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Tactixx 02-05-04 10:02 PM

Tactixx Vs. Picture perfect
 
lemme know when you get in this thread

M&rk 02-05-04 10:19 PM

ite.......checkin int blind spit 10-15 lines due in halfy right??????????????????????????????????????

Tactixx 02-05-04 10:20 PM

yeah sure....sounds good

M&rk 02-05-04 10:21 PM

ite.....................................i'll have it up within da time peacce

Tactixx 02-05-04 10:21 PM

ill go after you....so ill tell you when i see yours

M&rk 02-05-04 10:33 PM

no its a blind spit and no biting just go whenever

Tactixx 02-05-04 10:36 PM

ok im starting now......
ill be quick

M&rk 02-05-04 10:49 PM

yo mines done, i'll put it up there right after u put yours up, ta make sure u show

Tactixx 02-05-04 10:50 PM

My overall opinion the guy's on the wrong page,
take your place on your float in the gay pride parade,
can't hide you're ashamed, pick another career,
better steer clear im known for knowing no fear,
against me losses are bound appear on your battle record here,
America don't want you but they did want 2-pac,
but 2-pac's dead and America wants you shot,
im sick of rippin this kid, someone get me a flu shot,
man im tired so this battle im gonna end it,
you never had a title so you dont have to defend it,
wake up tomorrow and pretend it didnt happen,
and off-line......you can pretend you're good at rapping....... :banghead:

Tactixx 02-05-04 10:54 PM

ok there it is...........................................

M&rk 02-05-04 10:56 PM

Whus dis shit wit tactixx u lyin, imma tell ya what the fact is
Cant get a girl, nothing ta mack with, cat need some practice
But no girls wanna touch a partial shaved vigina, pokes like a cactus
U say u get pussy zero to be exact
U is the pussy all juicey and wet this cat never ganna get respect
Specially startin yo record wit out a win
Never ganna get props like snoop and dre with out a juice a gin
This cats a nobody like mark suwyer if he didn’t write huckle barry fin
He look like sam cassel, but an even uglier twin
You da type that call out ja ta fight
This battles like me next ta fifty, just laugh at the sight
I didn’t com easy u knew tha cost battling a none newbie for once u ganna pay wit a loss

anxiety 02-05-04 10:58 PM

exact and repect dont rhyme, just thought id mention that

Tactixx 02-05-04 10:59 PM

nice... im goin to bed...heh

uppin for votes

M&rk 02-05-04 11:12 PM

hahha, it does if u got a dirty slang................uppin for votes, i'd be tight if five people actually voted fo dis shit

Center Sight 02-05-04 11:22 PM

Specially startin yo record wit out a win
Never ganna get props like snoop and dre with out a juice a gin
This cats a nobody like mark suwyer if he didn’t write huckle barry fin
He look like sam cassel, but an even uglier twin

^^good from picture perfect.. made me laugh


America don't want you but they did want 2-pac,
but 2-pac's dead and America wants you shot,
^^good from tact.. good wordplay too

but the rest of the verse didnt hit too hard, closer was iight, flow was decent.. picture had a better flow, and hit punches hit a little harder, the sam casell line cracked me up.. i think he dissed a little harder so.. vote=picture

return an honest vote?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112229

and/or

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...49&page=1&pp=15

M&rk 02-05-04 11:53 PM

uppin vote for this and drop a link i'll hit chu back.............................................. ..............

Tactixx 02-06-04 07:37 AM

uppin....(2).......lookin for some honest votes

Tactixx 02-06-04 03:59 PM

uppin.......don't sleep please someone vote or voice on this its my first one

D.liver.E 02-06-04 04:34 PM

exact 'n respect rhyme... ok both had some basic verses, picture had some better punches, thanks to his better vocabulary, tactixx work on that vocabulary and your punches, use more metaphors 'n wordplay... both keep elevatin'

best overall bar:
can't hide you're ashamed, pick another career,
better steer clear im known for knowing no fear,

vote - picture
drop votez here:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112531

M&rk 02-06-04 10:54 PM

uppin.................drop a link i'll return da favor............................................. ....................

M&rk 02-07-04 01:08 PM

uppin..........2 me 0 other cat, jus get dis closed up drop a link i'll get chu a real vote............................... and if u wanna battle me drop me a message

M&rk 02-07-04 10:06 PM

uppin............................................. ................................drop a link i'll return da favor.............

Word Definate 02-07-04 10:30 PM

picture perfect had more wordplay and punches, ven tho they were weak...they still hit harder... vote - PP

Return the favor and vote on my battle in my sig

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Token

Tactixx 02-08-04 10:25 AM

Uppin....finish this battle already.......drop me a link and i'll vote.
:thumbup

dirtyendzone 02-08-04 02:59 PM

tactixx tried to rhyme shot with shot. that is whack. if i could vote, it would be for picture

dirtyendzone 02-08-04 02:59 PM

Hit these up:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111280
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110315

Tactixx 02-08-04 07:03 PM

uppin this shit....its almost finished need some votes
drop a link and ill vote

Fo-Real 02-08-04 09:52 PM

picture perfect took this one had better punches wit similies. and st8 clownin da other cat. and the other guy had some played rhymes and said sum dumb shit that took away from his flow
vote-pictureperfect

Fo-Real 02-08-04 10:03 PM

ite i can vote now so my opinoin'll count
vote-pictureperfect2 yet agian

M&rk 02-09-04 11:58 PM

yo i smoked this foo, jus get the unedible done and get me two more votes ta close this jazz out, drop a link i got chu.........uppin .................

Holmes Jr. 02-10-04 12:11 AM

Here's how it goes down..Tactixx I was dissapointed in you on this one, you proved yourself way more than an amateur in your other battles but this was just weak, there was no speical wordplay and everything was played as fuck and the vocab was all just simple as fuck. PicturePerfect your punches hit way harder, your vocab was alot beter, i mean some of the lines were filler, but overall your shit was way more original..you got my vote

Return the favor on my batt agains Sir Q Layshun please..

M&rk 02-10-04 03:41 PM

one more vote get at this, not even need much explainin jus someone close this out.............uppin.......

M&rk 02-11-04 04:24 PM

chummon wit da one more vote, drop a link i'll drop an honest vote.............................................. ...

Fo-Real 02-12-04 12:23 PM

pic clearly won this battle someone vote and get this pole out so i can kill his ass

Daffer22 02-12-04 12:33 PM

Gud Battle
Flow/I felt that picture had a better flow b/c he had sum nice rhymes in their with a lot of variation and a gud wordplay, I didn't felt a gud 'beat' with Tactixx
punchlines: They both had sum great punches but I thought that the punches from picture just came harder, Tactixx also had sum gud punches but he hadn't such as picture
personals: Tactixx had gud personals while picture just tried to have personals, Tactixx you just need to work on your punches, picture, you must work on your personals
structure/ They both had a gud structure goin on so..
Originality/ Picture was more original than tactixx cuz he had sum nice lines in there and Tactixx had to many lines which were played

Overall vote: picture (but close)


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