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TheUnderRated 02-03-04 07:12 PM

TheUnderRated vs. T-West
 
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1hour
normakl rules
check in ...thanx for waiting had to grab my dinner right quick........

TheUnderRated 02-03-04 07:16 PM

I know i got your name wrong its already been reported to I.R so that they can fix it...................

T West 02-03-04 07:18 PM

lol np. Lets just battle lol..........................

TheUnderRated 02-03-04 07:19 PM

kool keyin good luck again should be a good battle..................

T West 02-03-04 08:17 PM

Underrated is your name since ur week compared to my punch
That's why I'm leavin you black...it's just that time of the month
This is the battlefield punk...and I suggest that you stay low
espically for ur crews sake...
...because your wackess is the only thing they don't know
See his profile..."MC'in that"...and "MC'in" this...
Always using short form...No wonder ya punches never hit
My name wrong when you made this, and we all know why
He's still suffering...
...from when I beat his ass in last time!
With all the cyphers you doin, TUR should always be winnin
Because he's a freestyle fanatic...
...wait my bad...we aint swimmin!
your wack...so you and me don't belong in the same place
I would of proved your rhymes are hidieous...
...But you saved me that time just by showin ya face!

TheUnderRated 02-03-04 08:18 PM

T West's got more played shit than a KB Toy store.... a more preictable rhyme scheme than pooh and e-Ore...
Knees wobbling...shakin...into bitchslapped u came...
mommy wow T-wests a big kid now despite the aim name...
T's Predicted to make it but then again so were the Cheifs..
Can't call this canuck an herb cause he's smokin maple leafs...
I could have Aids, Gonheria, cancer, WEST nile at best...
and still would never stoop to get reviewed by T-West...
I know you been here for a while and getting sick of defeat...
but what on earth possesed you to make voice of the streetz?..
I'll leave West Behind on the clock like I flew over the Time Zone..
have you heard Jet Talk? ...you n him.......... leave audio alone...

TheUnderRated 02-03-04 08:20 PM

nice i was wonderin when someone was gonna use that against me in a battle.....good battle man lets up it for votes see what the public thinks....if you don't get my personals....vote on a different battle thanx................

The Jett 02-03-04 08:28 PM

I'll leave West Behind on the clock like I flew over the Time Zone..
have you heard Jet Talk? ...you n him.......... leave audio alone...

^^hmm...havent checked lately have u....
Oh yeh, and didn't I 5-0 u hoe?.....yes I did...hmmmm

M.C. Shadow 13 02-03-04 08:32 PM

the uda rated took this one he
had real good punches and t west
i wasint fillin yo flow that much
but yo flow was aite

my vote da unda rated

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Tyler Durden 02-03-04 08:56 PM

^read my sig bitch

Underrated is your name since ur week compared to my punch
That's why I'm leavin you black...it's just that time of the month
^no...not really a punch
This is the battlefield punk...and I suggest that you stay low
espically for ur crews sake...
...because your wackess is the only thing they don't know
^blah...wack..could of been better
See his profile..."MC'in that"...and "MC'in" this...
Always using short form...No wonder ya punches never hit
^meh..creative but played
My name wrong when you made this, and we all know why
He's still suffering...
...from when I beat his ass in last time!
^first line don't make sense
With all the cyphers you doin, TUR should always be winnin
Because he's a freestyle fanatic...
...wait my bad...we aint swimmin!
^aight wordplay
your wack...so you and me don't belong in the same place
I would of proved your rhymes are hidieous...
...But you saved me that time just by showin ya face!
^nice closer..good personal

T West's got more played shit than a KB Toy store....
a more preictable rhyme scheme than pooh and e-Ore...
^meh..aight punch..close to a no
Knees wobbling...shakin...into bitchslapped u came...
mommy wow T-wests a big kid now despite the aim name...
^lol..nice personal..punch
T's Predicted to make it but then again so were the Cheifs..
Can't call this canuck an herb cause he's smokin maple leafs...
^lol nice personal..punch
I could have Aids, Gonheria, cancer, WEST nile at best...
and still would never stoop to get reviewed by T-West...
^meh...no..not a good punch
I know you been here for a while and getting sick of defeat...
but what on earth possesed you to make voice of the streetz?..
^lol..nice punch
I'll leave West Behind on the clock like I flew over the Time Zone..
have you heard Jet Talk? ...you n him.......... leave audio alone...
^aight closer..could of been better

overall under got this...more consistant punches
T ya personals weren/t hitting

v/ Under

TheUnderRated 02-03-04 09:12 PM

aight 2 to 0 but that one vote probably won'thold up against the axe so uppin for more.......................................

Tactixx 02-03-04 09:13 PM

my vote- theunderrated...the flow was smoother and more thought out it hit harder
t-west..it was nice, a couple of lines were a little long and it didnt really flow well
and the vocab could use a little work....sorry i can't vote officially..

return the favour:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111936

T West 02-03-04 09:19 PM

I retire from battling text lol...uppin for more votes

.Iknoevel. 02-03-04 09:20 PM

west
Underrated is your name since ur week compared to my punch
That's why I'm leavin you black...it's just that time of the month
no punch...
This is the battlefield punk...and I suggest that you stay low
espically for ur crews sake...
...because your wackess is the only thing they don't know
w-ck ...fill in the blank
See his profile..."MC'in that"...and "MC'in" this...
Always using short form...No wonder ya punches never hit
creative punch
My name wrong when you made this, and we all know why
He's still suffering...
...from when I beat his ass in last time!
not a bad punch
With all the cyphers you doin, TUR should always be winnin
Because he's a freestyle fanatic...
...wait my bad...we aint swimmin!
wordplay wasnt bad here
your wack...so you and me don't belong in the same place
I would of proved your rhymes are hidieous...
...But you saved me that time just by showin ya face!
nice personal...great closer


