Aesth Vs ~LyRiCaL-JeZuS~
 

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Names Jezus,but not the dude u know from Sunday school
Only cheek Im turnin in on my ass so u can kiss that one too
Yo, Aesthetic knows he cant win,but he still challenge me
Just so he could brag that he got the chance to battle me
I could get physicly critical and biblicly super lyrical
If u win, YOU should be called Jesus cuz that be a miracle
Yo talent is minimal, so shut yo trap wrap it up and leave rap
Aesthetic eat me? he aint good enuff to drink the water out my kneecap
Wonna be thug, I choke ya out wit yo hollow chain and pendant
Yo ass goin down in a ball of flames like a 9/11 flight attendant
Ray Charles can see ure done, chewed up and spit out like gum
Ima say I merked this "MC" so u can at least pretend to be one

thats 12 hope u dont mind....

Verse:

Gold Album Gospel Artist?? equalz to NOTHING, U from Weak Crew??Ya best member prolly isnt a member//1
And i beat all the others before Christ(B.C.) so bad they dont even remember//2..lol
Why Jesusl do Text?, I'll Cease to Spit 'Vowelz' An let the 'Eyez'-Inspect//3
Coz rest aSSured i got Chrome that'll leave your body count high-in-debt//4
Listen I attack yo cleavage bitch, wit clenched fists, that leave u feverish/5
U from Jerusalem?? Kid I leave u wit 50 men, let them see u wit, a cercumsized penis bitch/6..lol
"Here to save u all" haha...It's a sad unavoidable predictcament, when u think u can win, when u lyrically sensative and impoyd a " finish him", when ultrasonic rhythem hit/7
Wit hollow tips, aimed at yo cerebic, and 50 hits to yo kindeys bitch/8
simply prevents, yo battle rec is weak infants, and the battle events, i re-invent/9
Lyrical Jesus??Ii think u a thief and shit and like fiendish chicks,Like yo mom wit teeny tits, I leave yo faggot gospol singing clique meaningless/ 10


I said 10lines and u broke the rule.......another sad dissappointment anywho........VOTESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

Ure newer but if u wernt ud know that " oh ure jesus from the bible and jeruselam and u aint no god ure gopsel blah blah" is played but its aight lets peeps vote

New or Old homey....i am good when it comes to MErkin..lol Anyhow...VOTESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS UPPUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN NO DR NO HATE NO BS

My Vote goes too Lyrical-Jesus, just thought had better punches...better flow and structure
This shit:
Yo, Aesthetic knows he cant win,but he still challenge me
Just so he could brag that he got the chance to battle me
I could get physicly critical and biblicly super lyrical
If u win, YOU should be called Jesus cuz that be a miracle

ILL ILL ILL!!
and this isn't a d/r vote or ne thing he voted against me in a previous battle.

Iight here's the 411 on this battle

Structure-Goes to Lyrical Jesus, cause Aesthetic was stretched out and his lines were to long

Flow-Lyrical Jesus cause his shit was shorter, easier to read, and juss flowed better

Punches-Tie Both had weak punches, but Lyrical Jesus got this by his punches not being played as much and not having been stretched out

Vocab-Aesth, cause his shit did have better words he rhymed wit, juss couldn't read his lines as well...........

Wordplay-Aesth, cause he did use catchy wordplay juss not able to read lines

Conclusion-Aesth probably would've won if he would've shortened his lines but he didn't and it killed him bad, because it was hard and complicated to read it, so shorten your lines Aesth.......

Vote-Lyrical Jesus

hmmm
 

i'm voting for lyrical only because i had no idea what that other guy was talking about.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom

Uppin for the 1st time.........up up up up up up up up up up.............................................

im a have ta give this to lyrical jesus , his spit was koo cept that he used christ too much. aesthetic yo shit was not koo it was wack after the first line it didnt even start out good soo VOTE = lyrical jesus

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Uppin goddamit!!!!!! 3 more votes cmon cmon uppin uppin uppin uppin up up up up up up...........................

im votin lyrical coz da other gut dnt make any sense.good verse lyrical,keep it up..
v/lyrical

Alot of DR's Up in this.......Ama do a research about the ppl that voted...........


