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Rappin'Master vs Daffer22
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no bitin no dickridin no h8 no recyclin I spit 1st |
ok wit da rulz. CHECKIN' IN >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
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Yo I spit ill, so challengin' me is gonna get you killed
But still, it's hard for you to chill Cuz my homies r out there to make u thrill I'm gonna burry you alive, so you betta decide where you gonna hide cuz I'm not gonna be kind I bet you doing just fine, layin your ass down wit your face under sunshine But then suddenly an explosion, you flying round in the air You've been hit wit a sensation but does anybody care? Your bitch cryin with her hands in her hair, sayin it isn't fair But i'm just wondering what does she wear? This is just borin battlin against Rappin' Masta Bet he sounds like real disasta Haven't got the skills to write fasta You're bout to be hit with bullets comin from my baretta Or be prepared to be stabbed by my stiletta I really think this masta shud blow a dick He's gay after all, cuz he raps like shit Don't have to think about givin me a lick Cuz i blow you away, just gives me a kick This battle is over, dude your verse is gonna have to be sick |
Your turn
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Come on Master where r u????????? Don't have all day.........
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The world has had enough of Daffer22 finking dat hes the next eminem, hes soundng like a 12 year old girl on heluim,
u try and hit on girls by putting them on a cd, just coz they all reject you, but not me, Ur acne and ur unwanted facial hair, makes u a relation to frankesteins creation, so dis guy is in the D.E.D crew instead, by the time iv finished with you, his crew will definetly be dead, Just like a curtain, u need sum1 to pull yourself together, afta iv ended my verse, ull be scarred forever, This guys an expensive chocolate, hes from belguim, but just like the chocolates, he aint yum, ur new to da business, u got a lot to learn, im closin in on a victory, which way r u gonna turn? |
Come on ppl vote
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uppppinnnngggg vvvvvoooottttteeeessssss.......................... ..
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Wake Up Plz And Get Votin
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ite ....dis battle waz "WAKKK".......both gotta elevate a lot.....but for dis battle.....i wuld have 2 say daffer won.....
sum of masterz shyt waz weak.....didnt make sense and didnt have any flow at all....no rhythm.... clozer waz ill daffer- ur shyt waz sort of like a topical....but ur punches were iight n it sorta made sum sense.....ur structure waz weak n ur flow n' punches were weak...but i think u took dis one for rhyming more and making more sense....none of yall had punches.....work on that...n ya closer waz ill also... punches:.....none...but daffer came a bit harder sense: daffer....hiz verse sorta made sense....rapperz did 2 but it waz weak...no punches or flow flow:.....none..... structure:...rappin master......by a bit......werk on it vote: daffer.....by a bit.... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111358 ^^hit dis up wit ya honest opinion.....thnxx |
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111358
srry 2 freepost...but i took mah time 2 vote on ya battle...now plze hit dis up... |
more votes plzzzzz
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In this battle i say daffer won because his verse made more sense and he had better punches....both of you had somewhat of a flow...structure was a little off but like Killer-Emcee said you both need to elevate, Daffer got my vote but the battle wasn't all that good,u guyz should elevate.
Vote for these battles http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111608 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111747 |
aight 2-0 more votes plz
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it was a pretty weak battle all around... daffer came harder and just simply had better everything. it was still weak. both got potential keep elevating boy!!!!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111751 |
more votes plz............................................... .
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more votes plzzz
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uuupppiiiinnn votes WAKE UP PEOPLE......................
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need more votes people............................
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vote pppl
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upppinggg votessss
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come on ppl
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Come On Wake Uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp...
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dafer^^ u guna get banned 4 uppin 2 many times man.i fink dis was close but rappin'master just takes it beta punches and flow was ok.daffer not bad but needs work.kep it up both of u.
v/rappin'master |
ok id idn't know you could only up 4 5 times so sry
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it's 2-1
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Yo I spit ill, so challengin' me is gonna get you killed
But still, it's hard for you to chill Cuz my homies r out there to make u thrill I'm gonna burry you alive, so you betta decide where you gonna hide cuz I'm not gonna be kind I bet you doing just fine, layin your ass down wit your face under sunshine But then suddenly an explosion, you flying round in the air You've been hit wit a sensation but does anybody care? Your bitch cryin with her hands in her hair, sayin it isn't fair But i'm just wondering what does she wear? This is just borin battlin against Rappin' Masta Bet he sounds like real disasta Haven't got the skills to write fasta You're bout to be hit with bullets comin from my baretta Or be prepared to be stabbed by my stiletta I really think this masta shud blow a dick He's gay after all, cuz he raps like shit Don't have to think about givin me a lick Cuz i blow you away, just gives me a kick This battle is over, dude your verse is gonna have to be sick good verse personals were good coluld have worked on metas though The world has had enough of Daffer22 finking dat hes the next eminem, hes soundng like a 12 year old girl on heluim, u try and hit on girls by putting them on a cd, just coz they all reject you, but not me, Ur acne and ur unwanted facial hair, makes u a relation to frankesteins creation, so dis guy is in the D.E.D crew instead, by the time iv finished with you, his crew will definetly be dead, Just like a curtain, u need sum1 to pull yourself together, afta iv ended my verse, ull be scarred forever, This guys an expensive chocolate, hes from belguim, but just like the chocolates, he aint yum, ur new to da business, u got a lot to learn, im closin in on a victory, which way r u gonna turn? you spit like a newbe not felling this verse overall i gotta go with daf peep the battle in my sig please (bottom one) Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. Your votes = bullshit. You just copied both verses. - Axiom |
