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M-Sixteen vs M.Jae
10 lines minimum
no dick ridin' own material lets go kid |
yea manz, drop when tready ill drop asap
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ok look, i aint ask for a war but fuck it,
now you're here, somebody grab me a mic and a sick bucket cos this niggaz makin me ILL u gotta b miseducated like lauryn hill to be thinkin that you gettin degrees, u aint hot, u really wanna spit son? then get on your knees cos i aint gotta spit a gay jibe u did it yorself namin your own ass after Mary J Blige or was it Micheal Jackson? i aint gotta lie, either way u gettin a slice of the male action i put every ounce of game in the mic, somebody told u u had a way with words so u came on the site? well i'mma put it straight Mary who else u know that can spti hot flows in the month of february? |
This kid talks shit like toilets, he thinks the net's like a street... Tear u'r knee cap till u'r foot kicks ya heart.. & u finally can step to the beat Like hoe's love to swallow, this bitch like punches he 'consumes'.. Cuttin this herb' if this bitch was fukkin hanging from his roots like planting lumes this kids ill, when skydiving naked from london bridges.. This fuckin d/r herb thinks he's gangsta, what? u gonna shoot me wit ink cartridges!? He cant even count i sad lets do ten..he dropped 16?! homo there aint no u & me! Damn u see this fag breaking more cups than that bitch dolly parton's puberty Son u are done, u have been sonned.. |
m16....
ur name is of a gun that constantly fucks up. and that lines up greatly with how u rhyme u r like a big horrible rhyme. no punchlines go read something in legends.... not to be mean but just try to elevate as much as possible. vote- jae, he had constant punches and structure flow was greater. ...i good grammer. |
hahah u faggot, u thought i'd keep it lyrical
read the first post bitch, 10 lines MINIMAL! thats how i know u struggle to fit in when u went into ur microsoft word and got a written! copied it, and pasted nigga face it, ur styles like boxing day turkey- wasted what u want to settle for? an out and out clash-or a play on metaphors? i came to set a score wit ur (not so) hard lyrics u had to try and resort to dropping "ink cartridges"? tell the truth, u got a couple more tries.... try and drop 16, u might fit in a couple more lies nigga |
^What the hell u talking about?..lol, u ,lost.. =) .. it happens...
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LMFAO u dropped a second verse?.. Herbivore...1st verse counts u fag.............
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dont ell me ur fearin' a second round... u won the first vote dammit, come again. i wanna c if u r a fluke or the truth.
an who u callin fag, pussy? |
Yo drtop ur verse in a new tread , we battle a second round than ok .. first let this get closed, .. ok ???.............second round coming up after this one.....agree u can paste ur second verse in a new tread but after this is closed........
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lmao @ sixteen droppin 2 verses hahaha!! u get an E for effort on that one lol. he did extra credit lol. this aint middle school dawg this is rapbattles... which kinda reminds me of middle school tho :confused:
anyway... jae definitely took this all around... even with the extra verse. sixteen's shit was way too basic. ur punches were basic and played. atleast jae's was original. lol vote - jae lol wow... 2 verses hehe |
k dawg, take it as read, this one's one 2 learn from, first battle an all that. fck pastin the new verse, a freestyles a freestyle, cant take what i done said and spit it again.
u got it kid |
Vote - M-sixteen..
Just to be an asshole.. =) Eat my shit.. Plus I don't want him to feel too bad.. He needs at least one vote!! Vote removed, no proper voting. -Eddy |
aiyyo man, fuck that, vote properly, bee. its all good.
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v/ Jae
He had better punches, flow and vocab.....you were also more creative and come a lot harder than m-sixteen sixteen....your lines were played (gay jokes dont make an impact anymore). Your structure was bad and overall you need to elevate....keep battlin and you'll get there |
Thanx man , .. Inspire gfy :p, ...
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v/ jae
it was an overall better verse 16 was oretty shit...no scheme no punches,... weak shit jae u had a couple good punches, not bad Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Cprogress |
Than people... upperrrrrr for the closing vote!!!!!!!............
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wow... a T.K.O mad props to M-Jae, lol i look 4ward 2 round 2 man...
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m jae kinda murdered him right here,
he had harder hitting punches, agaisnt a verse with hardly any. he had better wordplay against a verse with hardly any!! m jae hads everthing that m sixteen didn't. vote-m jae for having a battle verse!! |
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