UPPPUNNNNNNNNN

^^^^ Are u for real.......dear god ,jus cant face defeat lol........uppin uppin................................

2-0????????????




^^^Lyrical u ar not stupid i know that but u think that vote would count???????????????.....


And is not about winnin or loosin because they have somethin call fair battle..

Admin or mod...take that vote away plzzz

the secod guy http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...#post1169602won dis 1 4 me but both were good can yall vote on dis please

Another Useless Vote.......^^^^^^ UPPUN for people who know how to vote................................Check punches opener meta wordplay personals....etc....and plzzzzzz read b4 u vote Lyrical with his ARMY of DR's

Yo this was a gud battle
flow: Aest had a gud flow goin on cuz he had better and nicer rhymes than Jezus and i felt that he had a gud thing goin on so
punchlines: aest and jezus both had sum gud punches but I thought aest had sum punches who came harder and were bit better
personals: Jezus had sum nice personals but also did Aesth so this is a tie
structure: I thought that aest had a better structure cuz I felt that his was more fluent to read than Jezus

Tight battle but my votez goes out to Aest

Sorry forgot
 

plz vote on this thx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112900

Jezus only had one good line.....and that was the miracle line.....the rest were old wordplay and soft punches.....Aesthetic at least had nice personals and better wordplay......and much harder punches in my opinion.....

Punches - Aes
Personals - Aes
Wordplay - Aes
Structure - Jezus
Vocab - Aes
Overall - Aes

Vote - Aes, for a better overall verse and more metas......other than that Jezus had weak hits and absolutely shit vocabulary.....

peace

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded

I'm Dope...I Flow Better Than Water
I'd Fuck Your Sister...But I Just Shot Her!

^ Was Doper Than Jesus' Verse. That About Sums That Up.

Aes...Long Ass Lines Fool! Nice Punches And Wordplay...But Those Lines Were Longer Than My.....
......Lets Just Say They Were Long!!

Well,
Vote - Aes
Better Punches, Wordplay, Creativity.

^^ cant vote like that..if you're gonna bitch about unfair votes than report yourself also..

anyway..LJ's verse was decent..not too weak,nice punches..a few personals..multis wasnt great, if there was any,a pretty average and well rounded verse..structure was on point, and there werent too many fillers..I will give it a 7/10

Aest's verse..was also decent..he had some good punches..a few personals..the lil "lol";s after some of the lines was kind of gay in my opinion..multis was about the same as I said for LJ..but only thing I will count against you Aest is Y O U R S T R E T C H E D ass lines..your bars was stretched to shit..and I will cpount that against you and give you a 6/10

Both verses was about equal in skill and disses, but Aest's structure fucked it up for him, thats why I vote for LJ.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112962
hit up that battle.

^^^Didnt know i could loose just cuz of my Structure....???????? he says:

"Both verses was about equal in skill and disses, but Aest's structure fucked it up for him, thats why I vote for LJ"

OOh well i cant argue.....................U
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ite this is a very close battle here alot of played,
concepts from both but.................
aesth gets punches they came alot harder(lyrical you had a few) but,
aesth was more consistent in most bars..........
aesth structure was not good your flow was ite but dont label your bars thats wak,
you threw better wordplay in all,
lyrical your verse was nice but not good enuf you had sum good lines,
but also sum wak 1's your flow lacked alot man...and strcutre was abit streched in places,
not a bad battle close but you now.............pz

FOr the 4th time..


U P P U N................End Thiz Battle Plz.

^^^ummm Umm........ama merk u next!! hold yo horses kido.

1 More Vote And This Battle Will Be Closed.

.................................................H urry ................Hurry.

Ok now its obvious how this works u gettin your buddies to vote or what.......How could anybody think u had better flow or structure, yo shit was all over the place like u pasted 3 diffrent verses together but whatever, i guess when u said no dickriding it dont apply to u

OK kido.............How U got 2 votes when only 1 dude voted correctly??