no more votes 3-0 KO so I win
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sry but need 2 more votes to win
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thiz battle waz weak
daffer22 had some weak punchez but at least he had flow 'n rhymez in hiz verse... rappin' master, maybe u should try and make some words rhyme... I couldn't find a flow in that bunch of wordz... Daffer22 getz thiz, even though it waz still wack... daffer22, still work on vocabulary though... rappin' master, get another hobby... vote - daffer22 |
thx bro, I work on it...... 3-0 for me
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need 2 more votes (again)
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Yo I spit ill, so challengin' me is gonna get you killed
But still, it's hard for you to chill Cuz my homies r out there to make u thrill pretty weak, multis are useless unless you have a creative punch/personal/meta in there too I'm gonna burry you alive, so you betta decide where you gonna hide cuz I'm not gonna be kind I bet you doing just fine, layin your ass down wit your face under sunshine ehh ok But then suddenly an explosion, you flying round in the air You've been hit wit a sensation but does anybody care? Your bitch cryin with her hands in her hair, sayin it isn't fair But i'm just wondering what does she wear? whack This is just borin battlin against Rappin' Masta Bet he sounds like real disasta Haven't got the skills to write fasta weak You're bout to be hit with bullets comin from my baretta Or be prepared to be stabbed by my stiletta played I really think this masta shud blow a dick He's gay after all, cuz he raps like shit Don't have to think about givin me a lick Cuz i blow you away, just gives me a kick [b]played The world has had enough of Daffer22 finking dat hes the next eminem, hes soundng like a 12 year old girl on heluim, weak, this aint audio, dun throe fake punches, you can't hear what he sounds like u try and hit on girls by putting them on a cd, just coz they all reject you, but not me, callin yaself gay? Whack line Ur acne and ur unwanted facial hair, makes u a relation to frankesteins creation, blah so dis guy is in the D.E.D crew instead, by the time iv finished with you, his crew will definetly be dead, weak Just like a curtain, u need sum1 to pull yourself together, afta iv ended my verse, ull be scarred forever, This guys an expensive chocolate, hes from belguim, but just like the chocolates, he aint yum, ur new to da business, u got a lot to learn, im closin in on a victory, which way r u gonna turn? weak whack crack attack Daffer takes this battle. Both should check out the whackness emergency center for useful battle tips. Daffer, you had a few ok lines. Stay away from all gay/fag/homo etc lines cause they are mad played and worthless in battles nowadays. Rappin try and be more creative in your rhymes. Also try and even out your flow. Vote-Daffer Pleasee return the favor and drop an honest vote here. I took the time for you guys. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112337 Thanks |
1 more vote plz
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1 more vote needed
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Yo I spit ill, so challengin' me is gonna get you killed
But still, it's hard for you to chill not feeling this opener... it isnt much of punch, and doesnt have that good of a libary Cuz my homies r out there to make u thrill I'm gonna burry you alive, so you betta decide more like a filler.. doesnt really hit with a punch. where you gonna hide cuz I'm not gonna be kind I bet you doing just fine, layin your ass down wit your face under sunshine ... see above bars... You really need to focus on punchlines more But then suddenly an explosion, you flying round in the air You've been hit wit a sensation but does anybody care? no, this comes off as FILLER, off subject and not a punch, with no real metaphor/b] Your bitch cryin with her hands in her hair, sayin it isn't fair But i'm just wondering what does she wear? .......[b/] This is just borin battlin against Rappin' Masta Bet he sounds like real disasta weak punch on the follow through Haven't got the skills to write fasta You're bout to be hit with bullets comin from my baretta self boasting and filler shit Or be prepared to be stabbed by my stiletta I really think this masta shud blow a dick weak attemp at a personal He's gay after all, cuz he raps like shit Don't have to think about givin me a lick weak punch... no metaphor your lacking alot of strength Cuz i blow you away, just gives me a kick This battle is over, dude your verse is gonna have to be sick ending is weak.. but its alright.. not much in the way of punching. You really lacked on your punchs, you need to focus on your direction then work on personals and build up your strength.. After that your going to have to work on your metaphors, then build a rhyme scheme. The world has had enough of Daffer22 finking dat hes the next eminem, hes soundng like a 12 year old girl on heluim, weak opening, weak punch, metaphor could have been better u try and hit on girls by putting them on a cd, just coz they all reject you, but not me, sort of works against you.. weak bar i thought Ur acne and ur unwanted facial hair, makes u a relation to frankesteins creation, basic diss.. sort of weak but i like the concept so dis guy is in the D.E.D crew instead, by the time iv finished with you, his crew will definetly be dead, aiight personal.. punch needed a little more strength though Just like a curtain, u need sum1 to pull yourself together, afta iv ended my verse, ull be scarred forever, set was nice.. good metaphor punch was eh... Follow through was filler type ish This guys an expensive chocolate, hes from belguim, but just like the chocolates, he aint yum, i dunno dog.. i like chocolate.. i mean dont you? lol this punch was an alright attemp ur new to da business, u got a lot to learn, im closin in on a victory, which way r u gonna turn? alright follow through.. Not much of an ending, the metaphor was decent over all your punchs were there and they werent, you needed more direction in your verse i thought. I liked a few of your concept and i thought you needed a little bit bettter rhyme scheme.. metaphors were decent.. vote- Rappin' Master I thought he just had better punchs and came off with alot better metaphors.. FLow was on there a little more. |
LoL re tract^^^^ sorry Rappin but i re read them, and never listen to the radio while your slepy and voting.. Lmao, Daffer I retract that vote
Vote- Daffer Sorry man i really skipped over alot of what you had to say OnE |
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