hardhitter vs Machavelli
 

ightt yo u spit first 10-20 lines due in 45 mins
no crew votes
no hate votes and no dick riding
3-0 knock out or first to 5 win.
check in

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check in muh fucka,,hurry up...................................<~*1*~>

he's a noshow

he is a no show that right i will merk him hard core son............u wanna battle!?

can't got 2 in progress
but vote on mine

here we go hard hitter hard hitter?? is he really a hard hitter/
or after i kill him in this battle will he be pckin splinters//
he ain't no winner he's just full of shit/
man don't try to battle me when you can't even spit//
you can't come up on top no more not even till the end/
im battlen' another sorry ass here we go again//
as your nerves start to bend/
i can't be a no show if i can kill you now/
strat to pleed and reced as you bow down//
look what i found some other MC who thinks he can come on top/
when really all you gonna do is make your self drop/
cause my lines pop to hard for you to catch/
so you run away like a scared bitch/
so i leave you with these words that are brave and bold/
and start to tell all your friends that you just got TOLD!!//

ha yea right nice prewritin shit fagg................

that wasn't pre-written dumb ass don't be mad that i can come up with great lines just
spit and lets get the voting over with!!and don't call my shit pre-written!!

ightt yo ima merk this fag teach his ass a lesson he should a learnd
now he fucked around and got his ass burnd
its absurd how u herbs react to a call out
he signd off so he could prewrite his shit and go all out
no ur not nice you just been sliced
and ripped to the price
i hate u NEWBS ya think ya tight
but my grandma's pussy's tighter right?
your just a fag hooked on play girl mags....
its sad how u just been merkd
now u can go tell all your friends uve been hurt.............................

i didn't sighn off to prewrite i had to go to class this guy can't spit his was probably pre-written
JUST START THE VOTING!!

Very weak battle

Punches: Hardhitter, maybe if you can call them punches, but no real effective punches anywhere.
Wordplay: Neither had any
Multis: Neither had any
Opener: Neither, both very wak
Closer: Neither, both very wak

Vote - Hardhitter

Both of you need to check in wakness emergency center, seriously. Use comparisons to make punches, multiple syllables to make, hence the name, multis. Wordplay, just like of something creative.

Return the favor in my sig

Yeah, this wasn't a good battle at all..

mach- i saw u said ur lines were great.. that made me laugh. mach I guess you're new, I'd give the same advice as brethen up above. your punches were very plain, not very good. really nothing else to it. hard... actually seen you post better verses then that. u gotta step up and destroy these kinda guys. ur punches wernt good either but were better then his. that wins it. vote- hard

PLEASE hit the battle in my sig. thats been going for 2 weeks. I dont know what page its on. I had 8 votes but I'm up only 4-1, I NEED it over with. and also please hit this link too. return fav.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111802

man what ya'll talkin about i had good line thats the truth i came on top mine wasn't wack mine was good.

come on yall one more vote and i got this rapped up............leave a thread and i will hit it up and return the favor............thanx.....<~*1*~>

I can't vote yet, but...

Machavelli: Your verse was garbage. I ain't see no great lines anywhere near you, son. Your wordplay was weak, weak metas, weak creativity, weak personals, weak punches. FGlow is about a tie. Please elevate.

Hardhitter: Your verse was garbage too. Your's was just a little more fun to read then his. Weak wordplay, metas okay, weak creativity, okay punches, and okay personals. Flow was about a tie. Keep elevatin'.

Vote: Hardhitter

*If this battle is still open when I have enough posts, I'll be sure to vote. Until then, consider it a free uppin.*

ightt uppin for these votes come on pleazzzz i need one more vote to win come on and leave a link ill hit it up and reurn the favor..................thanx

who won da battle..?mach did but very weak battle
everythin madd weak


- :shoot: S0ySaUCe

this battle was won by hardhitter who took this in every category......
punches:hh--machavelli needs to elevate his were weak
flow:hh--had great flow
personals:hh--not bad
structure:hh--^^^read the above
machavelli should work on elevatin more
vote:hardhitter
no beef but can yall please vote this shit
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111920

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Cprogress

OK folk's this shit is over NO more votes i won this with the 3-0 knock out..thank you........*1*

of course this is the way I saw the battle

Structure-Tie, Both came wit weak structures and that's that, u need to work on structures

Vocabulay-Hard, cause his shit made since and was nice words that weren't so plain and used

Punches and Wordplay-Hard, cause his shit wasn't so newbish like yours was Machevelli, and you need to up too dawg, well both of ya'll need to elevate on these two categories

Flow-Tie, nothing more to same I summed this up like I did with Structure, both were weak

Conclusion-Both need to elevate alot and then come wit some better shit next time, but I enjoyed this newbish kinda battle......sike, ya'll need to elevate alot........

Vote=Hard Hitter

HARD HITTER HIT MY BATTLE UP (THE ONE IN MY SIG) WIT A HONEST VOTE DAWG SINCE I TOOK TIME ON YOURS

Hardhitter wins due to knock out.