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CarsonJet -v- FairInHeight
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aight yo i'm checking in
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FairInHeight...
What the Fah?...Fair.. your strait pathetic Your a waste of credits,Some one call a Paramedic... Yeh I said it...Fairy, Your days are number'd Low in fahrenheit even witta verse dats sun'burn'd... You can spit them retarded sig riddle's all day, Da fuck I care, I aint got nuttin gainst Gays I flo wit hetero's jus like homo's they all the same 99% aint got game,But that's OK... Only dynasty's soldiers is left to blame Congrat's tho...U made me key up a whole 5 minutes... Same amount of time that this gon take u to the Clinique |
he says he jet, thinks his body's darkened, theres no such thing as black johnny carson/
tries being tactical and rocket launchin, but the problem's the rocket's launched from bostom/ so you're straight out the boondocks eh, well messin wit t.o. that's just upid-stay/ well say anything, all that you can say, still you cheat the rap game for quadroople a's/ he plays heh ya still he's an outer-cast, won't get applause teaching infants how to clap / tried makin words rhyme, n rewound em fast, cuz u can't sound a rap, if you pound on glass/ so why'd you challenge me, i be the realest, hes totally fake yo hes just cheese wiz/ neglected in chatroom's an ebay reject, the only t-dot mc you beat's named t-west/ (t-west is his first challenger ever who's from toronto) why you battlin me, lowerin your pride states, i 'm called FairInHeight, ur votes inclined mate/ you best just give up get your vibes, straight a kid name jet just got merked by a flyweight/ |
i meant to say decline at the end sorry uppin
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first off, fair change ur structure. no spaces in between bars. breakdown:
punches - jet: urs were better than fair, easily said... flow - jet: went all together, nice job, fairs went off... multis - jet: fair didnt have any... personals - tie: both had mad personals... structure - jet: easily won, change ur structure... nice job jet and fair, but carson took this one... vote - carsonjetx2 return da favor: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111066 |
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1. Fake Personal's (t-west one) 2. 20 lines 4 lines in each bar 3. I don't care tho.....lol |
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carsonjetX2
you had a nice compact verse, with good punches in thier, wordplay was nice, an some good multies combined with a few personals! best bar Quote:
Fairnheight struture was off, you seemed to be goin for more multies than punches, they hardly hit, some attempts at wordplay! no quoteables!! vote carson better verse, harder hitting punches, a easy win plz drop an honest vote on that http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111180 |
punches cj: Da fuck I care, I aint got nuttin gainst Gays
I flo wit hetero's jus like homo's they all the same metas cj: What the Fah?...Fair.. your strait pathetic Your a waste of credits,Some one call a Paramedic.. (kinda) paersonals cj: Yeh I said it...Fairy, Your days are number'd Low in fahrenheit even witta verse dats sun'burn'd... peep mine please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110386 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom |
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I have to drop this to Carson. He had his shit together. I would vote if I could.
Carson you gave your view on mine, but you didn't vote. holla back. |
Carson...ur verse flowed nicely...but some of the rhymes were really weak..but then again u prolly didn't spend much time on it...
Fair In Height...all you needed was like..2 good punches in that verse and a better structure and you would have it dude....ur rhymes are good, n ur vocab is decent..but you just gotta fix some of ur shit...ur structure is horrible too.. vote- Carson Jet http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=107780&page=2 ^ battle with Village Pimp..needs votes.. |
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Yo I vote CarsonJet cuz
punchlines were way better than Fair flow: Carson cuz he got it going on so vote carson |
i really liked the flow fairenhiet went with. they upid-stay was very creative. the only thing i needed here was better punches and a personal.
