wogzta VS illtalic
 

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no bullshit voting
you spit first

I'll spit the first time i come online and your verse is up.... its no feeding so i wont get an advantage cos im spitting 2nd.... good luck and have fun

Background info: me an wogzta were in Lyrical Soldiers (L.S) a lil while back before it died.


You confessed you "sound stupid".. in front of ya crew,
now i'll do wots neccessary.. come half assed.. an still shit on you...
This 'insomniacs' ill?? Well laughter's the best med.. a cheap remedy,
but careful readin ur verse too much.. cos its gonna cause an O.D...
You fled in an 'Instant'.. a fake Soldier that didn't fit in,
im sure L.S did help your career.. now look.. they're both in the bin...
I kno ya style kid.. you only joined my crew for props,
an the second you were in the fam.. I was labeled an abusive pops...
See i could rape your rep.. fukkn drag queen.. even ur verse wears a dress,
sad thing is if i deleted this post you still wouldn't get 'Instant' success...
Kid you needa ask around.. everybody knows I'll smash this clown,
cos ya rhymes resemble ya wardrobe.. entire style is 'hand-me-downs'...
Face it wogzta.. your style's never gonna be mistaken for fresh,
you'd resurrect an bite your own played shit.. then try clickin "Refresh"...

There's 14..

-awaits-

Notes:
L.S = Lyrical Soldiers
Paki = Pakistani
Artificial = A.I in his sig

Even in the L.S, your battles were never crunchin-numbers
Your style "fell off" faster than a group bungee-jumpers
"This illness ain't catchin"... Cos there's none to speak of
But your a bacterium, lookin' for anything to "feed" off
I only have one loss, and that was post-L.S recovery from you
Your wackness made me sick... and that's why I left the crew
Madd Writer? For your ass, that reputation doesn't-exist
You couldn't "bite" me successfully if you were a "son-of-a-bitch"
My style is always packin' more heat than Paki-missle
But you wouldn't understand natural talent, your "artificial"
Your a little late to learn a valuable lesson, Illtalic...
That even if you bit Nas for "7" years you "Still" wouldn't be Illmatic
There's a reason I never sleep; I'm always perfectin-my-rhymes
Awaits? He can sense an "Instant" loss so he's always checkin-the-time

that's 14... good luck :D

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appreciate it

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thanks for the feedback.......................................... .................................................. .

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I have carefully compiled a vote but it may be considered hate.. I shall await the go ahead from that greasy fucking wog.. =)

^ wtf??

You can vote inspire, but if theres even one mention of my nationality in a negative viewpoint that could affect your vote, your going to IR... good day

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I was going to vote for wogzta but the more I look at it, the more i feel that illtalic had more...: vote illtalic

i dont think your allowed to post other peoples explanations... remember, this is your opinion, not what someone else thought.. i need feedback, not the same reapeating breakdowns...

^ werd..

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this was an ok battle

wogzta-your verse could have been a lot more effective with better wording...i feel u had some nice concepts but u just couldnt word them right....as a result the quality of your verse went down a lil bit......u didnt really have any effective punches because of the wording......average verse.......5/10

illtalic-your verse was decent......u had a couple creative punches that were real effective........i feel u outpunched wogzta.....i feel your punches also could have been worded a lil bit better but they were nice.....nice verse......7/10

v/illtalic.......no hate.......decent battle here

please hit this honestly since i took the time to vote on this.......thanks
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112534

cos ya rhymes resemble ya wardrobe.. entire style is 'hand-me-downs'

^ This rhyme wins it, props if u made it urself

thanks for the honest voting e.coli.... appreciate it....

dum noob? smh an lmao!

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make sure u use ur ups wogzta.. -gone-

@ight @ight, me is
new here, i don't understand much of this shizzle, but i'm trying...
congrats with ya victory illtalic...

-dead- at Hugo!

since i took the time to vote on this battle....could u guys please return the favor and hit my link.........thank u

Okey dokey.. doin it now..

upping............................................ ......

You confessed you "sound stupid".. in front of ya crew,
now i'll do wots neccessary.. come half assed.. an still shit on you...
no creativity whatsoever ...2/10

This 'insomniacs' ill?? Well laughter's the best med.. a cheap remedy,
but careful readin ur verse too much.. cos its gonna cause an O.D...
lmao..i dont kknow why but this is funny..worded meh..but..8/10

You fled in an 'Instant'.. a fake Soldier that didn't fit in,
im sure L.S did help your career.. now look.. they're both in the bin...
your wording sucks...but ok..5/10

I kno ya style kid.. you only joined my crew for props,
an the second you were in the fam.. I was labeled an abusive pops...
hmm..where did i see this before?? ..3/10

See i could rape your rep.. fukkn drag queen.. even ur verse wears a dress,
sad thing is if i deleted this post you still wouldn't get 'Instant' success...
ok..but u needa work on wording...6/10

Kid you needa ask around.. everybody knows I'll smash this clown,
cos ya rhymes resemble ya wardrobe.. entire style is 'hand-me-downs'...
didnt like...3/10

Face it wogzta.. your style's never gonna be mistaken for fresh,
you'd resurrect an bite your own played shit.. then try clickin "Refresh"...
no...2/10

overall for illtalic...29.



