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Wise Ways |vs| Telekinetic
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..Aight yo Telekinetic..
I make you extinct..kinda like flags that were Confederit Jacked ya MC(mastercard)..basically I'm taking ya credit ..Introduced you to death..you met it.. and shook hands You a Herb..& my intentions to roast you..like cook plans T..my winds enter ya ear..so my spits just blow ya mind U ain't Telekinetic..I'll silence ya brain..Tele's justa mime Non-intelligent.. MC can't compare with smarts, cuz u'll never be sqaured Even with gentle hands I handle u..& still you get teared ..Acting hard..trying to discuss this..but you can't kill me .Charged with wack..even poetic justice found you guilty Can't touch mine..squeezed my fucking lines.. .....................................And still couldn't bust rhymes Ain't that funny..Koed ya ass.. ........................without using a muthafucking punchline ...no herb votes or anything like that Umm you can't change anything about ya sif,custom title, avy..etc |
Wisdom has never graced your presence or enlightened wise ways
This guys claims he's hit wits end, but in what..............an Escalade? No way this guys style is first-class damn you aint even good quality If all the first-rate contenders gathered together you'd sit alone solemnly I stay bombin he, or him whatever you want to call it "a crock of shit" Stir your best rhymes that you got in a pot... and that's what you'll get Just quit a couple years an acquire some skill not more dope on the streets I manipulate the ABC's to murder emcees with much ease now rest in peace You speak about wisdom under ya name but ya ignorant the equal of the rest If wack was a crime confess there'd be a sequel to........ "you are under arrest" Without a gun an a vest I slaughter an kill its time for you to father your will Cause while I assassinate the beat.........you got nothin more than time to kill |
Good battle wise............
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yo the battle was kinda whack b......both ya some faukin herbs............................................. .................................................. .............................................
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Breakdown Wise's Verse, ..Aight yo Telekinetic.. I make you extinct..kinda like flags that were Confederit Jacked ya MC(mastercard)..basically I'm taking ya credit Stretched and Kinda Wack ..Introduced you to death..you met it.. and shook hands You a Herb..& my intentions to roast you..like cook plans Nice Wordplay T..my winds enter ya ear..so my spits just blow ya mind U ain't Telekinetic..I'll silence ya brain..Tele's justa mime Pretty Nice Non-intelligent.. MC can't compare with smarts, cuz u'll never be sqaured Even with gentle hands I handle u..& still you get teared Umm, Wack ..Acting hard..trying to discuss this..but you can't kill me .Charged with wack..even poetic justice found you guilty Nice Can't touch mine..squeezed my fucking lines.. .....................................And still couldn't bust rhymes Ain't that funny..Koed ya ass.. ........................without using a muthafucking punchline Closer Could've Been better T's Verse, Wisdom has never graced your presence or enlightened wise ways This guys claims he's hit wits end, but in what..............an Escalade? Wack No way this guys style is first-class damn you aint even good quality If all the first-rate contenders gathered together you'd sit alone solemnly Nice Lines I stay bombin he, or him whatever you want to call it "a crock of shit" Stir your best rhymes that you got in a pot... and that's what you'll get Decent Just quit a couple years an acquire some skill not more dope on the streets I manipulate the ABC's to murder emcees with much ease now rest in peace Nice Wordplay You speak about wisdom under ya name but ya ignorant the equal of the rest If wack was a crime confess there'd be a sequel to........ "you are under arrest" Nice Without a gun an a vest I slaughter an kill its time for you to father your will Cause while I assassinate the beat.........you got nothin more than time to kill OK Closer Vote: Telekinetic This was a pretty even battle, both emcees had pretty decent verses. I gave telekinetic the vote because of his nice wordplay, multis, and his ok punchlines. Wise Ways, you should've came a little harder. REturn the Favor, We need POLL VOTES http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111116 |
^lmao!...I know..my lines were real stretched...lol
Umm..like i said..don't vote if you a herb And don't vote if you don't get personals/punches ~1~ |
Seen better from the both of you...
Anyways, lets start this off. Who am I going to vote for? Wise Ways. Why am I going to? Wittier and better punches (barely). Telekintic...you had some decent stuff in there but your verse fell off a lot. "Just quit a couple years an acquire some skill not more dope on the streets I manipulate the ABC's to murder emcees with much ease now rest in peace" ^where did that come from may I ask? To continue my breakdown, I also award Wise Ways with structure and flow. More even bars...smoother read. Tele, some of your lines were stretched and I would have to keep changing the pace throughout your read. Further breakdown is not required. v/ - Wise Ways Both return the favour and please vote on my battles. Thank You. |
Dont sway the votes or anything Wise lol
Jus jokin I give a fuck if I win or lose Although winnings nice all in all it dont matter |
liked this battle........but definitley could have been better from both!.....
