lilbreeze v. lyric
 

10 lines
blind spit
no dickridin
no recyclin
no feedin

good luck..... ill spit 1st


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checkin in up in this bitch....... im back baby.............................................. .............

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peeps think im from the south from muh "spitten skillz"
they call me black and decker cuz of how im "takin drillz"
if u underestimate me, then rethink how ya "thought of me"
cuz i could cut the blood flow from ya heart like ya missen an "artery"
ya think im soft, but i could be "raw"
cuz im crossin lyric worse then a wonder "bra"
this kid thinks he tuff, so he tried to "holla"
but the truth is hes so much of a bitch he should wear a "collar"
imma keep goin and neva "retire"
cuz afta im done spitten these people be askin fo "mo fire"!

Sig says free agent, finally crews are getting smart you see?
Lilbreeze named himself after how much he can intimidate me
Tryin ta talk shit in Bitchslapped, doubt your really a gangsta in reality
Hurt ya feelings? Sorry, name implies your weak, like antique tapestry
From the Bronx must be bilingual, you speak whackness and bitch
He aint a chef but tossed his own salad so he could spit ill shit
How the fuck you ever get four wins, with your faulty lyrics man?
Fo real tho, must have more dickriders than RB has useless spam
Yuu jus a flyweight dawg, lower than even a lightweight G,
We aint on the same level, I could topple you wit a lilbreeze

Breakdown:

Lyric
Punches:7/10
Flow:6/10
Structure:8/10
Multies:4/10
Metas:5.5/10
Personals:7/10
Total:37.5

lilbreeze
Punches:5/10
Flow:6/10
Structure:3/10
Multies:3/10
Metas:7.5/10
Personals:4/10
Total:28.5

About the multies, neither of you had any so i just gave it a 3 to even it out...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112201 You guys know what to do

i agree with dope name....but my shit is a lil different

lyric
flow:7/10
creativity:8/10
punches:6/10
personals:8/10
structure:9/10
metas:3/10
Total:41/60

lilbreeze
flow:6/10
creativity:4/10
punches:5/10
personals:3/10
structure:3/10
metas:3/10
Total:24/60

lyric took this because he had harder punches alot better personal and his structure wa together and not all ova the place

uppin #1, drop an honest vote here guys and leave a link

up 2

i vote for lyric...

his lines were harder hitting with more skillz involved..

other dude was nice also but lyric was better

he took these cat's: punches, flow, skillz, metas', disses, hardness..

he wins..please vote here

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112445

yo can you hit this up so i can battle again....i will return the favor...pc
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111543

uppin3. Leave a link and it will be hit

Come on yall, uppin number 4

uppin number 5. Dun sleep on this, leave a link and it will be hit

lil breeze - structure was good......flow was pretty good........vocab was ok........multis were nice.......ok metas.......wordplay was good.......some of the punches hit hard.......ok personals......

lyric - structure was good......flow was on target......vocab was good......multis were nice.......pretty good metas......wordplay was ok.......most of the punches hit hard.......ok personals.......

breakdown -
structure - tie
flow - lyric
multis - lilbreeze
metas - lyric
punches - lyric
personals - lyric
creativity - lilbreeze

conclusion - considering lyric took it in punches and personals, and punches and personals win battles, ima say he gets my vote.......

VOTE - LYRIC

ok heres how this 1 went

ilibrease = your flow was ok and also the structure but you lacked vocab and the punches/personals just didnt hithard.

lyric = nice flow through out the piece. punches were good for the most part also had some nice personals. vocab woz ok.

flow = lil
punches=lyric
personal=lyric
vocab=lyric
structure=lyric

vote=lyric

CAN YA VOTE ON THE BATTLE UNDER MY SIG. RETURN THE FAVOUR. THANKS

Punches: Lyric, Breeze had very weak punches, if he had any.
Wordplay: Lil, he had about 3 wordplays, Lyric had none. Lilbreeze, step up your wordplay though.
Multis: Lil, he had mostly 1-3 syllables, Lyric had all 1 syllables
Personals: Lyric, most of his verse was personals, good job coming up with those.
Opener: Lyric, opened decent, Breeze opened with a wack punch
Closer: Tie, both closed very wackly.

Vote - Lyric

LilBreeze, you need to step up, make your lines longer, think up some creative punches, but not too creative. Lyric you gotta flip some multis, your verse could sound a lot harder.

if u underestimate me, then rethink how ya "thought of me"
cuz i could cut the blood flow from ya heart like ya missen an "artery"
Def, LilBreeze's best bar

How the fuck you ever get four wins, with your faulty lyrics man?
Fo real tho, must have more dickriders than RB has useless spam
Best bar, but you could've mad that into a wordplay easily