PROOF [0-0] vs T West [4-3]
 

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blind spits
who gives a fuk who votes, as long as its honest and fair


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Proof, you are opening too many battles
can only have 2 at a time, i aint gonna say nuthin but some 1 else might
and why in the hell r u battlin t-west
kids just dont kno west!

Now everybody listen as I tell you the story of the creation
As I present the PROOF of why rap is experiencing declination
Kids are dumb nowadays, pop rap songs are what they dwell
This guy is living PROOF......come on.........he likes D12
Now I could rap all day, about taking out herbs like you
But then KFC would accuse me of taking their spices too
You don't belong on the rap scene, its your location you forget
He's from Denver...
...Shouldn't he be at sum restaurant then...serving nuggets
This guy aint Go-in nowhere, since we ain't playin karts
I dont even need a finisher,,,since I won this from the start

Aiyyo, hows the weather up in the canada ehh?/
ur fuckin childish, u still beleive in santa today/
goin up against me, T West verse PROOF/
its fuckin one sided, like DMX vs Snoop/
halladay is torontos one and only hope/
thats funny though, we had the same coach/
yeah its hard to take but he went to school in arvada/
if you dont believe me, i wont get mad atcha/
but look up his coaches name, i bet its coach capra/
u must be high, to battle me, u didnt think id attack ya/
siitin there in ur seat usin some visine/
cause u cant read the computer, ur tryin to keep ur eyes clean/

sorry, i didnt know i could only have 2 at a time, but all my other battles are ended

T-west takes dis battle.PROOF ok verse but plz evaluate.t-west one on humour,structureand puches.keep it up both of u.]
V/T-west
PLZ RETURN DA FAVA: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...923#post1146923

uppin

uppin for sum more votes on dis shit..................

yo ite i give this to t-west beacause,
he had alot better all round verse...his punches were,
witty and it worked cus his flow was nice so most bars,
hit with consistent punches...nice structure man,
proof poor atempt at punches man.
your werdings all roung, read some elavated battles,
also dnt put those"/" on the end of your punches its newbeish,
wor on strucutre and punches man,

...................................pz

ok, more votes though guys, i wanna battle again and i need this battle closed

uppin............................................. .

My vote goes to West for consistency and not falling off from beginning to end like Proof did. Nice structure man, kept your punches compact and they hit well. Proof, lose the / after your lines and try to think of more complex disses, you need to use wit rather than sheer force in battles. Telling him he still believes in Santa Clause is not a good punch. For that matter, i wouldn't reccomend telling him that he still believes in the Easter Bunny either. You have to hit where it hurts, his pic, his avy, his existence altogether. Can't waste your time about which fictional holiday characters he believes in. Good luck elevating, vote goes to West.

lol, my bad, but at least u tell me what i did wrong unlike, proof, u sucked, never battle again

PROOF...what u lacked is hard hitting punchlines. Come original with stuff we'd never think of. Like play off my name or sumthing. A weak example...

Im battlin t-west, his name admits why I shouldn't try
because he is truly is The Wackest Emcee Since Time

^See that...creative shit, bringing wordplay off my name to a whole new level. Good luck with future battles.

uppin.............................

that actually does help, i would never think to do that, even though in 8 mile proof says

Punish Rabbit Or Obsolete Futer or PROOF

can a mod please close this and my battle with set-ignorance

T west
Now everybody listen as I tell you the story of the creation
As I present the PROOF of why rap is experiencing declination
Hmm ok personal I guess 4/10
Kids are dumb nowadays, pop rap songs are what they dwell
This guy is living PROOF......come on.........he likes D12
Takin the proof thing a little far & not a strong punch 3/10
Now I could rap all day, about taking out herbs like you
But then KFC would accuse me of taking their spices too
KFC is played dont reall get the spices part but ok 3/10
You don't belong on the rap scene, its your location you forget
He's from Denver...
...Shouldn't he be at sum restaurant then...serving nuggets
No rhyme? an weak 3/10
This guy aint Go-in nowhere, since we ain't playin karts
I dont even need a finisher,,,since I won this from the start
Played but decent 5/10
TOTAL: 18/50

Proof

Aiyyo, hows the weather up in the canada ehh?/
ur fuckin childish, u still beleive in santa today/
Weak 1/10
goin up against me, T West verse PROOF/
its fuckin one sided, like DMX vs Snoop/
Weak 2/10
halladay is torontos one and only hope/
thats funny though, we had the same coach/
Weak 1/10
yeah its hard to take but he went to school in arvada/
if you dont believe me, i wont get mad atcha/
Weak .5/10
but look up his coaches name, i bet its coach capra/
u must be high, to battle me, u didnt think id attack ya/
Weak 2/10
siitin there in ur seat usin some visine/
cause u cant read the computer, ur tryin to keep ur eyes clean/
WACK -1/10
TOTAL: 5.5/50

Weak battle but west gets it cause he attempted to throw punches

u dont get it, i really do go to the same school halladay went to, he went to arvada west, his coach was capra, and i guess its my fualt, becuase im the only one who knows what im talking about

Add a (*) beside verses like that and explain them at the end. It would have helped alot

ok, i just gotta practice, i need to battle newbs, or justs weaker emcee's

meh..this battle wasn't that great
both need to elevate...T-west
you had good concepts for ya punches
Horribly worded though..ya wordplay was good
Liked tha nuggets/KFC...umm
Proof..you had really basic rhymes...
Your wordplay wasn't there
You kinda went of tha subject of battling during ya verse
tha coach thing...wasn't feeling it
dmx vs snoop...wasn't feeling it

v/ Twest

uppin for final vote please.......................

uppin for final vote please.......................

My vote would have to go to T-west: Wordplay a little better...flows looked to be more fluid
Proof: That fictional character punch was kinda lame and whats up with dmx vs. snoop? Just need to work on more fluidity in ya rhymes better punches..

i voted on yours now vote on mine:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111495

uppin for final vote please.......................

yo i would vote for t-west, i hated that santa line, but it was a perfect rhyme and sounds good, anyway, i cant vote so it doesnt really matter, but overall T West takes it, and can anybody hit up my battle with Malice or Puertoricanelly

im uppin this 4 u t west, someone vote 4 him, he needs one more vote and he wins

Did some one actually say u still believe in santa as a punch?
are u seriouse?.....

My vote- T West
He had punches'...actuall punches...not ^^that...
Also Better flo....Proof was all over the place...
Personal's....even tho repetative...West had the abundance of such.....

Thats what wins battle's
Punches.Flo.Personals.....
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