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IceMan vs. Fatal Mirage
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Dynasty Soliders? Most Whack Crew On RB, And Your Leader Got Banned...
Yo Punches Haven't Ever Landed! Hope You Didnt Have A Victory Planned... ColdShit Vs. Fatal Mirage..Hadda Make A New Thread, You Worst At Dissing... Uh-Oh, Gettin Kinda Cold, His Punches Swinging At Me, But All Keep Missing... Didnt Even Accept Blind Spits! Whys It Matter, The Rules State No Feeding... Iceman Is Still Breast Feeding, In Dynasty Soliders And He Still Aint Leading!... GrimReaper In His Sig? That Was Dope 14 Years Ago, Before Your Rocked It... Your Punches Swinging Like MJ Playin Baseball, He Still Hasnt Got One Hit.. Leavin You Black And Blue, Tried To Click "Go Advanced" But It Wouldnt Let Him... He Isnt Dope, My Verse Gonna Leave You Worried, Like People Who Cant Swim... Aim Convo GrislyStylez: wheres the thread MoTownMonsta1: i gave you the link MoTownMonsta1: in FL GrislyStylez: i dont c it GrislyStylez: cold shit??? MoTownMonsta1: yea GrislyStylez: fuck you, i aint battlin yo ass till u change the name, cus peeps wont know its me, so change it MoTownMonsta1: i obviously cant GrislyStylez: well than remake it......or sumthin MoTownMonsta1: whys hould i change it?? So your Dick ryders can come and vote MoTownMonsta1: w.e made a new one GrislyStylez: good... GrislyStylez: aight.... ill check in, but ill key my shit later MoTownMonsta1: aight GrislyStylez: wat happened to tomorrow at midinte? MoTownMonsta1: due tomorrow GrislyStylez: i got u..... GrislyStylez: u bitch... MoTownMonsta1: hahah.. MoTownMonsta1: So you gonna beat me? GrislyStylez: u bet yo bitch ass.... MoTownMonsta1: lol you try so hard to be black GrislyStylez: lol GrislyStylez: fuck u GrislyStylez: u keyed yo shit yet MoTownMonsta1: keying GrislyStylez: well im done so ill wait fo yo ass and edit my shit... MoTownMonsta1: ur done, then post GrislyStylez: nah ill wait for u..... ladies first MoTownMonsta1: if its ladies first, why arent you posting GrislyStylez: cus u didnt go yet |
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fatal is motown monsta i am grisly stylez the other is him and dazasta |
Dazasta Cant Vote............................................
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rippin this cat.....
Your 3-0, but you’ve been battling cats that new to RB You can spit spikes and bullets and stil never harm me I got an Arsonal(Arson-Ill), that’s guaranteed to leave you ill Im cappin yo brains out, and I got sum beans to spill You backed down from dazasta, and barely beat Reall You a baby like veal,like snoop,that newb was yo last meal You not capable of eatin no real emcees,like ice or dazasta Im coming down hard,smashing garbage like trash compactors You beat M.Millz, and rock bottom, all trashy herbs Ice is runnin you the fuck over,like bad driver do curbs Explainin my verse: Pretty self explained but here it is anyway He has battled 3 newbs, (Mike Millz,Reall,Rock Bottom) and almost lost to 1 Snoops album was called Tha Last Meal Trash Compactor crushes trash Veal is baby lamb His AIM name is MoTownMonsta He backed down from dazasta |
dazasta wasnt goin too....
not my best but fuck it, lets vote! |
HERES MY VOTE!!!man fucka vote..im just here to say all the above is true and i luckily did not get banned bechuz i was telling the truth and proved myself very well...take into consideraton in this battle that although i cannot vote i really do not expect Fatal to win..however he probably will...Yet, it does not matter if i cant vote..bechuz i do not like Fatal and if he would battle me we could settle this beef..but he's obviously scared...judge this battle wisely....
-DAZ |
How Could I Almost Lose When I Won, 5-0, 5-0, 5-1?
