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Dev vs DJ spindemshits
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you drop straight after me 30 minutes to drop after check.... .....check! |
Fuck this... i aint waiting all night.... forget it.....
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noob that crushes
first of all i hold this bitch, in the palm of my fist
wrip off his mic hand, and stitch up his wrist you're a brittle bitch, your rhymes are as gay as skittles gitch taste the rainbow prick, and a mouth-full of dick, grab your purse and your lipstick, head out and hook the corner gettin pimped by Warner, wishin you were somewhere warmer Callin me out, jour mammie's callin you in, she wants you in bed by ten cause by then you've lost 5 friends, dev doesn't really rap he just pretends better throw on some depends, i'm burnin the candle from both ends I can't sleep, until i dispose of this mc, can't believe he went against me. :hump: |
wtf you mean you ain't waitin, that wasn't even 30 mins dawg
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i meant you didnt check in... so how was i supposed to know if you were even gonna show... anyway...
To me ya name says childish… ya spinn’n alotta shit Yes..Your attempt at gangsta… hits like a chick flick Why’d ya accept to this bout… ya gettin knocked cold Jus a fly in the heavy weight… a first round K.O. But I aint for self prop… no… jus heard your alias was slim Cos ya punches hit that weak… don’t even bruise the skin Ya need to grasp battling… what hits and what misses But 1 outta 2 aint bad… now you can move on to the diss’s Spin, ya record jus amazes me… ill grant ya got consistency 0-0, so ill break it… put ya on the route to where ya skillz be ….pre-history |
first of all i hold this bitch, in the palm of my fist
wrip off his mic hand, and stitch up his wrist ^this is good multis i like the punch good opener.... you're a brittle bitch, your rhymes are as gay as skittles gitch taste the rainbow prick, and a mouth-full of dick, ^and you lost it.....played sex lines vs Vets not a good combo.... grab your purse and your lipstick, head out and hook the corner gettin pimped by Warner, wishin you were somewhere warmer ^wtf is this.....^^^^meh i think its filler sorry dog..... Callin me out, jour mammie's callin you in, she wants you in bed by ten cause by then you've lost 5 friends, dev doesn't really rap he just pretends ^like pick a topic........ehhe anyway ok punches stretched ass lines though... better throw on some depends, i'm burnin the candle from both ends I can't sleep, until i dispose of this mc, can't believe he went against me. ^weird rhyme scheme for a last bar......ok closer...... To me ya name says childish… ya spinn’n alotta shit Yes..Your attempt at gangsta… hits like a chick flick ^eheheh nice punch.....kinda weak first line though.... Why’d ya accept to this bout… ya gettin knocked cold Jus a fly in the heavy weight… a first round K.O. ^bah this has been done....not bad though But I aint for self prop… no… jus heard your alias was slim Cos ya punches hit that weak… don’t even bruise the skin ^i like the punch...good structure..nice call on the alias... Ya need to grasp battling… what hits and what misses But 1 outta 2 aint bad… now you can move on to the diss’s ^this is .....meh....ok punch...waiting for the boom still.... Spin, ya record jus amazes me… ill grant ya got consistency 0-0, so ill break it… put ya on the route to where ya skillz be ….pre-history ^ehhe there it is....nice closer....that line took it right there.....nice vote goes to dev no hate.....peep this ill topical vs. me and deacon later.... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111620 |
need more votes......
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I gotta agree pretty much with what homie above me said: basically it came down to experience - devs punches were more fluid and the setup of his lyrics made it easier to read...Spindemshits i say that was pretty good for you to be a newbie just work on your punches a little more
Vote: Dev i voted for yall but check mine out too http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111495 |
:thumbup: hrmmm they were both pretty good but i like the creativity of DJ and it was funnierbut dev's was good too...my vote goes to DJ Spindemshits. :thumbup:
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Deluxxe, Dj spindemshits...... YOUR IP MATCHES.... reported!
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first of all i hold this bitch, in the palm of my fist
wrip off his mic hand, and stitch up his wrist ^ok..not great flow you're a brittle bitch, your rhymes are as gay as skittles gitch taste the rainbow prick, and a mouth-full of dick, ^whack..useless multis as there is no punch grab your purse and your lipstick, head out and hook the corner gettin pimped by Warner, wishin you were somewhere warmer Callin me out, jour mammie's callin you in, she wants you in bed by ten cause by then you've lost 5 friends, dev doesn't really rap he just pretends ^weakness better throw on some depends, i'm burnin the candle from both ends I can't sleep, until i dispose of this mc, can't believe he went against me. ^weak closer To me ya name says childish… ya spinn’n alotta shit Yes..Your attempt at gangsta… hits like a chick flick ^ok Why’d ya accept to this bout… ya gettin knocked cold Jus a fly in the heavy weight… a first round K.O. ^ok but kinda played But I aint for self prop… no… jus heard your alias was slim Cos ya punches hit that weak… don’t even bruise the skin ^ok Ya need to grasp battling… what hits and what misses But 1 outta 2 aint bad… now you can move on to the diss’s ^nice Spin, ya record jus amazes me… ill grant ya got consistency 0-0, so ill break it… put ya on the route to where ya skillz be ….pre-history ^dope finisher Dev takes this pretty easy. Good battle but Dev jus had a more vet verse, better punches, personals and creativity. DJ stay away from the gay jokes as they are mad played Please drop an honest vote here guys. I took the time for ya. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110074 |
This Was 1sided Battle Dev Took This Easily With Da Punches,Personals,Wordplay,Vocab,Disses,Multi Use, Etc.................
VOTE=DEV Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Cprogress |
the last vote wasnt explained enough... it'll just be deleted.... break em down more......
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Votin for Dev cuz he had some good punchlines in there he was more fluid than DJ he also had a gud opening so vote DEV
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V/ Dev, due harder punches...other cat was real blah ..
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Dev took this through a better quality verse all round, due to the more smooth flow of his, and better structure even though that didn't contribute to my decision of choosing to vote for him, the punchlines from dev were weak but they done the job and beat the other cat, you have potential though DJ, no hard feelings, you just didn't match the wittiness of the punchlines
V/Dev |
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