Dope Name -|vs|- SDIZZLE
 

you know the rules

check in and you have 20-25 minutes

10-12 lines

you spit first

check

im the best of the best, ur the worst of the worst
ur the biggest flop sense the gift and the curse
i dont mean to rain on ur parade, but are u insane
if u were smoking weed, u still wouldn't have a dope name
dog im just getting started, ima bout to go fast
cuz this dudes more feminine than baby bash
my rhymes are contageous, and u got a rash
im rapeing u more than model with dame dash
im not laughing, look at my face, do i look symithetic
ur so slow, u couldn't win a bronze medal at the special olypic
get it, i didn't think so, ur lyrically challenged
cuz ur sucky rhymes minus ur flow = a horrible balance

okay, this is my check in, if you're wondering what took me so long, i was talking to my dad on our house phone, and this is the last time for me to talk to my dad before he goes to trial tomorrow, so sorry for the wait

it'll be down 20-25 minutes

We come to watch this kid get torn apart from limb to limb
Look at him, lookin' tough while he still can't open a slim jim
Crackin' this over your head, and you're better off playin dead
While his rhyme tickles me pink, I take him and beat him red
Shiver, shutter, mumble, studder, let him make his little utter
Of a verse that goes good with sundays, bread, and butter
While you try to scream at me I'll take you out like an assassin
Your verse was horrible, i ate it and now i wanna go fastin'
Bow down to the king and lets get this down and you can lose
You're an kid with no skills, like watchin Lebron without shoes
You don't have anything to the point, it all comes in squiggles
So now that we know this i just need to say, that's Fizzle

done

Uppin (1)

Uppin (2)

Uppin (3)

bump

bump

yup im just uppin this shit up

Uppin (4)

Uppin (final), this is ridiculous, me and Dizzle are the only ones that've posted in this battle so i would appreciate some votes...

close battle..i dont like how nobody votes

anyway

dope name- your verse was alright....some of the lines were
good some were just sorry imo...
but, your last like 6 lines i think were really good..they were cool punches

sdizzle...your verse was solid as well..bu tnot as good as doope names
the last line and the dope name line were the best
but u didint come as consistent with the cool punchlines..

so winner is dope name..

i cant vote cuz i dotn have 100 but can u please vote here

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112445

Well the only verse that sdizzle had that was halfway decent was his closing verse. My vote goes to dope name because he had the better flow, punches, and the line about the bread and butter had a nice touch to it. Sdizzle your verse was alright but your punches weren't hard enough. its like you tried way too hard and came up empty handed. Your structure was pretty even, but Dope name came with more fire in his punches.

VOTE_DOPE NAME

My bad i forgot to leave a link to my open battle.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112317

bump

sdizzle kilt you dope name your weak

^ You wanna settle it in the front lines and I'll show you how weak I can be...

Newbies always talk at the wrong time...

:: leaves room in a fit of how newbies are idiots ::

Stupid mother.....

uppin

OPEN- dope name (not by much cuz both openers were pretty weak)

CLOSE- sdizzle (props to this one . . just had dope name hands down wit the close)

PERSONALS- sdizzle (stood out more to me)

PUNCHES- sdizzle (shit was close . . punches were weak but he had one that made me laugh)

FLOW- dope name (lines were even so it created a good flow)

PUNCHLINEz OF THE BATTLE:
im not laughing, look at my face, do i look symithetic
ur so slow, u couldn't win a bronze medal at the special olypic
get it, i didn't think so, ur lyrically challenged
cuz ur sucky rhymes minus ur flow = a horrible balance
/\ props to sdizzle

VOTE- sdizzle

please peep my signature and drop an honest vote . . get at me

That was the only personal I saw in this battle. This was an ok battle in my opinion. There werent to many crazy punches though SDIZZLE whole verse were basic punches.

Dopeman your verse was aight I kinda like hte slim jim line. But overall this battle was just pretty damn simple I thought. but my votes gonna have to got to.....

V/SDIZZLE.

Sorry Dope man....But I hope yall cant vote on my battle and return the favor...people sleepin on that for real...

cough up cuz noone votes

aha ys scurred way to rapbattles then diz jk...why u never on aim no mo...

weak ass battle...IMO
Dope= as sum guy said, sum of ure liens were auwful man they really were, but sum were pretty tight, ya verse seemed to pick towards the end...6/10

Diz=hmmm....ya aint really elevated much since i last saw ya ass on rapboard...remmeber all the battles we had (IN WHICH I WON EVERY TIME :D )
Ya flow has always been good though, thats wanna ya strong points, ya structure in this verse kinda suprised me too, though again ya vocab has always een weak i aint seen anything to make me think other wise....but im going with you on this one.....

Vote=diz...overal a betetr verse, had harder punches although both verse were weak on that part...