Un
T West's got more played shit than a KB Toy store....
a more preictable rhyme scheme than pooh and e-Ore...
not feelin it at all..i think its your turn to fill in the blank, w_ck
Knees wobbling...shakin...into bitchslapped u came...
mommy wow T-wests a big kid now despite the aim name...
nice..i was feelin this personal..hit hard
T's Predicted to make it but then again so were the Cheifs..
Can't call this canuck an herb cause he's smokin maple leafs...
lol...another nice punch
I could have Aids, Gonheria, cancer, WEST nile at best...
and still would never stoop to get reviewed by T-West...
just so-so
I know you been here for a while and getting sick of defeat...
but what on earth possesed you to make voice of the streetz?..
lol..another great personal
I'll leave West Behind on the clock like I flew over the Time Zone..
have you heard Jet Talk? ...you n him.......... leave audio alone...
lmao...dope closer... best lines of the whole battle

overall - under got this shit wit eas...his verse started off ok but then it picked up and his personals murdered T...and that Audio line made me laugh...dope shit...T try to come harder wit more personals and metas

v/ Under

Brethren 02-03-04 09:28 PM

Punches: Under, more effective all around punches, T really didn't have any good punches
Wordplay: Under, West nile line, that was about the only wordplay
Personals: T-West, T had line pic line
Multis: Neither, neither had any multis, flip some god damn multis
Opener: Under, T-West was really a bunch of nothing
Closer: Under, also, T's was much to bragg about

Vote - TheUnderRated

With all the cyphers you doin, TUR should always be winnin
Because he's a freestyle fanatic
Best bar by T-West

T's Predicted to make it but then again so were the Cheifs..
Can't call this canuck an herb cause he's smokin maple leafs
UnderRated's best bar, pretty funny

TheUnderRated 02-03-04 10:00 PM

Ok I'm following links now......leave your shit along with a poll vote and i will vote on your battles too.............

T West 02-04-04 07:54 AM

uppin so the underrated can get his victory.......

Dustin Dubree 02-04-04 12:14 PM

Underrated is your name since ur week compared to my punch
That's why I'm leavin you black...it's just that time of the month
6/10

This is the battlefield punk...and I suggest that you stay low
espically for ur crews sake...
...because your wackess is the only thing they don't know
stretched but aight....5/10

See his profile..."MC'in that"...and "MC'in" this...
Always using short form...No wonder ya punches never hit
huh???4/10

My name wrong when you made this, and we all know why
He's still suffering...
...from when I beat his ass in last time!
7/10 good

With all the cyphers you doin, TUR should always be winnin
Because he's a freestyle fanatic...
...wait my bad...we aint swimmin!
hmmmmm 4/10

your wack...so you and me don't belong in the same place
I would of proved your rhymes are hidieous...
...But you saved me that time just by showin ya face!
aight 6/10

overall west man what the fuck happen to you...when you were kilo you were sick man throwing hard punches everywhere man????.....

T West's got more played shit than a KB Toy store....
a more preictable rhyme scheme than pooh and e-Ore...
7/10 this was aight

Knees wobbling...shakin...into bitchslapped u came...
mommy wow T-wests a big kid now despite the aim name...
10/10 lmao good personal

T's Predicted to make it but then again so were the Cheifs..
Can't call this canuck an herb cause he's smokin maple leafs...
7/10

I could have Aids, Gonheria, cancer, WEST nile at best...
and still would never stoop to get reviewed by T-West...
hmmmmm 4/10 lol

I know you been here for a while and getting sick of defeat...
but what on earth possesed you to make voice of the streetz?..
nice 8/10

I'll leave West Behind on the clock like I flew over the Time Zone..
have you heard Jet Talk? ...you n him.......... leave audio alone...
9/10 nice finisher

overall i gotta go with under

peep links in sig (the bottom one with ak please)

t west man....what happen to you forreal man

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Daffer22 02-04-04 12:58 PM

flow: The underrated cuz he had more rhymes goin on than T WEST
structure:I also thought thatr the underated had more or less a better structure than West
punchlines: Again the underated had more and better punches than west

Vote the underrated
Vote on my battles thx
www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112050
www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111844
www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111593

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TheUnderRated 02-05-04 03:13 AM

um yea so this got reopened and i was hoping to close it............leave a link and i'll more likely than not hit you back...........pz

M&rk 02-13-04 01:22 AM

wordplay- the under rated, other cat looked ta only have rhymed 3 times in the whole thing,
muti's- under rated had one in his opener, and other cat didnt have any so...
punches-under rated, i like that maple leaf one cus i dont like cunnucks
flow- under rated, actually havin consecutive lines that rhyme help the flow, T west u need ta definetly work on that
meta's-under rated, actually had meta's instead of similies, dont see that too much, could tell u knew sumin bout battlin from that. ex. opener didnt use like or as.


T-west str8 up rhyme more in your battles, makes it worth reading, few good punches wit tha under rated and stay low punch there, kinda good wordplay wit it.

vote- under rated

hit my battle up drop an honest vote please peace drop a link
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107529

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