wise ways: perfect structure....great flow....hard hitting punches....nice personals....metas and word play were great.......a very witty Verse.... tele: stretched bars...a little bit ...good flow...good punches...personals were *attempted* but decent try....metas were nice....wordplay...eh.... i'm going wit WW cuz his punches hit harder and were more direct...... best lines .... ww - the closer was nasty.... tele : i guess the closer.....too concentrated on multies....and rhyming....should have thwon better punches...that is why u lost |
Yea i know that finisher is good. It was when i used a version of it a few weeks ago lol
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Yea i know that finisher is good. It was when i used my version of it a few weeks ago lol
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wise ways..u had the better punches and rhymescheme in this..flow was on point too...vocab was above average....
telekinetic..ur vocab was better....flow wasn't as good tho cuz of stretched bars...punches were mediocre...rhymes were decent.... overall it seems like Wise Ways put more into his verse..I would drop a longer vote but when I voted a second ago I had a lot and all of it got erased before I could post it somehow.... vote-Wise Ways can u vote on this shit? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...442#post1148442 |
My bars were strechted because I use big words. Three of my words would make one of his lines "contenders gathered together". Peoples starting to give me a little respect tho. Thats all I want anyway, my skill will grow. Ive only been here for about a month. Thanks for voting
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Wise's Verse,
..Aight yo Telekinetic.. I make you extinct..kinda like flags that were Confederit Jacked ya MC(mastercard)..basically I'm taking ya credit Not That Good ..Introduced you to death..you met it.. and shook hands You a Herb..& my intentions to roast you..like cook plans Pretty Good Wordplay T..my winds enter ya ear..so my spits just blow ya mind U ain't Telekinetic..I'll silence ya brain..Tele's justa mime Pretty Nice Non-intelligent.. MC can't compare with smarts, cuz u'll never be sqaured Even with gentle hands I handle u..& still you get teared Not Good At ALL ..Acting hard..trying to discuss this..but you can't kill me .Charged with wack..even poetic justice found you guilty Thats More Like It Can't touch mine..squeezed my fucking lines.. .....................................And still couldn't bust rhymes Ain't that funny..Koed ya ass.. ........................without using a muthafucking punchline Nice Flow And nice bar T's Verse, Wisdom has never graced your presence or enlightened wise ways This guys claims he's hit wits end, but in what..............an Escalade? Wack No way this guys style is first-class damn you aint even good quality If all the first-rate contenders gathered together you'd sit alone solemnly Nice DiSs/Lines I stay bombin he, or him whatever you want to call it "a crock of shit" Stir your best rhymes that you got in a pot... and that's what you'll get It Was Decent Just quit a couple years an acquire some skill not more dope on the streets I manipulate the ABC's to murder emcees with much ease now rest in peace Nice Wordplay You speak about wisdom under ya name but ya ignorant the equal of the rest If wack was a crime confess there'd be a sequel to........ "you are under arrest" Nice Without a gun an a vest I slaughter an kill its time for you to father your will Cause while I assassinate the beat.........you got nothin more than time to kill Prolly Yo Best Vote: Telekinetic Telekentic You Had Better Punches,Ok Multis Wordplay And Punchlines.... Return Favor http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110046 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110974 Poll Votes Only , |
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I use big words too... Like "tha, ya, a, be"..lol Quote:
^way to admit you recylced that line ;) Explains tha no personal lol..... |
Damn A good battle indeed.
Punches- Both had some humerous hard hittin punches, But Tele Jus brought more to the table, Came harder..the crock of shit line and the escalade line stuck out the most... Personals- Both had some descent personals, I think wise put more creativity in to his personals,Intraduced u to death shit was kinda played but at the same time it was nice...wise def. got personals Flow- Both had ight flows, wise kinda fucked his up at the end of his shit..so that gave tele the upper hand and made his flow better.... Structure-Both had ok structures, Both sqaubled at the end of there shit...tie wordplay- Tele Used more basic words, kinda played,wise put more creativity into his shit, ok use of meta's.....Meek decsion but I'm gonna have to say wise got this Wow this battle was so close its not even funny...But i think Tele Just brought more humerous shit to the table, though some of it was played it still hit harder then wise's shit, Wise had some good punches but some were worded uncorrectly,couldve been worded better....I'm gonna have to go w/ tele just becuase his punches were much more humerous and he had more of a solid flow... V/ Telekinetic |
My bad bout the free post forgot to add this in there
Please Honestly Vote on this Battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111140 |
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I was talking about how played your last line was. I used a version of it a few weeks ago. |
Originality - Both
Punches - Wise.. felt Tele had too much in one line so kinda lost its force Personals - Both.. not as many as expected tho Flow - Wise.. Tele was vergin on stretched.. easier to follow Wise Structure - Wise.. always like it Opener - Tele.. preferred it Closer - Tele.. witty.. dope.. clever.. etc VoTe = Wise Ways Tele opened an closed nice but i couldnt really catch on to a flow cos the lines were kinda stretched.. right idea but too many words.. props tho.. Wise was consistant an the structure made for a smooth flow.. well done both.. nice battle. Drop a vote on either of these plz: vs wogzta http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111096 vs W1CKED http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111341 ...1 |
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V/ Wise ways , due harder punches & a more consistant, .. other cat came a lil avarage in my opinion , .. but was ok , .. Wise ways wins due punches..
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