Lyric versus Flash
 

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you go first
normal rules

checkin in

shit you gonna make me go first....shit....iight...checkin in

Watch this glamorous spectacle of me wreckin u,ya not even half a man,ya part of a testicle
The next wings u see will belong to flies buzzing over ya rottin corpse,blood all over ya clavicle
Like a narcotic,i'm'a invade ya main vein with rhymes chaotic,u dancin on the edge of insanity
U feel the juices rushing to ya balls,this is ya downfall,u're living proof on ya own vanity
see ya battle wit weakness but i come strong wit it and leave ya teethless
ya gonna be talkin like a chinese man i dont speek eeenglish
the loss to you has just bein handed my names gonna stick in ya brain
forever like a pig dats just bein branded
yo these niggas punches are weak they cant hackit my punchs would still land harder even if i wore a straight jacket

startin now

i know shit is kinda wack and all ova da place but ima lil distracted at this time

Yo I called out in bitchslapped, I believe I said "no wannabe" MCs
Only vet who replied was jet, but afta Flash the counterfeit Lyracee
Ya verse is typical herbish, we aint speakin da same language
You rep South Cali huh kid? ....... Dun Flash me if ya feel this
Dawg ya rhymes are so bad, my computers tryin ta shut itself off
Elevate kid your rhymes are almost worse than fuckin freeza pop
Comin at me with whack ass rhymes, you unoriginal like ya name
What the fucks in ya sig man, look even ya avatar is played
New to RB heres ya first real introduction flashy bitch
When I say no newbs, that means you you dumb shit

Both verses were pretty weak.

flow-lyric
style-tie
punches-lyric
wordplay-flash
personals-lyric
overall-lyric

Lyric brough harder personals, why he gets this. Flash u'r style was aight, had one good punch in the beginnin but that was it, just work on the punches and structure. vote-lyric

return on my battle with ghostie it's been slept
thanks

thanks for the vote...uppin for honest votes..leave a link and I guarantee one of us will hit it up...

Uppin #2. Drop ya links guys

i would say that lyric one this on the link alone. thats fucked up to compare someone to that shit. man that is just wrong. i wouldn't saya that bout anyone i rap against.
overall lyric would have had the best flow and punches. flash you didn't deliver with the same harshness you did against the other guy. cannot remembr his name but you were better on that one. lyric good research. use better punches and flow next time.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111138

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111132

well this wasn't that great of a battle...
flash had aight punches..but they weren't
directed at lyric.....flow was aight..wordplay
Wasn't great..could of been better...
Lyric didn't come much harder but
he had more personals with his punches
although i think his punches could of been better also

so

v/ Lyric

can you hit this up please...maaaaad slept on.....4th page slept on
thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=111324&page=2

This Was A Pretty 1 Sided Battle Lyric Took This Easily With Da Punches,Personals/Disses,Wordplay,Vocab Etc...........

Vote=Lyric

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uppin this hit. Honest votes please

alrite this battle was ok no really hot punches but ok,
lyric you had a nice sense of consistency even tho,
your flow fell of abit flash gets dat.....
lyrics punches and personals wer alot better here tho,
flash yo got kinda punches but your structure was wak,
so you gota werd it better to hit harder....
not a bad battle vote-lyric coo,

plz hit this now http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111886 thx........pz

I agreed with most of what cutastraphe said:



[QOUTE]Lyric:
Punch Lines:5/10
Structure:7/10
Vocab:7/10
Flow:8/10[/QUOTE]






JamesJr.

(Just a personal Vote) Honest opinion*

Drop a good vote and leave a link. This battle was reopened so this is up #1

uppin #2 for honest explained votes.

lyric - you had a nice flow though out the whole battle...never really fell off, ya structure was good and the lines were a good length. ya punches were good n u had some decent personals..word play was just so-so and overall..i say this wasnt a bad verse..

flash - your flow was horrible through out. your lines were s t r e t c h e d and even took up 2 lines...your structure..well again thats the same as flow, ya lines were stretched, cut them down to Lyric's length or even less..it'll help u out a lot. u actually had some ok punches..none that really stuck out though...work on those both

v/ lyric...harder punches, better flow, more wordplay, and an overall better verse