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KiLlEr EmCeE vs. Flash
rules......no feeding....since u called out.....u spit first.....in 30 min afta chek in......i will try in spit in 30 min.....if not.....im bizy....i swear i do not prewrite......
no d/r...... n i spit 30 min afta u spit.....if i can.... :thumbup: |
yo its 12 lines max right?
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yea*********************************************** ***
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iight....this is my check in....ill spit in like 25 mins mabye 30....
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im gonna wiat for you to check in before i spit...so if its not before 30 then im still waiting for you to check in...ill spit right afta you check in
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o werdd........chek in................................................ ...............
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iight here it is....
Like Stabbing A Corpse- In A Hearse- Your Verse Defiantly Ain't Bringing Pain Spitten So Hard I'm Leaving Flow Stains- It's Just Insane When I Taint Your- Membrane Your Lines Are Horrible, Especially When You Try To Pick Up The Phone Anytime You Try To Call Yourself A Mc, All I Hear Is The Dial Tone Your Joint Is Pointless Like " Dull Butter Knives, Fuck? I Hang Your Rhymes I'm Like A Clumsy Drug Dealer The Way Drop Dope Lines Emcees Sleep On Your Battles, Cause You Be Dropping Stories Like It Was Bed-Time Glass-Knuckle Boxing, Spitting So Fast, My Saliva Turns Into Toxin My Lyrics Are So "Ill" You Couldn't Step To It Without A Vaccination Extend Your Arm Towards Me And Observe Your Amputation If U Was The Sun U Still Couldn’t Shine Against Me, Cuz I’m Similar To A Sunshade You Fear My Comeback Cause It's Like A Boomerang Made Of Razor Bladez |
iight we jus waitin on you...........................
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^^^haha.......no need 2 go hard....
chek.... Im sitting here laughin mah ass off....at da wack ass verse above^^ You dun blong here..cuz da punches im throwin aint of "brotherly love" You're lost in ya flow..like da Blair Witch Project- u goin round n round Your rhymes are useless...like some of the things i find at da lost n found Like a Charmin napkin.....dis bitches' verse is cuddly and very soft... The instant i saw his crooked-structed verse...mah spirits went aloft... Dats flash in mah sig...dodging all the bullets n' punches i b throwing.. Just cuz u lost dis battle badly..dun give up...just keep on going.... KiLlEr killed anoda mc.-Paramedics chekin if "Flash' still alive.... He in da hospital- parents cryin'- ....1% chance of Flash 2 survive.... ite ite ite.... aloft - high.....6th bar....dat meanz by lookin at hiz verse..mah spiritz were high..... uppppiinnnnnnnnnn (1)......leave ya linkzzz...... |
jus to let you know the blair witch shit is ova played....but yeah uppin(1)...leave a link and i will give votes
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^^^^^wow........u need vote swayz 2 win ya battles................??(1)
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i wasnt suggestin to vote for me i was sayin if they drop a link i will vote on the battle...
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Emcee got dis battle..betta punches..ok humor..betta flo n structure
:shoot:-> flash |
:shoot: ->flash ...means :shoot: killin flash n :shoot: -> means Emcee
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flash-nice verse, the structure was a little off but it was ok not really many hard punches though, a couple, but i thought Emcee had a more structured verse and smoother flowing wordplay...my vote= KilLer Emcee
return the feedback:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111936 |
this was a pretty simple battle and nothin' special, but I'm gunna give it to flash, 'cause the other guy complimented flash in one of his lines, but you guys were pretty much tied throughout, but complimenting your opponent just doesn't fly, so i vote for flash
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...758#post1154758 You guys know what to do.... but I'm not sure if he spit yet, he should of or else he went over the time limit |
Like Stabbing A Corpse- In A Hearse- Your Verse Defiantly Ain't Bringing Pain
Spitten So Hard I'm Leaving Flow Stains- It's Just Insane When I Taint Your- Membrane ^multis....good first line....bad second line..... Your Lines Are Horrible, Especially When You Try To Pick Up The Phone Anytime You Try To Call Yourself A Mc, All I Hear Is The Dial Tone ^this is ok wordplay but its been done....played bar...... Your Joint Is Pointless Like " Dull Butter Knives, Fuck? I Hang Your Rhymes I'm Like A Clumsy Drug Dealer The Way Drop Dope Lines ^again this played come with new shit that sux...its better tahn played... Emcees Sleep On Your Battles, Cause You Be Dropping Stories Like It Was Bed-Time ^and you switched your rhyme scheme up..this was a ok punch... Glass-Knuckle Boxing, Spitting So Fast, My Saliva Turns Into Toxin My Lyrics Are So "Ill" You Couldn't Step To It Without A Vaccination Extend Your Arm Towards Me And Observe Your Amputation ^this was some good concepts but really just alot of filler one ok meta4....... If U Was The Sun U Still Couldn’t Shine Against Me, Cuz I’m Similar To A Sunshade You Fear My Comeback Cause It's Like A Boomerang Made Of Razor Bladez ^eheh there ya go good meta4....nice punch.....good stuff... Im sitting here laughin mah ass off....at da wack ass verse above^^ You dun blong here..cuz da punches im throwin aint of "brotherly love" ^meh this is an Ok opener.......its not the greatest..... You're lost in ya flow..like da Blair Witch Project- u goin round n round Your rhymes are useless...like some of the things i find at da lost n found ^LOL at you this is a terrible bar....dude no never again..ever... Like a Charmin napkin.....dis bitches' verse is cuddly and very soft... The instant i saw his crooked-structed verse...mah spirits went aloft... ^word good personal nice vocab.....good bar.... Dats flash in mah sig...dodging all the bullets n' punches i b throwing.. Just cuz u lost dis battle badly..dun give up...just keep on going.... ^No bad punch.....sorry thats clearly homer simpson....... KiLlEr killed anoda mc.-Paramedics chekin if "Flash' still alive.... He in da hospital- parents cryin'- ....1% chance of Flash 2 survive.... ^this is an OK punch alot of filler in your verse though man....gotta go with flash y'all return the favor....pz.... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...42&page=1&pp=15 |
my money was on flash....all the way. he was on fire!
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uppin this shit
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Aiight flash you came harder and ya flow was makin me feel it
Emcee I wasn't feelin ya structure or punches too much Flash-6/10 Emcee-5/10 Elevate don't discriminate |
man...talk about one sided....i cant even do those long votes i usually do anymore....first off...flash good job...u beat him in every aspect...killer emcee...ur not even killer ask a admin to change ur name to puppy...anyways elevate "dog"
aight....v/flash |
flash...nice verse u win man u had better flow,structure,punches,and some ok personels....
killer emcee....u had ok flow,structure was there,u had no personels whats so ever.... and u had punches but none hit harder than flash'es.....he just had an all around better verse than you...no beef but u must elevate dawg peace v/flash |
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