Se7eN v.s Menolin
 

ok dawg

Rules
10 lines
I spit first
no d/r, no crew, no bullshit votes
I drop within 40 minutes, you drop within 40 minutes

check in

i'll drop a.s.a.p
check win.............

ooo yey no feeding and I am dropping in juss a little while

(verse)
Ayo, check it

I’ll twist ya shit in the middle, so his skills look a little to little
It’s good to see, how in his sig he brags he beat a newb named Art Official
1000 plus posts, still seems his skill and talent is a complete joke
This guys so dumb, he sniffs a whole letter of anthranx and bleeds coke
Hard to figure out, he claims he’s elevated and his rep is bigger now
He could be a gun slinger and still not know how the pulling of trigger sounds
I’ll be a giver, hit ya so hard that your bitch ass craps your liver
This guy couldn’t be criminal, if his ass was related to jack-the-ripper
So new, so unused, make your style look a little mangled and loose
You done “digged your own grave”, while my rhymes strangle ya like a noose

waiting on your verse Menolin, make ya shit good, mine was ok, now drop Menolin

you couldn't key up tight raps, if your keyboard came in spandex,
your ryhmes come.... then colapse... like eager men giving bad sex,
you dis-respecting 'pac', placing upon him your wack status,
your sigs say untold truth,
....................should be "is thier any RB crew that aint raped us"
i would catch you............ but i don't really like to backtrack*,
im rippin the shit out of this kids, like little kids with party packs,
yo can tell no one likes you... when opportunity knocks you out,
i hit you with mathmatics.... flip, twist and fuck you about,
my lines decieve your vision....... shit, call me your eye-con(icon)
if you spat of the 'right' of your mouth, your lines still be wrong,


*that scrolling thing in his sig!!

Battle goes to Menolin, even if some of his concepts were kind of played. He still found a way to word them in the right way to where everything is a punch. No real filler in that verse, everything used to attack his opponent. I liked the part about opportunity knocking him out, thought that was nice. Se7en, you're concepts were also kind of played but didn't benefit from the wording and punching skills that Menolin thrived in. You could see how those 1000 plus posts of Menolin's belong there in that this was a very experienced vs. not experienced kind of battle. As far as punches, personals, flow, and even structure which both were alright with goes, Menolin gets my vote.
Vote-Menolin

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Hmm...close battle..thought 007 would of come harder
But oh well..umm.7 you had nice punches..basuc and played
But..they hard..um had a couple personals..
flow was lil off.. and ya structure was aight
had tha punches

menolin..you came real weak here dawg
I was suprized at this..especially tha spandex line
good structure and flow.. but ya punches lacked
And 7 came aight with punches so

v/ 7

both you hit this up..I took mine time for this shit thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=111324&page=1

[QUOTE=Meters]Battle goes to Menolin, even if some of his concepts were kind of played. He still found a way to word them in the right way to where everything is a punch. No real filler in that verse, everything used to attack his opponent. I liked the part about opportunity knocking him out, thought that was nice. Se7en, you're concepts were also kind of played but didn't benefit from the wording and punching skills that Menolin thrived in. You could see how those 1000 plus posts of Menolin's belong there in that this was a very experienced vs. not experienced kind of battle. As far as punches, personals, flow, and even structure which both were alright with goes, Menolin gets my vote.
Vote-Menolin

^^im gonna have to agree with this one..basically i felt that Menolin just took this battle in a way..sorta just made it...

v/menolin

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Punches: Se7en, I thought Menolin's punches were pretty played. Punches were close, but I thought se7en was more creative.
Wordplay: Men, the Icon wordplay was the only one in both verses, so Men takes this category.
Multis: Se7en, some lines had multis, but be more consistent next time
Personals: Tie, both had a good amount of personals.
Opener: se7en takes this with a good personal
Closer: Men takes this with a nice wordplay

Vote - Se7en

7 edged Men out by being more creative with his punches, very close battle though.

He could be a gun slinger and still not know how the pulling of trigger sounds
7's best line

if you spat of the 'right' of your mouth, your lines still be wrong
Men's best line

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punches: seven-melion ur was a bit played and didnt hit hard..7 urz was hard hitting and was original

flow: menolin- seven u had really streched lines that messed up ur flow...mel ur was straight so places u kinda fell off

Opener: Seven-7 u opened it up wit a good personal...menolin u opener up wit a recycled played line

Closer: menoline-menoline u came pretty god ended in a goood punch..7 u was igth but that grave shit is played


Personals: menoline-7 had more and used them well...but menoline's ws more stunning and was better disses

V/Menoine

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Breakdown

Se7en's Verse,
I’ll twist ya shit in the middle, so his skills look a little to little
It’s good to see, how in his sig he brags he beat a newb named Art Official
WAck Opener

1000 plus posts, still seems his skill and talent is a complete joke
This guys so dumb, he sniffs a whole letter of anthranx and bleeds coke
Nice Wordplay

Hard to figure out, he claims he’s elevated and his rep is bigger now
He could be a gun slinger and still not know how the pulling of trigger sounds
Ok LInes

I’ll be a giver, hit ya so hard that your bitch ass craps your liver
This guy couldn’t be criminal, if his ass was related to jack-the-ripper
Played

So new, so unused, make your style look a little mangled and loose
You done “digged your own grave”, while my rhymes strangle ya like a noose
Decent CLoser


Menolin's Verse,
you couldn't key up tight raps, if your keyboard came in spandex,
your ryhmes come.... then colapse... like eager men giving bad sex,
Nice Opener

you dis-respecting 'pac', placing upon him your wack status,
your sigs say untold truth,
....................should be "is thier any RB crew that aint raped us"
Stretched and Wack

i would catch you............ but i don't really like to backtrack*,
im rippin the shit out of this kids, like little kids with party packs,
Blah

yo can tell no one likes you... when opportunity knocks you out,
i hit you with mathmatics.... flip, twist and fuck you about,
Wack

my lines decieve your vision....... shit, call me your eye-con(icon)
if you spat of the 'right' of your mouth, your lines still be wrong,
Nice Closer

My vote goes to Menolin. Se7en, your verse was very simple. You didn't have any punchlines or creativity, but your flow and wordplay was nice. Menolin's verse was a lil better, he came wit harder punches which i see as the bread winner.


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nice battle se7en, still could go either way,
you elevated a lot recently!!!

Shut up..moron.

Obviously this was somewhat close..
But no doubt Menolin takes this.
Creativity in punches, aswell as personal facts..which makes for the best punches.
Where well presented in Menolin's verse.
Where as in Seven's they werent there. at all.
Seven had some good lines.. not bad...especially for a Dynasty Soldier.
But Menolin was just better point blank.
Some potential quotables...not really a enjoyable battle to read though..
Slightly boring & a bunch of old concepts..
But vote goes to Menolin

Se7en had a real good rhymescheme, and a few decent punches..but most of his stuff was just kinda hard disses....the line about "he's so dumb he sniffs a letter of anthrax and bleeds coke.." I wasn't really feelin that too much...seemed like u just needed somethin to rhyme....flow was kinda off too due to ur long bars...

Menolin had a better flow..vocab was about even..rhymes were also kinda even..punchlines definately go to Menolin tho...he came hard from the begining to the end..I liked the 2nd line..about eager sex or w/e..lol pretty creative...

vote- Menolin...

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