carson these two bars won the battle Yeh I said it...Fairy, Your days are number'd Low in fahrenheit even witta verse dats sun'burn'd... I flo wit hetero's jus like homo's they all the same 99% aint got game,But that's OK... Only dynasty's soldiers is left to blame original get big ppoints for playing on his name. carson lacked a good open and farenheit used the carson thing. he says he jet, thinks his body's darkened, theres no such thing as black johnny carson/ that was nice i'm gone change my vote this goes to farenheit i liked his flow better ti reminds me of some of the chopped music you here down here in texas |
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Originality - Carson.. as always it was keyed for ur opponent
Punches - Carson.. consistant.. nice build up each time.. Fair's were all kinda stand-alone Personals - Carson.. did his research as usual.. Fair was kinda general Flow - Carson.. easy to follow.. Fair was mad choppy Structure - Carson.. jus look at it VoTe = Carson Drop a vote on either of these plz: vs wogzta http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111096 vs W1CKED http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111341 ...1 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom |
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carson carson carson carson carson carson carson carson carson carson carson carson
^^thats my vote in case you dont know...Fairinheight your structure was off and i dont like the way you section off your shit like that..seems to me that, that style just degrades the reader and makes me not wanna read or give a damn about ur punches ..now carson..it was an ok verse..i've seen you do better...much better..still you won. v/Carson |
What the Fah?...Fair.. your strait pathetic
Your a waste of credits,Some one call a Paramedic... pretty good rhymescene i`d say 7/10 Yeh I said it...Fairy, Your days are number'd Low in fahrenheit even witta verse dats sun'burn'd... pretty good punchline here but 7/10 You can spit them retarded sig riddle's all day, Da fuck I care, I aint got nuttin gainst Gays witty shit right there,but 7/10 I flo wit hetero's jus like homo's they all the same 99% aint got game,But that's OK... this has nothing to do wit dissing him but it may just have,but 5/10 Only dynasty's soldiers is left to blame Congrat's tho...U made me key up a whole 5 minutes... Same amount of time that this gon take u to the Clinique pretty good kinda blah but 7/10 he says he jet, thinks his body's darkened, theres no such thing as black johnny carson/ tries being tactical and rocket launchin, but the problem's the rocket's launched from bostom/ kinda blah,stay logical in a sense you went off bounds but 6/10 so you're straight out the boondocks eh, well messin wit t.o. that's just upid-stay/ well say anything, all that you can say, still you cheat the rap game for quadroople a's/ all ya lines are streched so it effects ya flow but 5/10 he plays heh ya still he's an outer-cast, won't get applause teaching infants how to clap / tried makin words rhyme, n rewound em fast, cuz u can't sound a rap, if you pound on glass/ whack personal and it was poorly directed homie but 5/10 so why'd you challenge me, i be the realest, hes totally fake yo hes just cheese wiz/ neglected in chatroom's an ebay reject, the only t-dot mc you beat's named t-west/ was blah but was ok in a sense but 6/10 why you battlin me, lowerin your pride states, i 'm called FairInHeight, ur votes inclined mate/ you best just give up get your vibes, straight a kid name jet just got merked by a flyweight/ nah homie dont feed off his verse dogg kinda blah but 6/10 carson,33 score ratio fairin,28 score ratio vote carson yo carson hit my battle with an honest vote like i did cuz i took the time you should too,thanks man,peace out every one |
Full Break Down :
Carsons Verse, What the Fah?...Fair.. your strait pathetic Your a waste of credits,Some one call a Paramedic... ( Nice opener , good flow , solid 8/10 ) Yeh I said it...Fairy, Your days are number'd Low in fahrenheit even witta verse dats sun'burn'd... ( Best line of Verse , Personal and Clever 10/10 ) You can spit them retarded sig riddle's all day, Da fuck I care, I aint got nuttin gainst Gays ( Once again , short and sweet - good flow 8/10 ) I flo wit hetero's jus like homo's they all the same 99% aint got game,But that's OK... ( nice followup to last line , I've seen better , but its still tight 7.5/10 ) Only dynasty's soldiers is left to blame Congrat's tho...U made me key up a whole 5 minutes... Same amount of time that this gon take u to the Clinique ( Don't know why you made it 11 lines , when you called 10 , so I'll critique the last 2 Digging minutes/clinique - clever shit , good flow , Nice closer 8.5/10 Total 42/50 84 % FairInHeights Verse : he says he jet, thinks his body's darkened, theres no such thing as black johnny carson/ tries being tactical and rocket launchin, but the problem's the rocket's launched from bostom/ ( Like the opener , a bit personal (name rip) , but seems a little stretched , need to splice some shit to get a better flow and feel ) 7/10 so you're straight out the boondocks eh, well messin wit t.o. that's just upid-stay/ well say anything, all that you can say, still you cheat the rap game for quadroople a's/ ( Once again Dude , too many words , you can say the same shit with less and more effectively, sometimes we think the more we write the better it is , and sometimes its true , but the longer you stretch your lines , the less it flows , I have this same problem myself sometimes 7/10 he plays heh ya still he's an outer-cast, won't get applause teaching infants how to clap / tried makin words rhyme, n rewound em fast, cuz u can't sound a rap, if you pound on glass/ ( I like the 2nd verse , Nice Style , pretty ill , but the transition from the 1st line isn't completely there , otherwise this could be a 9 or 10 ) 8.5 /10 so why'd you challenge me, i be the realest, hes totally fake yo hes just cheese wiz/ neglected in chatroom's an ebay reject, the only t-dot mc you beat's named t-west/ (t-west is his first challenger ever who's from toronto) ( Carson desputes the Twest personal , gonna have to take his word on that , However CHeeze wiz is kinda of cheesy but still funny , Flows off though 7/10 ) why you battlin me, lowerin your pride states, i 'm called FairInHeight, ur votes inclined mate/ you best just give up get your vibes, straight a kid name jet just got merked by a flyweight/ ( I realize your from the UK , but I'd try to stay away from using "Mate" sounds a little gay especially if people don't know whre you hail from , but even though this verse is stretched too , it flows better than the rest 7.5/10 Total 36.5 /50 73% Good Battle from both Playas , Carson won it fair and square in my book putting together a tight verse , that flowed great and contained a little bit of everything FH - man , you got mad ideas ,you just need to work on your structure and how you illustrate them , great potential for future battling , Props to Both Peace CrazyE Tryand Hit this with an honest vote , whoever .... ( and you'll get a Full Breakdown too , I call it the way I see it though , no favas ) http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112213 |
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