Born to Kill vs. :)
 

I called out for anyone...

He answered up.

So here we go.

10 - 12 lines.

Due in an hour or so...

Good luck.

born to kill your a hick... so what are you doing holding a SET A MICS?
with over 200 battles on this board its obvious you need to GET A LIFE
how the hell you always on the net kid do you even have a JOB
or is all you do sit on your ass.. battle kids and get DR votes and SLOB KNOBS?
seen your family pics on member pictures and kid youll always play the FAILURES PART
i mean gosh dang i aint know they got computers now in TRAILOR PARKS
kid your lack of incomes ALARMING
i mean dudes so poor even the rats that live in your house are STARVING
kid behind the internet persona your a REAL WUSSY
your raps are like "tampons" cuz they just "FEEL PUSSY"
this battles no COMPETITION, ill kick your ass with STRONG PRECISION
your lyrical skills are like those weapons of mass destruction their NON EXISTENT

Morph his mood, when I show everyone Smiley's a bore...
Cuz like not hittin shift, this kid won't be smiling no more. ;0
Mouth wide with shock, and a fucked up eye from punches...
But keeps his hair hidden, don't want ya ta see tha scrunches.
Cuz he's nothin but a bitch, in fact, the whole damn while...
I fucked him with this verse, he just kept giving me that smile.
So forget changing him/her whatever, I'm not even sure of ya sex...
But I'm sure ya ain't gettin any, cept the rapings you get in text.
Smiley oughta try audio, perhaps there he'll finally find flow...
Cuz tha kid's got an ear for music, cept his is like Van Gogh's.
Smiley's totally gay, gets so happy when his mouth an cock play...
But look, mom was right, he didn't cut it out, so his face froze that way!

This was a gud battle
flow: i thought that smiley had sum gud rhymes in there with sum good sentences in there; BTK also had a gud flow but didn't make so much sense as smiley
structure: BTK takes this one cuz smiley's structure was bad cuz he put his last words in capitals what is a little bit fucked up; BTK had a gud structur with a gud wordplay
punchlines: Smiley tkas this one cuz he had more and better punches than BTK cuz I felt that smiley's punches came harder than BTK's and BTK didn't had so much punches
personals: I didn't saw so many personals so this is a tie; need to work on personals guys
Overall vote: smiley........but real close; gud battle BTK(sorry)

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112309
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111593

born to kill your a hick... so what are you doing holding a SET A MICS?
with over 200 battles on this board its obvious you need to GET A LIFE
kinda played, but an ok punch/personal
how the hell you always on the net kid do you even have a JOB
or is all you do sit on your ass.. battle kids and get DR votes and SLOB KNOBS?
whack and played
seen your family pics on member pictures and kid youll always play the FAILURES PART
i mean gosh dang i aint know they got computers now in TRAILOR PARKS
lol good personal
kid your lack of incomes ALARMING
i mean dudes so poor even the rats that live in your house are STARVING
kinda weak
kid behind the internet persona your a REAL WUSSY
your raps are like "tampons" cuz they just "FEEL PUSSY"
ehhh played but creative if that makes sense
this battles no COMPETITION, ill kick your ass with STRONG PRECISION
your lyrical skills are like those weapons of mass destruction their NON EXISTENT
ok



Morph his mood, when I show everyone Smiley's a bore...
Cuz like not hittin shift, this kid won't be smiling no more. ;0
lol creative and a nice punch and persoanl. Great line
Mouth wide with shock, and a fucked up eye from punches...
But keeps his hair hidden, don't want ya ta see tha scrunches.
ok
Cuz he's nothin but a bitch, in fact, the whole damn while...
I fucked him with this verse, he just kept giving me that smile.
kinda weak
So forget changing him/her whatever, I'm not even sure of ya sex...
But I'm sure ya ain't gettin any, cept the rapings you get in text.
lol nice
Smiley oughta try audio, perhaps there he'll finally find flow...
Cuz tha kid's got an ear for music, cept his is like Van Gogh's.
ehh ok
Smiley's totally gay, gets so happy when his mouth an cock play...
But look, mom was right, he didn't cut it out, so his face froze that way!
played first line, ok second

Overall BTK took this match. I think :) came too inconsistent. Some of hie lines were nice, but then he came with either played lines or filler which fucked his flow and verse. BTK had a good clean verse with punches in almost every line.

Please drop an honest vote here guys. Honest. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112157 thanks

I"m gonna have to highly disagreee..............

born to kill your a hick... so what are you doing holding a SET A MICS?
with over 200 battles on this board its obvious you need to GET A LIFE
^this is a played punch vs. Born we all know he needs to get a life..
how the hell you always on the net kid do you even have a JOB
or is all you do sit on your ass.. battle kids and get DR votes and SLOB KNOBS?
^lil stretched.....kinda of a sex line decent at best.......
seen your family pics on member pictures and kid youll always play the FAILURES PART
i mean gosh dang i aint know they got computers now in TRAILOR PARKS
^ehehhe this was a nice punch good wording
kid your lack of incomes ALARMING
i mean dudes so poor even the rats that live in your house are STARVING
^blah this is like an old your momma diss.....
kid behind the internet persona your a REAL WUSSY
your raps are like "tampons" cuz they just "FEEL PUSSY"
^hmmmm this doesn't make much sense but i'll give it to ya.
this battles no COMPETITION, ill kick your ass with STRONG PRECISION
your lyrical skills are like those weapons of mass destruction their NON EXISTENT
^and an OK closer and punch ...overall a good verse....


