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Feeble Minded 02-02-04 05:52 PM

HW title, Feeble Minded (7-4) vs. Walter Wall (5-1)
 
Check in's due, right now :)
Verses due, Friday - 12 pm Eastern Time.
Read LLL rules. Come dope.

Feeble Minded 02-02-04 05:54 PM

in.

Walter Wall 02-02-04 05:55 PM

Check....

Horud vs. Aus
Av. vs. Bribe
Leth vs. Koalatee

Walter Wall 02-05-04 12:57 AM

Im Kyle’s therapist, and he’s obviously confused
DéjÃ- vu?
Yea I recall the crew…I just can’t remember you
Ask…..
Bribe, cam, mentill, aisle and taktik, ure frequently sonned
Who’s better? Simply Scantron………….all of the above
Always bitch’n and moaning, u wail as much as ure libido

"Sorry Feeble Minded is a moderator/admin and you are not allowed to ignore him or her."

no wonder ure sad, even Vbulletin3 takes shots at your ego!
Don’t shout…….
Just get blotted out similar to permanent marker
You tested me and failed me………...as a tag partner
Asking me bout rhymes and women, here’s my advice…quit
Just because you’ve got pimples doesn’t mean you’re a pimp!
Power trippin mod, A fake, no real estate in which to revel
This battles equipped with balconies…I’m on another level
This isn’t a challenge, just food for thought…Im digest’n ya
Feeble only goes against the grain…during bouts of anorexia
Most dope heads haven’t heard of Pheebs, Im not pretending
It’s not cuz we don’t watch Friends….its cuz u don’t have any
Stay in frontlines and stick with your own kind, go mod newbs
I should of stole your check in…..to get the best of you

Feeble Minded 02-05-04 12:58 AM

you'll get hit in the chin, put in the hospital with pain hidden within,
and await the IV , like a top notch college that you didn't get in ..
its fit to begin, but i already got this fight in the bag,
only reason ur predicted to win, is cuz your the one writing the mag,
im wiping this fag, and all Howard's dickriders cuz i don't feel hype ..
& your the only rb battler, that needs a name change in REAL LIFE ..
i feel quite - astonished that you hide this shit, its a scandal and,
your true alias is 2 % .. you just didn't want to get banned again,
you and Bribe, are the tag team champs you strongly insist ..
& obviously still havent realized that the league no longer exists!
this battle has two losers - walter i dont exclude or pretend,
cuz you lost to me in the tourney, and now your fucking losing again
i abusively bend, out of shape, and torture lesser kids,
& walter puts a thousand dots in his verse & cant form sentences ..
the lesson is, that even kids like walter can own stage,
with Evolve's nuts for Props, and Rb set as his homepage,
you'll leave this fight strangled, with last ounce of might mangled,
& ya named walls cuz i make u & the floor form a right angle ..

Feeble Minded 02-05-04 01:09 AM

i gave walter to edit in another two lines on: Last edited by Walter Wall : Today at 01:06 AM. so word - he was not cheating before someone accuses him.

Walter Wall 02-05-04 01:11 AM

word, I thought we were going 16

but its all good

....now lets get some votes!

Allegory 02-05-04 01:57 AM

Man...this shit is to close to kall....

feeble - your verse was dope as usual....u stayed consistent throughout your whole verse....you had the puches and the wordplay...and a lot of ur shit was funny...i mean real funny...lol..hmm...you had a lot of personals in your verse..which hit hard...and was very affective....overall man...i didn't see anything wrong with your verse...

Walter - your verse was also dope man...props...you had the wordplay...the puches...the personals as well...which was hella funny...lol..im still laughing at a couple of them...you had the creativiness....and you worded everything real good...

Man..this battle is way too close to call guys....

sooooo....ima give this to both of ya'll....TIE....

Props...i dont usually give ties...but ya'll both deserve it in my eyes...

Note * feeble or walter...does Cam's vote count in my battle..since he signed out..?....its kool if it does...just wondering...oh and walter go vote on my battle homie...cause feeble already has...we need more votes...lol...*...

Payce!

Jacent 02-05-04 08:47 AM

V/ Feeble Minded

Wall...i dunno man...i wasn't feeling your verse that much, your opener was probably your best line cuz after that everything else was just played or nahhh, but the closer was ok, i expected some real fire considering this is the heavyweight bout, but overall...an ok verse

Feeble...that opener was iight, mag lines starting to get played, i had that used against me this past week on another site so its just played to me, that banned line was iight, your closer clinched it for me, but i give it to you for the fact that your punches were more direct, i could give a fuck about a flow but your flow was on point here, so Feeble got J's vote

Evolve 02-05-04 09:05 AM

Vote Feebs

This was a pretty good battle man.. At first, i thought Walt had him definately. His verse was dope, punches connected & had some nice personals. But then i read Feebs & he just out did you. He had some witty stuff in there & Overall.. It was better. But respect to both.

B.I.Detained 02-05-04 09:13 AM

Vote/Feebs

Battle was nice from both n ya cud see the respect
coz ya'll came good knowing the other one would
Walters verse was nice n witty n gave those usual chuckles
wot dint go w/ those punches were 'woah'./..very witty
jus not completely hard
Feebs was different in he did have wit but he also
had a few bars that made me feel it....
nice hard punches w/ wit take shit
^^woohoo that rhymed

pz & props
these are the kind of battles that
shud be in wk in wk out

Verbal Kent 02-05-04 09:42 AM

wow... this was highly unexpected...





lotta wordplay n' personals... so... let me do this...


