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Hit_Man -VS- Word Definate
This's how we gonna get down....
12 lines normal rules due by friday at latest ------------------------ get at me |
hahaha
come good...
Thinks hes an Outlaw since he about saw Shakur from the audience, but he couldnt ride beside Pac if he fuckin snuck in the ambulence, n i'll be damned if its quits for my spits, like my mouth stays wet, amaze vets as i grace text n leave mouths stretched like used playtex who will i slay next? Its Outlaw when i mouth off n leave him haggered, fuckin bastard, dip up n leave you more battered than fried chicken platters, give you punches till your cavity shatters like glassware, n im past where you'll ever be, cuz you'll never see wins like blind men competing for.... well, anything, bring any team, n ill spread bloodshed faster than a high school rumour, leave my world sooner cuz Outlaw couldnt sell if he were to blind fold consumers n cant electrify two words with estatic versions, n with elaberate works in progress he couldnt even get ass from a plastic surgen waitin on yours for votes...pz :laugh: |
uppin for outlaw...times comin close...
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anddddddddd its Saturday...where the fuck are you....
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close this up...fucking no shows...
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my internets been fucked up..... so i aint been able to get on till now
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ill get at u tomorow..... gotta take car o sum bitches tonite
n by the way........ :thefinger |
haha...your a dumbass...i even gave you an extra 2 n a half days n you still no showed...FUCK YOU
mods close this |
:thefinger Fuck Word Definate, N Quit talkin shit b'fo i sho up at ya Residence Have ya Brains spread out on tha ground wider then skidmarks from car crash Evidence Im neva Hesitant.... But y u Tryin to Waist ya Ryme? Ill kill u soon enough nigga, jus learn to Wait ya Time Even in Haste of Mind, see i neva make mistakes~ always been taught to raise the Stakes My Sickness's in the form of Toxins in inFlamed States, see'n that to ya body my rymes've Lay'd Waste U play Burna i Make Chase.... Fuck blessings, i Take Grace My rymez leave niggaz stunned, like when Mace n 'Diddy' Exchanged Place N now u see how Flames Taste, leave ya Brain in a Maimed State Ya Pains Great, i Love to kill.... other then that i Blame Hate Now ya Robbed, Beat, n Broke'n.... even u laughed at tha verse u Stuck To Tha battles over n theres only 1 thing to say........ :thefinger [FUCK U] |
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.......................VOTE mutherfuckers...............................
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close battle but i give this to hit man for more creativityand punches were a little betta word definates structure was shaky and couldn't understand at times AND I THINK THAT CAUSED U THE BATTLE but overall both were good and u guys should keep battlin'
vote-HIT MAN Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded |
vote on my battles pleaze
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This obviously is a loss to WD! WD should win by DQ cause you took too long homie.....u didn't follow the rules......Plus WD flow was better, punches were way harder......hands down vote goes to WD
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This obviously is a loss to WD! WD should win by DQ cause you took too long homie.....u didn't follow the rules......Plus WD flow was better, punches were way harder......hands down vote goes to WD
^^??? either make up ur mind or think out what ur gonna say before u say it..... n yea i was late....but shit happens dogg- car wreck today, fights all this weekend, aint had time fo this shit be-easy 1-1 UPPIN |
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Whatever dawg I was on my cell phone doin that shit u got the point.......anyway I undastand what you say but rules are rules are they not? |
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:huh: Nigga u Must be Feeble Minded to disqualify my vote and keep his...... the only difference between the 2 was who they voted on
bullshit 0-1 UPPIN |
WD wat you doin keep it short and sweet and too the point
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Word Definate= Vote
Word Definate= You Came Pretty Hard, With Solid Punches, And Ok Flow, Work On Your Flow Feel me?, Structure Was Ok Too, You Needa Fix It, Make Em' Shorter And Match Up, Vocab Slacked, Upp On That A lil Bit Too, NIce Wordplay Prolly Best iN YOur Verse Hit Man= YOu Came Hard Too, You Had Solid Punches, With Nice Flow. Your Structure Was Ok, And Your Vocab Wasnt Good.Wordplay Wasnt Good,That Hurt You ALot, You needa Up On That TOoo Feel Me? You Can Elevate, BTW YOU Broke Two Rules, The Deadline And Sway, Dont Do That Hit Man Punches= B Flow= B Structure= B Vocab= C Wordplay= C- Overall Grade= C+/B- Word Definate Punches- B Flow- B Structure- B Vocab- C Wordplay= A- Overall Grade= B/B+ HIt Mine UP http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113254 |
Word Definate takes this battle easy....Word Definate had a ok overall verse...Nothing great....but his closer was the best punch thrown by either emcee....WD...watch out fo played lines....like basically anything about Tupac.....also fix your structure so every 2 lines end with rhyming words...not verse that rhyme in the middle of lines...but an ok battle from you...seen you come better...but ehh...everyone has off days
Hit_Man....You came with way too much filler and played lines...some "punches" you threw weren't even directed at your opponent...jus generals.....cut down on your use of multis as they didn't help your verse at all...Multis are only good if they are also punches/multis/metas... Vote-WD please drop an honest vote here guys..thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112459 |
HAHA...damn he actually posted...3 days late...fuck it...let the votes play out....3-0 uppin....dont sleep people...vote n drop links n I or we will return the favor....pz
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yeah, mod close this battle
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uppin for votes
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Uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
Come On Peopleeeeeeee Dont Sleepppppppppppp Drop A Link N We'll Vote Back |
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