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flash |vs| Jen-Aral
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u spit first spit 25mins afta check in no hate/dr/crew votes |
iight kid you spit first...check in den do ur shit
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iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiimmmmmmm checkin..
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iight so your alset wit the rules an shit rite
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cause if not you only got like 5 mins left tah spit ur shit
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yo.... fuck Jen-aral dawg.... i want a battle, u down???
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As the president of rap yu can serve the wack offence...
When i attack my platoon backs off so yu can have revenge... I wont kill ya...Cause like Flintones we in a concrete jungle... Yu put on a solid front...But..I know that ure really solomly humble... Yu can curse, attack whatever my front lines wont let ya past... Yur bongage and g-string fetish helps me rip the leather out ya ass... I head butt walls cause my structure is solid in that way... Ive fucked ya bodily fluids up cause yu suck and are infact gay... In the call out i said an hour to post back..So whats 25... Look at tha rules for ya wack ass battle all 20 guys... This is extravagent in an imagintaive ground... I am the maximum in this contaminated round... |
get it posted...
And yo M-Sixteen get the battle set up if ya wanna go some... |
yo man you gonna spit?
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iight im checkin in fogot about that shit....
im given u no props, given u 100 percent disrespect// ill take shots, bullets from my tech get stuck in ya neck// ill sqeeze 5 in ya jersey// so ull be looken like Jason Kidd from New Jersey// Look at the Postion ya in, It’s like you Fort is empty// u do More than Tempt me, ammo? Of course theres Plenty// I’m Vicous I close sets, ambitious to Hold Tec’s// Kill u Overnight you’ll be sleepin wit fishes like Ko-tex// In da street, Discreet I dispose threats, I beat ya whole bet// How u drop a Duece expectin to deafeat my Whole Deck// Fuck u bru, Make ya Best Decsend, Let em Rest wit Ten// Ya Breath’ll End, I Leave Backs Wet Like u be Mexican// |
but yeah M-sixteen ill battle you also
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yo jen-arel...even though you took tolong i dun care i jus wanna get the votes......
uppin for votes......1 |
I can't vote i don't av e nuff posts but i think this was definatley close.
Flows- Both tight although i like this Flash line 'How u drop a Duece expectin to deafeat my Whole Deck// Also this line was dope 'I wont kill ya...Cause like Flintones we in a concrete jungle... Yu put on a solid front...But..I know that ure really solomly humble...' But my votes gotta go to............................................... Flash |
Man i took about 3 or 4 extra minitues to post...Whatever...
Uppin it 1-0 |
votes............................................. .........
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people sleep more than bats on this site...Votes come on!
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somone pleez vote on this....its pretty damn frustrating
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hell yeah...people wake up and vote on this shit...uppin
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my vote is flash b/c he had the only real use of punches......this battle okay, you both could have dropped a lot harder...work on fixing your structures, and make your verses flow nicer...flash takes it with better wordplay, punches and creativity, jen...you just came to basic..look at some elevated and elite battles to help you out....peace.
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whateverr yu say man...^*the good MC**cough*
2-0...keep goin |
yo man i would listen tah diverse...he knows what hes talking about...take his advise you be up in the rankins no time
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i only joined this site cause my school banned rapmusic.com...the 1 single reason
this one will probably be banned soon aswell.. i dont think i need his advice. |
^^^wack mc.....no **cough** whatsoever...don't talk shit, i'll merk you in battle, and if i suck so bad why is my record 23-6 huh? fuckin herb...
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cause ya so dickriden ya fuckin dicks gettin sore....bitch
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listen to this fuckin pathetic bitch talk....battle then...see what's up
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Jen aral wins this in my eyes...he had a nice voab that he used effectively...he punched solidly even though he had a few sex lines..they were creative and they hit hard...He sustained his verse throughout except for the last line..it was a weak closer...Flash was cool too..he had an agressive flow but he lacked a lot of the basics..his wordplay was really limited..his multi's were forced and he lacked wit altogether...I gotta give my vote to Jen Aral..He had the punchlines and the basics down..structure multi's meta's ....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112093 |
2-1................................................. .......
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its only 1-1...the otha kid didnt poll vote
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As the president of rap yu can serve the wack offence...
When i attack my platoon backs off so yu can have revenge... weak opener I wont kill ya...Cause like Flintones we in a concrete jungle... Yu put on a solid front...But..I know that ure really solomly humble... whack! Yu can curse, attack whatever my front lines wont let ya past... Yur bongage and g-string fetish helps me rip the leather out ya ass... ehh ok I head butt walls cause my structure is solid in that way... Ive fucked ya bodily fluids up cause yu suck and are infact gay... played In the call out i said an hour to post back..So whats 25... Look at tha rules for ya wack ass battle all 20 guys... ok This is extravagent in an imagintaive ground... I am the maximum in this contaminated round... weak im given u no props, given u 100 percent disrespect// ill take shots, bullets from my tech get stuck in ya neck// take out the //!! ill sqeeze 5 in ya jersey// so ull be looken like Jason Kidd from New Jersey// weak Look at the Postion ya in, It’s like you Fort is empty// u do More than Tempt me, ammo? Of course theres Plenty// whackness I’m Vicous I close sets, ambitious to Hold Tec’s// Kill u Overnight you’ll be sleepin wit fishes like Ko-tex// ehh ok I suppose In da street, Discreet I dispose threats, I beat ya whole bet// How u drop a Duece expectin to deafeat my Whole Deck// ok Fuck u bru, Make ya Best Decsend, Let em Rest wit Ten// Ya Breath’ll End, I Leave Backs Wet Like u be Mexican// lol nice Jen check out the whackness emergency cenetr dayg for useful battle tips. Flash one this battle. he had better punches in his verse. Both had played lines, but Jen's verse was almost all played lines and filler. Both of yall need to up your creativity and be more original. Vote-Flash Please take the time to drop an honest vote here. I took the time for yall. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112337 |
Yea, first off.. jen, listen to diverse.. i read his advice and it's right on. Besides, I think a little of you actually respects that cause u didn't try too quick to take him up on his battle offer. hah. Jen I'll admit, u did have some alright stuff in ur verse. some of it I kinda liked. you're punches were just ok, personals ok, nothing special. I liked your 3rd bar the most. flash.. ur punches were better, they were more personal and direct.. i liked your creativity alot more.. thats one thing i'll give you. u have nice flow.. and ur closer was tight. I think u put up a better post against me though. Still got this...
vote- flash |
yo thanks for the votes people...and camrok...i know the battle between the 2 of us i came mad hard but it was a bunch of bullshit that i got dq'ed buts its coo
uppinnnnn |
ok, ill start off with saying, this wasnt a very strong battle, both lacked in consistancy, with the punches... and thats what battling's about mainly.... but outta the 2 flash took the punches, just..... but his verse was also more creative and better thought out... the opener and closer were stronger too..... all in all ive gotta go with flash on this....vote=flash... both need to work on hit'n tho..... but keep at it....
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Bad battle......
overall both had weak punches, horrible meti4's....flo all over the place, And abolutly no personals what so ever... What is there to talk about here then?.... Structure- Jen (flash wasnt as consistant, Jen was a lil bit better) ^^sad thats what i base this whole battle on... vote- jen Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded |
uppppin this shit for the win
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look overall i think that flash had this battle by far...he had better vocab and punches...i wasnt really feelin ur verse anyway jeneral...so i think that ur have some talent and that u need to elevate...but you also have to take into account that flash has an alias but thats not his fault...thats urs for accepting...oh well
v/flash |
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