Anywayz End this weak battle i hate kido's who whine............................................. ........

FINISH THIS PLZZZZZZZZZ IT STOOOD THERE FOR 2 weeks NOWWWWWWWW

I wasnt the one whos whining little boy ure the one that came out and said " i SEE ALOT OF DICK RIDIDNG"......and the only reason u said that is cuz i was winning cuz of your retarted structure, who gives a fuck about the battle u can win i dont give a fuck its not liek it means something, but dont accuse me of cheating and shit cuz u were losing

jesus:

Names Jezus,but not the dude u know from Sunday school
Only cheek Im turnin in on my ass so u can kiss that one too
weak open
Yo, Aesthetic knows he cant win,but he still challenge me
Just so he could brag that he got the chance to battle me
no punch there
I could get physicly critical and biblicly super lyrical
If u win, YOU should be called Jesus cuz that be a miracle
Aight
Yo talent is minimal, so shut yo trap wrap it up and leave rap
Aesthetic eat me? he aint good enuff to drink the water out my kneecap
maybe I dont get it, nice flow tho
Wonna be thug, I choke ya out wit yo hollow chain and pendant
Yo ass goin down in a ball of flames like a 9/11 flight attendant
9/11 's old, but that hit
Ray Charles can see ure done, chewed up and spit out like gum
Ima say I merked this "MC" so u can at least pretend to be one
played gum line, weak close

Aesth
Gold Album Gospel Artist?? equalz to NOTHING, U from Weak Crew??Ya best member prolly isnt a member//1
And i beat all the others before Christ(B.C.) so bad they dont even remember//2..lol <---dont put this here
That was aight tho
Why Jesusl do Text?, I'll Cease to Spit 'Vowelz' An let the 'Eyez'-Inspect//3
Coz rest aSSured i got Chrome that'll leave your body count high-in-debt//4
ok
Listen I attack yo cleavage bitch, wit clenched fists, that leave u feverish/5
U from Jerusalem?? Kid I leave u wit 50 men, let them see u wit, a cercumsized penis bitch/6..lol
multi, aight
"Here to save u all" haha...It's a sad unavoidable predictcament, when u think u can win, when u lyrically sensative and impoyd a " finish him", when ultrasonic rhythem hit/7
Wit hollow tips, aimed at yo cerebic, and 50 hits to yo kindeys bitch/8
First line should be two, or even three...
simply prevents, yo battle rec is weak infants, and the battle events, i re-invent/9
Lyrical Jesus??Ii think u a thief and shit and like fiendish chicks,Like yo mom wit teeny tits, I leave yo faggot gospol singing clique meaningless/ 10
Once again, gotta break up the lines, but that was an aight close


Aesth wins this, cuz he had punches and personals, whereas LJ's only personal was stating Aesth's name. Personals is why Aesth won this. Try organizin your lines a bit better so they are easier ta read, cuz you gots some good rhymes. Also, get rid of those numbers, they arent needed.

vote - Aesthetic

I spent some time votin on this, please hit up tha link below ta vote on my battle, aight?


Peace

This battle is a prime example of how nobody here knows what wit is, or wordplay. Fucking wannabes.

Punches: Aesth, definitely the B.C. line was dope, and the circumsized line was dope too.
Wordplay: Neither, anyways nobody had any
Multis: Aesth, dope multis, about 3-5 per line
Personals: Aesth, B.C., and circumsized lines are both personals
Opener: Aesth, B.C. line
Closer: Jesus, pretend to be one line was alright

Vote - Aesthetic

Little kids come here, open battles, and say a person's name gets their vote, and drops a link. Pisses me off.

And i beat all the others before Christ(B.C.) so bad they dont even remember
Dope line.

Return the favor in my battle with Rule

WOW!!! THis BATTLE STILL DIDNT END LORD HAVE MERCY>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>YO LYRICAL KID NO BEEF HOMEY>>>>>I JUST WANT THIS TO END.....SO I CAN START NEW BATTLES...

GOOD BATTLE