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Daffer22 02-01-04 02:05 PM

Daffer22 vs Baz187
 
20lines
2verses
explain votes
you spit 1st

Daffer22 02-01-04 02:37 PM

Come on baz where you at

Daffer22 02-01-04 02:43 PM

Ok I go 1st

Daffer22 02-01-04 02:45 PM

Yo I'm that nigga who is called violent
After I crushed you, you'll be silent
You're that cocksucker Baz187, hihi
Go fuck a gayman who's infected with HIV
Y'all cant rap like me
So you better start to bow and get on your knees
Or else you gonna live in sorrow watchin' the BBC
Yo bitch I dont mean to be rude
But there's sumthin about your attitude
That's really startin to piss me off, dude
Go fuck yourself cuz after this you'll be leavin
I'm gonna choke you until you stop breathin
And I'm not the only one who's cheatin'
Well nigga just shut the fuck up
Consider urself lucky that you don't get locked up
Wasn't it you who started to jerk of infront of that fat girl?
You think you can do everything you want in this world?
Well think again you stupid fool
I bet you get all straight A's in High school
But that doesn't mean you have to start rappin like Ja Rule

Baz187 02-01-04 02:49 PM

sorry lost connection
 
Ja rule u a fool nigga, u soft as shit,
u wanna battle me dawg, u'll just get fucked up,
cumin up in this bitch, thinkin u tough,
wannabe g, u aint enough,
to test the flow of a g like me,
u aint shit wen you battlin this v.i.p,
B A to the Z thats me,
all i hear wen u holla is F A G, Dawg see,
listen to my flow it's sick,
am takin it easy on u daffer,
cos u a newbie dick,
after this they'll call me a hit, n u shit,
hittin ur chest like anthrax,
nuttin to stop it,
i bust from the uk,
where we spit like camels,
ALL DAY,
beleive me when i holla cos,
am new to this shit,
i still bust to your face like a boxing mitt.

Daffer22 02-01-04 02:52 PM

Come on 'nigga' you can do way better than that
That was a pussy verse, it even made me laugh
Yo am I startin to make you mad?
Well by the way I'm fuckin glad
That you didn't 'tried' to win this rap
Cuz the audience has already begun to clap
Go back home were you belong
Cuz to be recognised in here you have to be strong
But hey dont get wrong
I'm not sayin you're a little bit too young
Are you really gay? I guess you gonna say no
Cuz you don't want the whole world to know
That you're really a fuckin homo
Do you want me to rap in slomo
Cuz I'm not quite sure if you can follow
Yo who the fuck is next in row?
Go find another dick to blow
And I hope your mouths big enough to swallow
This battle is not gonna be close
Cuz, well, yo, just read the votes

Baz187 02-01-04 03:00 PM

Dawg unless u blind there ain't votes,
no clappin n those fuckin gay lines are wrote,
you need to fuckin practice on your freeestyles,
or you might cum up missin like snoop doggs police files, haha
in your lines i see no shit,
just a dick ridin nigga like a gay porno flick,
bitch you u the ja i'm the pac,
so sit the fuck back,
b4 i really start to spit and u'll c who's whack,
i don't need you to talk in slomo,
i no ur a homo,
dawg like i said u just got fucked up,
i dint want it to be like this,
but you made me do it,
i dint want to hurt,
but i had to do it,
i pop like my AK
u feel the shells hittin you,
now u finished ok.

Daffer22 02-01-04 03:02 PM

Yo that was so recycled but hey ppl vote

Baz187 02-01-04 03:03 PM

Yo dawg yo brought it but good luck lets get ppl to vote

gizzard 02-01-04 03:05 PM

hey peeps we need some vote in gizzard vrs hellspawn if u can't vote than just say who u think one thx

Baz187 02-01-04 03:05 PM

Buster the only thing i recycled was ur ass i was bein kind newbie

Daffer22 02-01-04 03:06 PM

yeah rite come on ppl vote

Baz187 02-01-04 03:18 PM

shit dawg wheres these votes u where talkin bout

Daffer22 02-01-04 03:18 PM

Votes please

Daffer22 02-01-04 03:24 PM

uppin votes.......WAKE UP

PROOF 02-01-04 03:31 PM

yall know i would vote if i could, but i cant, i will be able to seen, but i liked daffer in this one, but this battle was really close, hey daffer, come hit up my battle with set-ignorance

