Blackgod VS Baz187
 

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check in homie

BlackGod....... hahaha........yo....
My style is so sick, you'll wish god was white,
motherfucka, u ain't even up to this fight,
your name is blackgod,
but i heard u like blackrod,
yeah thats D I C K, im cumin with my AK,
so hide ur face, cos your a disgrace,
even tryin to test a g like me, u'll c,
im a mother fuckin V I P,
so D I E, u aint no g,
u a cock suckin bitch, with H I V,

drop homie

I'll knock your ass down in a fight when we meet
Have him keep "hittin da ground"...like he be "fightin the street"
Inspectin your anatomy after receivin my punches
All they gon find is "twisted joints" like cats lightin up dutches
Don't get it? den you prolly too dumb to notice...
Cuz this fights like a blackman for president, y'aint on da vote list
I got challenges waitin....so dont drive my patience
cudnt get "a-ward" for "sick lines" if you's "in queue wit hospital patients"

yaaaawn im not even trying.............but lemme finish it off

I only needed 2 bars 2 beat this midget.../
But iz like I got a "fetish for mutiny" cuz I like to go "overboard wit it"/

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yo this is easy VOTE BLACKGOD, way better punchlines, Baz187 all you can do is spell oyur words but that doesn't mean your good, opener Black cuz beginnin a verse wit yo yo sucks...... ending blackgod cuz
I only needed 2 bars 2 beat this midget.../
But iz like I got a "fetish for mutiny" cuz I like to go "overboard wit it"/
was goodddddd

Come on vote on this
www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111593

uppin
 

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Black god took this easy, Baz dont even seem to know how to battle lol
Flow- god
Punches- god
strucutre- god
metas- god

VOTE - BLACKGOD

VOTE on this.....http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111683

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Yo
 

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damn blackgod destroyed this kid someone call an ambulance baz187 is hurt

black just struck harder

This is how I see this one.

Flow=God, he had much better structure on this one. Baz, you still need some work on your structure, it'll help your flow out a lot.

Punches=God, he had more punches that hit a bit harder. Baz, work on doing direct punches, you need to have punches that hit a bit harder.

Personals=Baz, I didn't see any real personals in Gods verse and Baz at least attempted to use personals, both of you still need to work on personals, good personals are very affective.

Vocab=God, you both need to work on this, good vocab can really help out. Baz you used some pretty basic vocab, work on your vocab.

Over all=God, you had some okay punches, and a nice flow, but you need to work on the other aspects of your battles. Keep at it and you should get there.
Baz, your structure was a bit better than it was before, but it still could use some work, you should also work on your punches, personals even though you did use some, and your vocab, but keep working at it and you should get there.

Vote=God

God killed it..i don't have to say too much he had better flow better vocab better punches better structure...Vote God......hit these battles up
Please vote on them
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111747
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111608

Ight
 

Uppin number 3

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I can't vote, because I don't have enough posts but, here's some feedback anyways.

Flow- Blackgod definitly was better in this one. His shit flowed alot better than Bas's.
Blas, your flow was alright, but your structure could use some work.

Punches/Personals- Again Blackgod was better. He had more punches that hit alot
harder than Bas. Bas, your punches were way too simple. Try to
be more creative .Both need to try and use more personals. Bas
had the one personal where he flipped Black's name, but both need
to include more.

Vocab- Blackgod blew him out da' water in this category. Both though, could use
improvement. Bas, your shit was very basic. Try elevating.

Creativity- Blackgod again took it. His punches were alot more creative. Better use of
vocab and concepts. Bas, your punches, were soft, way too simple, and
were played.Not even close in this aspect.

Overall - Blackgod, in my mind, was the clear winner. His punches hit harder, vocab
was better, and showed alot more creativity. Bas187, You should try and
develop your vocab and be a more creative with your punches. Your flow
was alright, but structure needs work. Both should try and use more personals
to become more effective. My vote goes to: Blackgod.

Punches: Black, had some pretty dope punches, Baz, you take the cup for worst verse ever. Seriously. Not to sound like Simon, but you fucking suck. Learn English, there is no hope of elevation from you. The hitting the street line was pretty dope.
Wordplay: Neither, wasn't any wordplay.
Multis: Black used a few multi syllables, maybe 2's and 3's, good, nothing from Baz.
Personals: Neither, neither had any personals, nobody knows nobody.
Opener: Black, actual verse from Black.
Closer: Black, again, a real verse.

Baz, a punch is a comparison, compare two different things, try using a quote or phrase you mmight make something original.

Vote - Blackgod

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