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Hitta 01-31-04 11:06 AM

hardhitter vs potent
 
10 lines blind spit
no crew
no hate
no bullshit
no feeding
3-0 knock out or 1st to 5 win's

Hitta 01-31-04 11:08 AM

ightt..............check..........check........... .........im in..................

Hitta 01-31-04 11:14 AM

ightt yo i got some shit i got to do i will get back to this so dont drop till i drop ightt..............<~*1*~>

Potent 01-31-04 11:16 AM

ight dawg i'll drop afta u juss drop by tonight.......~1~

Hitta 01-31-04 11:35 AM

yo fuck it i can drop some quick shit real fast ightt...........dropin noW!........

puertoricanelly 01-31-04 11:43 AM

ayo can yall help a nigg out and vote heres the link to the site, it was a koo battle!!!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111089
:thumbup:

Hitta 01-31-04 11:49 AM

ightt check it,........yo this newb potent wanted some of the hard hitter/
after this fagg reads two of my lines, he's just another R&B quitter/
can u believe this herb?, he needs to go back to being a promotator/
only way this Kidd is elevating is on a god damn elevator/
so im trying to be as clear as possible/
this Kidd beating me is like a retard running pro obstacles/
its impossible I got more illness then a fuckin hospital /
And u have just been served and merked/
told this newb he was only getting hurt/
i did my share of putting this fuckin homo 6 feet under the dirt!!...

Hitta 01-31-04 11:50 AM

ightt waiting on u hommie...............................<~*1*~>

Hitta 01-31-04 12:09 PM

come on son i want to see wut u drop B4 i have to bounce..........................

Potent 01-31-04 12:13 PM

I’ma rape this generic emcee..leave him retiring like quick like jayz//
This got this nigga feelin punk’d like I’m ashton krutcher on mtv//
Ya stretched lines aint shit…nigga there like taffy wit no flava//
Hitting u wit punches so hard even jesus christ couldn’t save ya//
This cat is no match ur shit was lopsided..like fake implants//
I got this cat dazed like I’m Muhammad ali..leavin u in a trance//
U reppin new york..so like the towers ur goin down wit 2 hits//
Ur on a newbie level one of my bars is better then 3 of his spits//
This is my my 9th line…still stroking this cat wit great flows//
U would think this cat is monica lewinky the way this cat blows//

Potent 01-31-04 12:15 PM

Uppin 4 votes
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MichaelCorleone 01-31-04 12:22 PM

potent got this one. his punches were good. good personals. nothing stretched about his lines. they all flow and make since,
hardhitter was nice but the way he setup the flow was not nice. he rhymed the first four then did the 3 and 3. that shit dont come out right. good punches though

vote on my puertoricanelly and michaelcorleone battle

Harlem's Finest 01-31-04 12:26 PM

Potent takes it...

Many played concepts, but they were still enough to win.. consistant punches, good vocab etc..
Structure/flow was on point at all times... few creative bars, but most was average tho...
Hardhitter.. fix the structure.. make it more like what your opponents was..
Flow was here n there.. punches were weak... again, a few creative and original attempts but worded wrong.. and along with the lack of structure and good vocab it messed your chances up...

Vote - Potent

Return the favour - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110646

The Jett 01-31-04 12:27 PM

punches- Pot
flo- Pot
structure- Pot
meti4's- Pot
multi's- Pot

Overall- Pot
Honestly, Hardhitter need's to level off his structure
And focus on punches, wit out sayin Kidd so much
Both also need to Kill the //'s too
Potent shorten ur lines to maybe 3/4's of current
And use more original punches and Meti4's
You had enuff here, But you won't in the future

Hope this helped u guys
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Potent 01-31-04 02:25 PM

uppin 4 votes
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Potent 01-31-04 03:26 PM

Uppin 4 votes
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TheUnderRated 01-31-04 03:40 PM

and potent clearly wins this/.....hardhitter you had a couple ok metas but you all in all really came pretty simplistic......not really any hard punches.....fucked up structure....there really was just no quotables to your verse at all.....you might wanna hit up the whackness emergency center.....Potent you started out kinda weak but you picked it up in the middle and then you ended kinda weak again....in a battle vs. a person wil a lil bit more experinec you can't fall off like that peace................

SaM sKILLeT 01-31-04 04:44 PM

iight, Potent had harder punches. Hardhitter's shit was just wack.... Promotator?? come on.... Both need elevation, but Potent took this one based on his punches. Played stuff, but whatever.

Vote - Potent

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom

Potent 01-31-04 05:52 PM

Uppin 4 votes
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Potent 01-31-04 07:16 PM

Uppin 4 votes
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PROOF 01-31-04 08:27 PM

i think you both need to work on multi syllable rhyming, but potent takes it.

HellSpawn666 01-31-04 08:32 PM

vote on this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111229

da-one 01-31-04 08:42 PM

yo i give this to pot personally his flow was just hotta
hardhitters was straight but it just wasn't good enough
pots punch lines were better too so that helped him
and he had vocab not enough but he had some
and you know vocab is important in battling

~RaPiDfIrE~ 01-31-04 10:29 PM

potent took it...

punches weren't that great but they were there...the new york line was cold tho...I like that...the rest was just average...you ripped him tho...

hardhitter...work on ur rhyming first..then work on puches that aren't played..."got more illness than a hospital" that's prolly the oldest punch ever...nobody in the year 2004 should use that unless they're joking...

vote- Potent

btw Potent u forgot to poll vote in my battle....so go back n do that if u will..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=107780&page=2

Ambitious 02-01-04 03:19 PM

potent wins this easily....punches wiped the floor with hardhitter.....struct was ok.....from both potent horridly better tho.......flow was off for hard hitter a little......
overall potent killed it.................i cant explain ne more dont take fuckin votes away

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom

ak-mixa 02-03-04 05:26 PM

da battle wasn't really Potent's best work but overall was decent. Dis battle most be old cause da typing is newbish ........... hard hitter was really whack and not to good and his punches were more like lunged attempts.........hard hitter i hope u change your name to soft hitter with lines and punches like dat. I read hard hitter's lines and i was wondering how's he gonna get dat name when he hit's soft. Potent was at least worthy enough to earn his keep in dis heated battle. I honestly didn't know he could drop punchlines and metaphors dat good with such ease. da better and hard hitter verse lyrically came from i would say is potent in every categorey. Potent and hard hitter need to stop putting da // at da end of their lines and keep elevating, but especially hard hitter.

Vote=Potent
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111414


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