Even in the L.S, your battles were never crunchin-numbers
Your style "fell off" faster than a group bungee-jumpers
hmm...played...3/10

"This illness ain't catchin"... Cos there's none to speak of
But your a bacterium, lookin' for anything to "feed" off
weak...3/10

I only have one loss, and that was post-L.S recovery from you
Your wackness made me sick... and that's why I left the crew
eh...4/10

Madd Writer? For your ass, that reputation doesn't-exist
You couldn't "bite" me successfully if you were a "son-of-a-bitch"
nah..and dont put " or -....3/10

My style is always packin' more heat than Paki-missle
But you wouldn't understand natural talent, your "artificial"
coulda been more creative on this personal...5/10

Your a little late to learn a valuable lesson, Illtalic...
That even if you bit Nas for "7" years you "Still" wouldn't be Illmatic
no...not at all...1/10

There's a reason I never sleep; I'm always perfectin-my-rhymes
Awaits? He can sense an "Instant" loss so he's always checkin-the-time
good try..but weak...4/10

overall for wogzta...23

not a hard battle..i think illtacli came better here...
more creative even though his wording is weak..
wog coulda blasted em wit personals but made em weak..
anyway..no hate...

now go vote here........ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113985

*shrugs*

Ya titled to an opinion..

aint we just the best textcess ever :D................................................ ...............

Not accordin to GameTime.. lol!

uppping........................................... .................................................. .....

upping this shit........... dont sleep............................................. .....................

You confessed you "sound stupid".. in front of ya crew,
now i'll do wots neccessary.. come half assed.. an still shit on you...
played... 3/10

This 'insomniacs' ill?? Well laughter's the best med.. a cheap remedy,
but careful readin ur verse too much.. cos its gonna cause an O.D...
not bad 7/10

You fled in an 'Instant'.. a fake Soldier that didn't fit in,
im sure L.S did help your career.. now look.. they're both in the bin...
ok 5/10

I kno ya style kid.. you only joined my crew for props,
an the second you were in the fam.. I was labeled an abusive pops...
yeh ok 6/10

See i could rape your rep.. fukkn drag queen.. even ur verse wears a dress,
sad thing is if i deleted this post you still wouldn't get 'Instant' success...
i liked this 7/10

Kid you needa ask around.. everybody knows I'll smash this clown,
cos ya rhymes resemble ya wardrobe.. entire style is 'hand-me-downs'...
nah i didnt like it ... 3/10

Face it wogzta.. your style's never gonna be mistaken for fresh,
you'd resurrect an bite your own played shit.. then try clickin "Refresh"...
nah ...4/10


overall .... 35/70
Illatic.. iv seen you come a lot better man. And did a long reply on one of your battles earlier but my computer fuked up! but yeh iv seen better....

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Even in the L.S, your battles were never crunchin-numbers
Your style "fell off" faster than a group bungee-jumpers
not bad ... 7/10

"This illness ain't catchin"... Cos there's none to speak of
But your a bacterium, lookin' for anything to "feed" off
yep once again like it ,,, 7/10

I only have one loss, and that was post-L.S recovery from you
Your wackness made me sick... and that's why I left the crew
yep ok 5/10

Madd Writer? For your ass, that reputation doesn't-exist
You couldn't "bite" me successfully if you were a "son-of-a-bitch"
hehe not bad 6/10

My style is always packin' more heat than Paki-missle
But you wouldn't understand natural talent, your "artificial"
yeh ok... 5 /10

Your a little late to learn a valuable lesson, Illtalic...
That even if you bit Nas for "7" years you "Still" wouldn't be Illmatic
didnt like this man .... at alll ... like so i dunno 2/10

There's a reason I never sleep; I'm always perfectin-my-rhymes
Awaits? He can sense an "Instant" loss so he's always checkin-the-time
nah..... but ok 4/10

overall - 36/70

Wogzta - iv seen better from you as well even though u started of well you kinda fell off.,... no hate to either of you ... just my thoughts


plz return the fev
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115073

How many posts to vote on this battle.

Here's how I saw it....

This was a tough battle to judge. Both lyricists came out firing from the gates. Ill came first wit some pretty hot punches. Flow was on point and personals were hittin hard. Wog came pretty hard too. His punches also were hittin hard and may have matched the wordplay and personals. Like i said, this was a hard one to judge but I think the edge slightly goes to Ill. I just enjoyed readin his verse better......

Vote - Illtalic

One more needed.

To Close.

v/ill

for having better verse ya heard?.........

hang on a sec n i will get back wit an exp...............
jus hustlin a battle credit.lol.

illtalic aka casual had the hard hittin' punches, he had the better flow- opener was aight and closer was very nice..... wogzta- had a decent flow in general, try not to self gloficate yourself tho...... both verse were very close with personals and structures but the win goes to illtalic but by a small increment.. good job, you two....
~wun~