Feebs...

Had I not know WW... alot of that would've been blah... like Jacent said alot was played it's been said... but tis cool... and honestly I can't even pull out a great line... they were all just hittin Walt...


WW...


you had me up until pimp... the shot's at ya ego was nice... I think you figured it'd beat him... *shakes head* nope... You were doin ya thing though... good job... OH yea... that friends line... LMAO... played but a VERY nice twist... the set up was funnier than the punch...

but...


I'll take a nice verse over half a good verse any day...


Vote: Pheebs...

K.Largo 02-05-04 12:19 PM

Febble now u really impress me. i liked =)
walter same to you much better showing from last week.
nice personals full of punches and I think what stood out
the best from both your verses was ...My name.
It's always great to be mentioned. It shows spark to
your verses..lol.. j/k but anyways good read
props to both. but I do have to go with Feeble.
It did seem close but somehow Feeble just pull that extra rope.

V/Feeble

Lirael One 02-05-04 01:50 PM

The 'vb3' line won this, that was the only fresh shit i seen. Nice line.

Vote - Walter

not in league -vote doesnt count. -feebz

Young P 02-05-04 03:57 PM

Feebs takes this in my opinion. He had overall better, more creative punches.

Walter, seen much better from you. No great punches or personals in yours.

Sorry. V/Feebs.

Walter Wall 02-05-04 05:30 PM

Lmao at the fact that Young P and B.I. Detained read the votes and not the verses

anyways, nice verse Kyle

and we both did mention Bribe

B.I.Detained 02-05-04 07:04 PM

lmao...not like that at all
<<always votes accordingly and fairly
dont pick on the newbs walt...

Aisle Phive 02-05-04 08:37 PM

This was the best battle so far in LLL, like I thought.

I don't really feel like going in depth on this, but Feeble won. Walt came good, but Feebs outshined him here. All my reasons have already been stated by previous voters.

DaviD WoRdplay 02-06-04 04:37 PM

I come back to RB to see this? I'm disappointed with this battle... Walter came horrible from what I've seen before and Feeble just didnt put forth that much effort... nonetheless... feeble was more consistant with his punches.... I dont know if this counts since im not in the league but
v/ feeble

Lethargic 02-06-04 04:47 PM

Dammnn. Very close battle. Walter had some really nice lines and dope personals....and so did Feebs. This battle was closer than some of these people were calling it. Gah, I had to read the damn thing twice to determine a winner. Overall though, I felt like Feeble was bringin more harder hitting punches to the table...and his flow was rockin his style pretty nicely to boot. Very good battle guys..

Vote ~ Feeble

NewPort 02-07-04 10:05 AM

v/ Feeble
walter came dope, but feeble came doper
pretty much summed it up.. but feebs just
had harder hitting punches, even tho walt
came really fuckin hard at him.. one of the
best this week had to offer

Feeble Minded 02-08-04 04:06 PM

no, you mean the best .. not one of. :)

SmokaJoka. 02-09-04 02:43 PM

kinda cheap of Feeble to expose walter....even though i already had clues...lol....nice close battle though....here's some quotables....

Quotables:
Quote:
Originally Posted by Walter Wall
Bribe, cam, mentill, aisle and taktik, ure frequently sonned
Who’s better? Simply Scantron………….all of the above
Always bitch’n and moaning, u wail as much as ure libido

"Sorry Feeble Minded is a moderator/admin and you are not allowed to ignore him or her."

no wonder ure sad, even Vbulletin3 takes shots at your ego!
^that for its entirity was nice....good personals and nice punches

Quote:
Originally Posted by Walter Wall
Asking me bout rhymes and women, here’s my advice…quit
Just because you’ve got pimples doesn’t mean you’re a pimp!
^lol...funny....and if the 1st line is true...nice personal

Quote:
Originally Posted by Feeble Minded
you and Bribe, are the tag team champs you strongly insist ..
& obviously still havent realized that the league no longer exists!
^nice personal and 2nd line was dope....lol

Quote:
Originally Posted by Feeble Minded
you'll get hit in the chin, put in the hospital with pain hidden within,
and await the IV , like a top notch college that you didn't get in ..
its fit to begin, but i already got this fight in the bag,
only reason ur predicted to win, is cuz your the one writing the mag,
^once again..nice to its entirity....1st two lines had dope metas.....and the last two was a nice personal and a good punch

Opener - Feeble
Closer - Walter
Punches - Tie
Personals - Feeble
Metas - Feeble

Vote - Feeble.....if Walter would have had more personals than Feeble...this wouldve been really close to judge....but Feeble tossed one in at least every two lines....good battle....

jake3430 02-09-04 04:10 PM

getting someone to battle
 
want to battle someone want someone to step up first time here but i predict to be undefeated someone steo to the mic.

Walter Wall 02-09-04 04:41 PM

^post that in bitchslapped

....you are not to be posting here

Feeble Minded 02-09-04 04:50 PM

lol, word. and im not really exposing him, this was discussed - he was already forgiven for the reason he was banned before, some freeposts i think. ..


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