Daffer22 02-02-04 02:11 AM

1-0 for me

MichaelCorleone 02-02-04 02:24 AM

i see this and think of a battle better suited for a gangsta rap battle. remember we are battling lyrically with written words what you say and how you descrive it go a long way. but i liked them the punches and personals were played but i'll slide it to daffer because it seems like he set the pace for the war.

MichaelCorleone 02-02-04 02:30 AM

vote on my battles

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111118

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111488

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111132

Daffer22 02-02-04 02:43 AM

Yo baz that makes it 2-0 for me......

Daffer22 02-02-04 11:03 AM

more votes pleaze..........

Daffer22 02-02-04 11:25 AM

upppiiiin votessssss

Baz187 02-02-04 11:34 AM

u in here Daffer

Daffer22 02-02-04 11:43 AM

yeah

Daffer22 02-02-04 12:03 PM

come on ppl

Blackgod 02-02-04 12:41 PM

.................................battle........... .....................was.......................... .........................wack


thats y no1s votin................................both cats need MADD ELEVATION.............are u guyss in kindergarten? im not hatin..........but i never seen low-level spits like this b4................................if any1 gets the vote its daffer...........he somewhat........had better disses........bit more experience

battle was still ass
vote = daff

hit these battles up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111580
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110017

Daffer22 02-02-04 12:55 PM

aight 3-0

Daffer22 02-02-04 01:26 PM

upin votes............................................. ............

Daffer22 02-02-04 02:04 PM

2 more votes plz................

Daffer22 02-02-04 02:34 PM

Come on ppl vote, vote so this can be over with

Daffer22 02-02-04 02:46 PM

more votes ppl

Daffer22 02-02-04 03:48 PM

boring people vote 3-0 for daffer22 so.................

Daffer22 02-03-04 10:49 AM

upppiiiin votes

bonez1000 02-03-04 11:05 AM

battle was horrible, but daffer had atleast structure, baz had short lines shit that didnt make sense...this isnt the ghetto no one on heres hard and gonna beat anyone up...hurt them with words not by saying im gonna shoot u

*OUT*

bonez1000 02-03-04 11:06 AM

forogt 2 vote - daffer took this easily.... and you know thats the truth...he had better everything. keep elevating kids got potential!

Daffer22 02-03-04 11:20 AM

yo 4-0 for me one more vote plz

Daffer22 02-03-04 11:35 AM

uuupiiinnn votesssssss

Daffer22 02-03-04 12:01 PM

Come on ppll wake up only need 1 vote soooooo VOTEEEEEE (plz)

Daffer22 02-03-04 12:24 PM

Uuuppppiiinnnggg Votttteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesssssssssss

VanIllabymidnite 02-03-04 02:46 PM

Here's how I see it.

Flow=Tie, Daffer, you need to work on your flow a bit, it would make your over all verse better. Baz, I'm gona say this again, you need to work on your flow, it'll really improve your verse.

Punches=Daffer, you get this one but just barely, you should both work on your punches, Baz, your getting better at directing your punches but keep working at it.

Personals=Tie, didn't really see anything in the way of personals in either verse. Both of you work on this, personals are a very good tool in battling, a verse with good personals is a very fun verse to read.

Vocab=Daffer, you got this one by the biggest margin. Both of you should work on your vocab, I always say that good vocab is a very good thing to have in order to expand your verses.

Over all=Daffer, you need to work on your flow and your personals and your vocab, if you work on these three areas I think you will improve a great deal.
Baz, once again I don't mean anything by this trying to help you out, but you need to really work on the flow of your verse, your punches need to hit harder, and you need to throw some good personals in there. And again, if you improve your vocab it would help a lot, keep improving both of you and you'll both get there.

Vote=Daffer just barely but you pulled it out.


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