shit, wanna hit and start hatin?
i mean whats DEV? {D}ick {E}nlargement {V}acation? ^.....not a good opener ...sorry... IM SICKER~THAN~THA~GAME, so you the PICK~OF~THA~LAME, im startin to wonder whats shorter...YOUR DICK~OR~YA~NAME? ^ok ..played sex lines......meh....diffenet site style... cmon pussy, cmon and push-me swearin an shouting, ITLL STILL BE OBVIOUS, this battle is like gary colman against yao-ming. ^stretched second line....ok meta4 ya shits like a 'LIMP DICK', CUZ EVERYTHIN IS 'HARD~AS~YOU', cuz you just a 'pussy with beef' like 'lesbian barbeques.' ^good meta4...played but whatever....first line .....blah.. i aint gunna argue-wit-you, so come back wack, with an attack of bitch ass battle raps ya sister wrote for you in her math class. ^again second stretched line.....its fine though..... BITCH ILL 'BLAST~THIS-GEEK', havin ya period LASTIN-FOR-WEEKS, ya HALF ASSED lines aint hard, like unmasculant-cheeks! ^this is fine don't cap your multis....good metas...ok punches... THROW A 'PUNCH BACK', like 'quazimoto rhymes', ya HUNCH'S~WACK, you like the fuckin CHIP AND DALE, the way you MUCH~ON~SACK! ^ok closer....good wordplay....gay jokes....sad.... Its 2004, not 92… yet this kid’s droppin played lines I wouldn’t mind another time…but half of them are mine ^hehehe nice....feedin can be helpful..... So unless their blind… they've made the association Good this is only text… and you've got bad pronunciation! ^this an Ok punch..... God father in ya sig… don’t make you a playa White never won the title… So like him you’re a failure ^thats a good connection....but an ok punch... A 147 break I don’t think so… you’re plain snookered Again its jimmy white that cues… gets a first round knock out ^don't ryhme...its a good punch...no wait its only ok So that last bar don’t rhyme… but you highlight the multi So we’re even… except JW equals,,, ya Just Worried… thats a fine closer....consistency is what won this..fo dev..and structure..and veteranness of flow peace..... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110989 __________________ |
Breakdown
ya spits aint shit, wanna hit and start hatin? i mean whats DEV? {D}ick {E}nlargement {V}acation? IM SICKER~THAN~THA~GAME, so you the PICK~OF~THA~LAME, im startin to wonder whats shorter...YOUR DICK~OR~YA~NAME? cmon pussy, cmon and push-me swearin an shouting, ITLL STILL BE OBVIOUS, this battle is like gary colman against yao-ming. ya shits like a 'LIMP DICK', CUZ EVERYTHIN IS 'HARD~AS~YOU', cuz you just a 'pussy with beef' like 'lesbian barbeques.' i aint gunna argue-wit-you, so come back wack, with an attack of bitch ass battle raps ya sister wrote for you in her math class. BITCH ILL 'BLAST~THIS-GEEK', havin ya period LASTIN-FOR-WEEKS, ya HALF ASSED lines aint hard, like unmasculant-cheeks! THROW A 'PUNCH BACK', like 'quazimoto rhymes', ya HUNCH'S~WACK, you like the fuckin CHIP AND DALE, the way you MUCH~ON~SACK! Jimmy, ya verse was ok. Had some ok lines and some nice wordplay. Its 2004, not 92… yet this kid’s droppin played lines I wouldn’t mind another time…but half of them are mine So unless their blind… they've made the association Good this is only text… and you've got bad pronunciation! God father in ya sig… don’t make you a playa White never won the title… So like him you’re a failure A 147 break I don’t think so… you’re plain snookered Again its jimmy white that cues… gets a first round knock out So that last bar don’t rhyme… but you highlight the multi So we’re even… except JW equals,,, ya Just Worried… Dev came hard. His lines hit continuously, and his flow was good. Vote: Dev Both emcees came hard in this battle. Each emcee had tite verses but Dev gets this one wit his constant punches. POLL VOTE ON MY BATTLE, RETURN THE FAVOR! http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108481 |
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This is how I see it
Flow=Dev, structure made this one for Dev it was a much easier read which made it flow better. Punches=I'm gona say Dev, his punches just seemed a bit harder to me, but it was somewhat close. Personals=Dev, they both had a decent amount of personals, it was just the Dev's were a little better again. Vocab=Dev, he just had a higher level of vocab in his piece. Over all=Dev, I thought it was close, just seemed like Dev had a little advantage in most of the catagories. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom |
I forgot to ask for votes on my battle, don't care if I win or lose just want it voted on.
