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yte grl vs venom
u spit first
no deadline u decide line max no dr/h/c votes |
no dr/h/c votes
1 hour 2 spit after check in you spit first |
Venom Read Ur Pm......................................
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it was ur callout i said u spit first and u said set it up
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iight i will......yo blaze i didn't get ne thing...
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Yo I'm gonna completely ILLiminate you in this round
Treat you like a hound and Eat you like cannabil mound You have no chance too beat me and That is a guarantee You couldn't have intelligence with a bachelor's degree so spit the written shit you got it still won't be enough My punchlines will overcome and I create from raw stuff I don't know why im battling you,your keystle is assisted Check yourself,you alone keystylin will get your TOUNGE twisted Now for the finishing line, and you were no challenge bastard Fuck with me again and you end up with your face plastard |
your turn too spit.................................
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y is that ur name? ur rhymes dont spit venom who r u tryin 2 amuse
even if ur rhymes did it wouldnt matter cause to the weak im immune this kids vocab sounds like he dropped out in the 3rd grade so when u drop ur verse every 1 vote is gonna be unswayed u need 2 stop or ur gonna get banned 4 the no break down 1 line votes complimented diabolic in a battle ur suppose 2 dis in case u didnt know another thing dumb ass ur supposed to try and write equal lines nobodys ever voted 4 him maybe god was tryin 2 send u a sign so like evry other 1 of ur battles ur gonna get knocked out basically u couldnt make it if ur mom was a talent scout dont sleep on this vote and ill vote on ur shti |
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yo i kno this sounds crazy but its 2 hard to judge so
imma say punches is what wins and ven0ms gets it. damn this line was good=I don't know why im battling you,your keystle is assisted Check yourself,you alone keystylin will get your TOUNGE twisted good 1 yte girl is hott jus too hard 2 judge so i went by punches but this doesnt really matter i cant poll yet pz vote/ven0m |
i vote for yte grl she was killer
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ill return the favor |
very hard to vote for this...
Punches- Venom very good as Blaze said that one line was prolly the best in the whole entire battle very cood for both of you tho... Structure- goes to venom because as you can see whi'll his lines arnt even they are better then ytes ne ways.. Personals- Yte i didnt see really ne in venoms verse... but yte girl had close to nothing but nothing has to be beat something.. right? Overall- Venom Close battle both ........try to elevate |
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yo this battle was close but my vote goes to.....Venom cuz he had some good punchlines in there and had some personals goin on flow was a tie but structure is 4 venom gud word choice so VOTE VENOM
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Venom spit the harder rhyme...
Came alot more aggressive. That's fact. Grl did real nice with the last 4 lines of her verse... But that's all she brought. Before that it was all filler and cream puff punches. Venom, ya need ta add wordplay... It was ya constant punches and mean spirtedness that won ya this one. If her whole verse had been like her last 4... You'd have been merked. Peace |
lol you both must of keyed quickly cuz both rhmes seemed weaker than what iv eseen before... i was feeling venoms verse alot more. he just had wittier punches...strucure was a tie most of it was even...but his punches just came wittier.
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Uppppinnnnggggg come one people vote so we can close this shit
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Venom gets my vote, but just barely, too close to call. I'll give him punches, but a draw on everything else.
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uppinnnnnngggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg ...vote people
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yte won this shit becuase he has somethin called tallent
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yo fuck you herb...that was a d/r vote you didn't even explain ne thing fucking faggot get out of rapbattles.....
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voten for yte grl she just hit harder to me
i especially like her opener that was hot |
OK, Ve0m... that verse was utter garbage. Please elevate. Nuf said
Yte - you basically nailed this one... every line was true and hit, though you could of course improve (anyone can) on your punches and personals... all around kicked his ass though. You should go to the new crew forums and try out for my crew... you got potential. pz...... |
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Ight,
Venoms Broke his ish down quick, Descent punches, some of them couldve been worded a lil bit better, some were played but u show some what signs of elevation since yer last battle,Flow, Yeh u kept it on track nothing really special ,tie , Personals were ok, Tounge twisted shit Was prolly the best line outa the whole battle... Structure, You need to work on yer structure dog, Use Punctuation so people can understnad and/or read easier......... Yte Grl Came way to basic, no real punches, None that atleast hit hard.Sept for maybe his closer, that one 1 line shit was more directed towards him then any of the personals he got at u wit...Flow, U kept it solid on track, again nuttin real special, structure, Yer structure was a wee bit better than venoms, Wordplay- Youve proved to have a bigger vocab and used a hell of alot more creativity then in yer wordplay thenm venoms used in his....... All in all, Venoms punches were some what more humerous, but yte was cleaner scripted , better structured,Both had ok personals but I feel again that venoms were just more humerous...EVen tho that "1 Line" Line Yte Had Was nice, Venom kept the punches coming At a better pace, Good battle keep elvating my vote(Hate to say it)But/ venoms B a good person nd honestly vote on this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108038 |
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