Uppin |
fatal got dis battle like nothin..dont even try iceman..he got betta everythin..punches, flow, structure..u no da rest
- :nono: S0ySaUCe |
yo this was overall a dope battle
punches:fatal flow:iceman personals:iceman structure:fatal start and closers:iceman this overall like i said cameout to be a dope battle but with a good starter and closer,also personals,andflow iceman gothis but barely tho vote:iceman no beef but can yall vote on this shit http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111920 |
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Dynasty Soliders? Most Whack Crew On RB, And Your Leader Got Banned... Yo Punches Haven't Ever Landed! Hope You Didnt Have A Victory Planned... first line..i agree wit, 2nd line wasnt a direct punch... ColdShit Vs. Fatal Mirage..Hadda Make A New Thread, You Worst At Dissing... Uh-Oh, Gettin Kinda Cold, His Punches Swinging At Me, But All Keep Missing... decent punch...1st line was alright and 2nd line was an ok punch Didnt Even Accept Blind Spits! Whys It Matter, The Rules State No Feeding... Iceman Is Still Breast Feeding, In Dynasty Soliders And He Still Aint Leading!... shoulda expaned more..the personal coulda been decent GrimReaper In His Sig? That Was Dope 14 Years Ago, Before Your Rocked It... Your Punches Swinging Like MJ Playin Baseball, He Still Hasnt Got One Hit.. rhyme wasnt that great..punch was just so-so, coulda been better Leavin You Black And Blue, Tried To Click "Go Advanced" But It Wouldnt Let Him... He Isnt Dope, My Verse Gonna Leave You Worried, Like People Who Cant Swim... coula re-worded it and made it alot better...just a plain ok ending ice Your 3-0, but you’ve been battling cats that new to RB You can spit spikes and bullets and stil never harm me played opening...personal wasnt that good I got an Arsonal(Arson-Ill), that’s guaranteed to leave you ill Im cappin yo brains out, and I got sum beans to spill not a complex punch..and not really direct at the end You backed down from dazasta, and barely beat Reall You a baby like veal,like snoop,that newb was yo last meal 1st line..coulda re-worded the personal much better..2nd line..that was actually not bad wit the snoop thing, shoula left out the baby shit and expaned more on snoop You not capable of eatin no real emcees,like ice or dazasta Im coming down hard,smashing garbage like trash compactors first line wasnt really a punch...2nd line was ok, kinda played though You beat M.Millz, and rock bottom, all trashy herbs Ice is runnin you the fuck over,like bad driver do curbs decent closer...punch was alright and it hit em overall - this was actually a close battle..but i think Ice took it wit harder hitting punches and less played lines |
uppin this, goin fo a knockout....fatal talks 2 much shit!!.......
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nice battle.. breakdown:
punches - ice: had a lil better lines, nice job by both.. flow - eh.. ice: very nice in this category, close as well.. structure - ice: very much easier to read, but fatals was easy too.. multis - fatal: didnt see any from ice.. opener / closer - tie: both were ok, nice job.. well, close battle, but ima go with ice on this.. vote - iceman187 return da favor: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111358 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111350 |
uppin for votes.... winnin 3-0 lets get the final 2.......
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yo, i would vote if i could, and if by the time i can vote, this is still indecided, i'll hit it up 4 u ice, and could anybody hit up my battle with puertoricanelly
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ice took it right here. lines are too stretched though...but at least you threw some unplayed connecting concepts.....and though they werent that clever.....they still hit effectively. fatal had the structure....but his punches didnt connect well and he stated facts for personals instead of turning them into some whitty punches. u could of hit effectively if you re worded some of your lines into better punches...
good battle though. vote: ice |
uppin this for a final vote and the knockout......
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Fatal mirage did o.k. in my opinion but to me iceman, i jus have to give da props ya know what i mean. Fatal mirage had and o.k. opener and well versed collection of wordplay and dope metaphors. To me ice man had da better punches because a freestyle battle all comes down to dissing your opponent and making them look badly with rhymes. Ice man didn't win dis battle by a mile jus by a fuckin inch, if fatal mirage would of relied on punches more than metaphors and wordplay then ice man would of melted. Looks like ice man froze fatal mirage's ass up into his battle record for dis one, no hate, my opinion and vote goes to ice man for his punches that hit a bit harder than fatal mirage's in dis. A close battle overall, Iceman and Fatal i saw both of ya drop better shit then dis man, what happened? Elevate both of ya'll.
vote= Iceman Mentalist had a really bad flow dat wasn't good at all and where were da punches at on dis battle to say da least for mentalist's side? Mentalist had no punches but were poor attempts at throwing them at killa kid if you ask me. Killa kid wiped mentalist clean with his punches and metaphors dat played along with his wordplay in his verse which was pretty good. Da best line to me was da enema part shit made me laugh hard at mentalist's ass. Kid killa has came down on foes much doper than dis but still he was to good and skilled to be beaten by mentalist. Vote= Killa Kid *vote on ma battles here, thanks* http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112785 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111414 |
my computer fucked up again, so anyway don't pay attention to dat killa kid shit from another battle i poll voted in.............aight.
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