flas vs sylicon
 

10-15 lines
you spit first
spit witin 25 mins afta check in
no hate/dr/crew or shit votes

Checking in
Im up for this battle
i can take you on anytime
ill spit first gimme a couple of mins a

Yo Yo Listen Up Yall
This guy smarts rapping about being sexy
But all this time im behind him holding two buses flexing.
Ive got this mega phone im saying: 1 2 3 testing
what are you a neckrophliac
your 35 shes 13, get off her back.
When your thinking about your battle tacticks im ready to attack
with my fists and hand
and kamakarzi head bands
i will arive in a gangster van
and you will be behinds on a push bike trying to catch a tan
so this is the end i hope you learnt your lessin
you dont need brain to best ya
Respect SylicoN

shit man i forgot about this battle...here is my check in

i'll pick you up and puncture a hole through you like a voodoo doll
blood jus falls downstream and gushs out as if it were Niagra Falls
I spit bars dat Golden Corral and Shoney's haven't even probably carried
shoveling dirt on your computer it's your final resting place to get buried
your pad and pen nigga go ahead jus set it on da ground
even though i'm on my computer I'm still gonna shut it down
my lyrics have you running around in circles like a dog chasing it's tail
home boi in yo mind keep thinking i'm a test to ace and you gonna fail
your girl told me riding your dick was like a bike with training wheels
erectile dysfunction must really make it "hard" for sensation to feel
I'm attackin-clicks, slap-ya-bitch, and smash-ya-quick
bash-n-hit, wouldn't make the cut if ya packed-a-switch
Ya lack-the-wits, my voice boomin like I'm clappin-clips

since your shit was wack i made my shit as wack as i could.....uppin for votes (1)

yea every1 that view this VOTE...........yea flash nice shit ill be lucky to beat that

you think so? i was jus messin around...but yeah if you serious thanks...

dont vote on this battle unless you can poll vote...if you wanna give us your opnions about the battle then jus pm us

sylicon, you just need to elevate more, you came to simplistic with your drop, no real flow or complex punches and personals.....flash just outclassed you on this one, he had some decent punches better structure and flow...flash you need to use more personals as well though...all in all flash took this with a better all around verse but keep elevating you two..you'll both get there.

yea man thanks for the advice ill work on my personals a
RespecT

fo show....i woulda thrown some personals in but didnt have time....sylicon...if you want a rematch sometime jus hit me up....ill do it again

Maybe in a couple of days ok i got a couple of battle going now

yeah its koo when eva you wanna do it...hit me up when you ready

ok sweet as then

wont be to long a!

SylicoN

WE NEED MORE VOTES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...323#post1155323

flash nice drop....he got this shit for sure...his shit rhymes, multies at the end, and more complex....I shouldnt even need to explain this one, but flash man you should try harder no matter how weak ur opponents are

flash you need to step up your lyrics dawg. step up your lyrics and punches dawg. you had weak multiples and your structure sucked.
overall performance: 5/10

SylicoN no the best verse but you had better punches and multiples. still needs work.nice structure and flow.
overall performance:7/10

you both need to step up your lyrics and word play:

SylicoN best lines: "i will arive in a gangster van
and you will be behinds on a push bike trying to catch a tan"

flash best lines: "your girl told me riding your dick was like a bike with training wheels
erectile dysfunction must really make it "hard" for sensation to feel"

both had aight verses but SylicoN took this battle because of lyrics and punches.

vote=SylicoN

uppin for more votes

damn son flash took this one easily it was a onesided battle ..sylicon you really need to elevate alot... but since your Banned i dont see that happening....

flash
your verse was pretty tight and it was an easy win for you..multies were pretty tight...punchlines were good... personals were also good and they were hitten hard...
overall you took this battel with ezz....

sylicon
damn son your verse was wack and you really need to elevate alot....
but to bad your banned ..anyways almost everything you didnt have ...multies were off... punchlines were week ..personals were also weak...overall you really need to elevate alot..

vote=flash