Morph his mood, when I show everyone Smiley's a bore...
Cuz like not hittin shift, this kid won't be smiling no more. ;0
^BAHHAHA OMG NICE I LOVE IT AMAZING KO ITS OVER....
Mouth wide with shock, and a fucked up eye from punches...
But keeps his hair hidden, don't want ya ta see tha scrunches.
^meh calllin him a women not bad......
Cuz he's nothin but a bitch, in fact, the whole damn while...
I fucked him with this verse, he just kept giving me that smile.
^Okey good personal and punch....
So forget changing him/her whatever, I'm not even sure of ya sex...
But I'm sure ya ain't gettin any, cept the rapings you get in text.
^bahahah another really good punch....damn
Smiley oughta try audio, perhaps there he'll finally find flow...
Cuz tha kid's got an ear for music, cept his is like Van Gogh's.
^original creative and intelligent very nice....
Smiley's totally gay, gets so happy when his mouth an cock play...
But look, mom was right, he didn't cut it out, so his face froze that way!
^ehhe this is a sex line but a good one.....I think B2k took this good battle by both but that closer and opener were just too hard hitting peace out......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111942

damn underated stop voting in my battles.. you obviously have hate for me.. so i would like it if you would stop posting hate votes in my battles.. you dont see me voting in your battles do you

thats fine i guess take it away i broke it down....gave you props where you deserved it and all....you can take it away though be my guest son ,.....sorry for the freepost just responding........................................ .................

very nice and close battle... Both had a nice verse but smiley face got it, not cuz of flow or any shit, simply; his punches were harder cuz he used better personals... both had good use of metaphors 'n wordplay so pretty close battle but gotta go with smiley on this one...

best bar:
seen your family pics on member pictures and kid youll always play the FAILURES PART
i mean gosh dang i aint know they got computers now in TRAILOR PARKS

vote: smiley

Smiley aka :) :

punches were ok, flow was ok, personals were pretty tight, trailor park line was pretty cool, structure was ehh, overall - ok verse..


BTK :

nice punches, flow was awesome, personals were good, all lines were awesome excpet for van gogh and 2 bar <-- didnt get em, structure was perfect, overall - very nice verse

nice battle, btk gets this..

vote - born to kill

return da favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111358

btk doesnt have to vote (already voted)

what the hell that vote offers no explanation to why you voted like you did.. all you said was this person did this nice.. this person did that nice.. that vote shouldnt count man

fine, heres a better one.. but dont DQ IT!!

punches - btk: his punches came harder than :) did, liked all his lines but 2nd bar and van gogh line, :) had a few good ones too, trailer park was off the hook!..

flow - btk: his was just better overall, :) came off at sometimes when lost it for him..

structure - btk: <--PERFECT! well almost, but :) was a lil harder to read, nice job btk..

personals - btk: very close, i love personals, but :)'s werent as good and not as many as btk's..

opener / closer - :) : closer was off the hook and so was the opener, btk's were pretty good, but not as good..

that better? btk still gets it, nice job..

vote - born to kill

return da favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111358

ok btk ur flow was good and ur structure was good but ur punches werent at all

smiley, nice drop, u packed it full of good personals and punches and btk didnt have any on u

vote smiley

return tha favour in future

here man uppin this....................................

this was a close battle....so i broke it down like this..

smiley

flow- 8/10
structure- 9/10
punches- 7/10
personals- 5/10
creativity- 4/10
wordplay- 6/10
39/60

BTK

flow- 5/10
structure-6/10
punches-4/10
personals-7/10
creativity-6/10
wordplay-5/10
33/60

vote-smiley-39/60

dis battle was top.good stuff form both..Born To Kill took it jst coz his puches and flow were a bit beta...dats all i can say..it was very close..
v/Born To Kill....keep it up both of u!!!

whatever man uppin this.. its 4 to 3 uppin for some more votes

ite this battle was quite a nice won,
both dropped some nice punches but i think you,
both you'sed to much filler here..............
i think b2k had punches smileys were witty but b2k's,
were clever and also hit harder with more consistency,
structure def goes to b2k smiley you came abit streched at times,
and dont CAPS your ,punches man............
personals would have to go 2 smiley even tho most were played,
bout b2k they were nice.......flow lacked from smiley as bit streched man,
b2k your flow was ite part form that van goth line wordplay was wak there,
wordplay had to go to b2k tho smiley came to simple,,,,,

close and good battle tho you 2 props but vote-b2k...harder and more consistent............


plz hit this up now http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...144#post1159144 thx alot........pz