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flash vs Diverse
10-15 lines
spit 30mins afta check in no hate/ crew/ dr votes |
here's my check in and your loss.......
Leave this kid exposed quick, the double meaning of flash Tired of smoking stupid herbs, now i'm lookin for some hash Tried to be creative but there's No Limit to his wackness Couldn't ever beat me, even if I helped this kid practice Pick this fool apart, i.e., scavenger habits of a vulture trying to cure this newb disease, examined him in a culture Your still new to the board? virgin bout to lose his cherry I make my words intoxicating, you just leak bloody mary I took it easy on him, but it's over before he even begins Guess we need newbs to stick around, so we can all up our wins used personals from sig/profile/whatever...if you don't get something...don't vote..simple. |
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your battle
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iight im dun shit is kinda week....had to rush it....
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yo do i have enough posts on this name to vote?
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yo dis my check in.......
this guy steals other peoples wordz as if he were a ~material larcinist~// Flash, i should be called Inferno cause i verbally burn you like a ~serial arsinist//1~ My wordplay and punches are ~infinetly numerous~// punches? bitch in ur last battle you had none and that shit was still ~pathetically humerous~//2 ur spits and complexity is too gross so i'll have to start ~interveanin~// step back Verse and take a lesson from this legendary ~verbal demon~//3 No matter how many times this guy posts, hes always ~still ~a~ busta~// dreadin the vote from the beginning so nows hes cumin with a ~fillabusta~//4(thing in politics to dealy a vote) theze wordz are the only thing Diverse needs to have the ground ~touchin ur knees~// u couldnt post somethin decent if u had eminem ~punchin ur keys~//5 |
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uppin for votes....1
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Flash's was only like six lines long. If six lines is all you can come up with, you don't deserve to win. Diverse definitely took this one with his vulture meta and his practice line. I can't vote yet, but i would vote for Diverse.
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Vote for this battle: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111280
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uppin............................................. .................................................. ....
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back to the top...................................
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Yo diverse wins easily cuz flash only posted 6 lines with a bad flow hardly any punchlines no personals so my vote goes out to Diverse
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to the top with you, need more words to meet the limit
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uppin.............................................
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diverse
Leave this kid exposed quick, the double meaning of flash Tired of smoking stupid herbs, now i'm lookin for some hash kinda weak, an a lil played 4/10 Tried to be creative but there's No Limit to his wackness Couldn't ever beat me, even if I helped this kid practice not too bad, wording let you down, 6/10 Pick this fool apart, i.e., scavenger habits of a vulture trying to cure this newb disease, examined him in a culture not too bad either, 6/10 Your still new to the board? virgin bout to lose his cherry I make my words intoxicating, you just leak bloody mary bad wording let you dwon, nice concept, 6/10 I took it easy on him, but it's over before he even begins Guess we need newbs to stick around, so we can all up our wins lol, pretty funny, made me laugh, but average again, 6/10 overall 28/50 flash this guy steals other peoples wordz as if he were a ~material larcinist~// Flash, i should be called Inferno cause i verbally burn you like a ~serial arsinist//1~ stretched, ok vocab, 5/10 My wordplay and punches are ~infinetly numerous~// punches? bitch in ur last battle you had none and that shit was still ~pathetically humerous~//2 bad wording, flow was off, 4/10 ur spits and complexity is too gross so i'll have to start ~interveanin~// step back Verse and take a lesson from this legendary ~verbal demon~//3 filler, 4/10 No matter how many times this guy posts, hes always ~still ~a~ busta~// dreadin the vote from the beginning so nows hes cumin with a ~fillabusta~//4(thing in politics to dealy a vote) WTF? use more common language lost me here, 2/10 theze wordz are the only thing Diverse needs to have the ground ~touchin ur knees~// u couldnt post somethin decent if u had eminem ~punchin ur keys~//5 last line i have used te concept, an its pretty played, 4/10 overall 19/50 my vote diverse plz drop an honest vote on this http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111834 |
well my vote goes ta flah, and considering he had 10 lines if ya spread em out, DINNIES
he had better rhyme scheme than the other dude...yo, diverse, try rhyming 2 words at the end of ya line...it will up ya verse a lot.. even though diverse had some good concepts, most of em are played... flash, ya had a nice verse, different style to what ya battled me with but it is ight.. V...Flash |
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lmfao at Jen-aral for saying my style is played and that i don't have a good rhyme scheme....kids are becoming so stupid these days
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uppin this shit.............................................. .................
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Lmao... All except menolin in here dont know how to vote... Silly newbs...
iight... Flow - Diverse takes this... His verse was consistantly flowing... He had a full block of writing... Unlike flash... Dont split up your bars... Punches - Diverse takes this... His were just more complex... flash's were too basic... Dont do all this ~'"!"£$£!$£%£$% bullshit... Personals - Diverse takes this also... flash didnt have any really... Vocab - *sighs, this is getting boring now* Diverse takes this aswell... Much more complex array of words used on his verse... flash's was too basic to compete... Structure - Diverse takes this... He had a nice soid block of writing... flash... once again... Dont seperate your bars... Overall... v/ Diverse Hit this up... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112267 Thanks... Pz... |
uppin............................................. .....
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vote - diverse...
1. fillabusta....is speakin non-stop...not allowing a person to step in... ^^not a political tacit... ok.... now as far as punches go- Diverse -had much stronger ones..with better delivery and a personal aspect as well- flo?...im a have to go wit- Diverse -again...simply worked it better... This was a merkin, Flash stick wit less not the best- thats advice -1 |
damn, only one more vote until this battle is finished off...c'mon people i want to get more battles goin, don't sleep.
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first of all good job to both of you..mostly to diverse....
wordplay-diverse didn't have a whole lot of it, but what there was did make his verse more effective than flashes....flash I saw what you were trying to do..just keep practicin'/ vocab-flash you edged out just above diverse...for most of your verse,,well until the whole ending where you started using words no one has seen before..diverse kept it sort of simple, but atleast kept it consistent and relevant to the battle../ personals-diverse used a lot of flashes own profile to tear him down,....I don't think flash had any in his verse at all. punches-diverse used a couple played punches, then he used some sub-par punches..he kept it simple with those...flash had the same problem..but he had a worse problem with the amount of filler he used.... flow-flashes verse was flowing pretty good until the thid line..then they all became too long, his structure was a big point loser also, he needs to pick a line length and stick with it...diverse had a good flow and his structure was a little more professional looking... VOTE--diverse |
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