Heres the link. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...anIllabymidnite |
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Multi - jimmy white one this category and only this category
Punches - Dev had better punches Vocab - Dev owned this battle in the vocab department Worplay -Dev had the better wordplay Flow - Dev lead this battle in the flow department. Jimmy White keep trying to make words rhyme with multies, he forced multies together I vote Dev cause he had a more relaxed verse, no line seemed forced, and his punches & flow was better |
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Flow - Dev...
Multi- White...The only thing you did actually come nice in. Punches - Dev Wordplay- Dev Vocab-Dev Structure- Dev Verse- Dev Alright, good battle from both. Dev, your verse was good although you did a lil bit of feeding. Its ok though, you only did it in one line. Nice punches, you kept them short and simple....You use nice vocab. Good verse from you. White.....you went wrong in alot of places, your lines were stretched, and you don't get to the point. The D.E.V. line was a nice attempt at a personal but it didn't work. Don't talk about dick so much, makes look gay. Ok....Your verse was iight, just work on those lines, and don't use such played lines...nice verse good battle to both Vote - Dev |
ya spits aint shit, wanna hit and start hatin?
i mean whats DEV? {D}ick {E}nlargement {V}acation? IM SICKER~THAN~THA~GAME, so you the PICK~OF~THA~LAME, im startin to wonder whats shorter...YOUR DICK~OR~YA~NAME? cmon pussy, cmon and push-me swearin an shouting, ITLL STILL BE OBVIOUS, this battle is like gary colman against yao-ming. ya shits like a 'LIMP DICK', CUZ EVERYTHIN IS 'HARD~AS~YOU', cuz you just a 'pussy with beef' like 'lesbian barbeques.' i aint gunna argue-wit-you, so come back wack, with an attack of bitch ass battle raps ya sister wrote for you in her math class. BITCH ILL 'BLAST~THIS-GEEK', havin ya period LASTIN-FOR-WEEKS, ya HALF ASSED lines aint hard, like unmasculant-cheeks! THROW A 'PUNCH BACK', like 'quazimoto rhymes', ya HUNCH'S~WACK, you like the fuckin CHIP AND DALE, the way you MUCH~ON~SACK! __________________________________________________ fix ya struc and dont caplock ya words thats herb shit,or ive heard anyways 6/10 overall so elavate homie punches werent directed very well _____________________________________________ Its 2004, not 92… yet this kid’s droppin played lines I wouldn’t mind another time…but half of them are mine So unless their blind… they've made the association Good this is only text… and you've got bad pronunciation! God father in ya sig… don’t make you a playa White never won the title… So like him you’re a failure A 147 break I don’t think so… you’re plain snookered Again its jimmy white that cues… gets a first round knock out So that last bar don’t rhyme… but you highlight the multi So we’re even… except JW equals,,, ya Just Worried… ____________________________________________ nice struc and good werdplay overall 8/10 aight well dev had more directed punches and personals which won him this plus his was more of a battle verse __________________________________________ vote/Dev hit my sig dogg dont leave me hangging Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. bad vote - you only said about ten words about each - Feeble Minded |
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im not gonna break this down....what the hell for??
jimmy white.... work on structure and learning what a punch is please dont use too many multies that is gay and no one likes it dont caps lock every word it makes you seem retarded dev....you had some ok punches not great but not bad either i saw one or two that were played you hit him well with personals your structure was fine...you killed him vote dev |
de got this he came harder wit punches and his flow was beetter also jimmy you came ight is juss you need broader punches and u need to quit blodin words that not necessary...and wrok on rhymin better.. and quit forcin multies
VOte :DEv |
Dev got this...
Jimmywhite came ok But his punches were not that great Flow was decent, wordplay could be used Personals were weak... Quote:
I swear thats bittin, but i dont kno from where Overall verse was ok.. 10-20 Dev came straight Punches were decent Wordplay was ok... Flow was pretty good Personals were lacked Structure was nice... Overall.. good verse... 13/20 Vote-Dev Came a bit harder with punches Structure was better too.. |
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