Dev vs OutCome
 

you spit first, i'll follow
drop as soon as you can...

this a check in.. Why dont you just blind spit.. Im ready....Are you?

im ready, drop yours then ill follow straigth after.....

Era.. eh eh eh era eh era eh era.... eh eh eh

now.. ahem... sit Judges sit down...

Alright class heres a simple equation, dev plus rap equals… a-bad-situation
So were does he come off? is his affixation hooked and on wack masterbation?
Hes just mad, 24 and still cant find a job - geta mic and isa part time fag
Cant rap an to bad this cats drops enough wack herb shit, to call his crap schwag
Punching with illusion fist, no real hits so i expose you like janets titty
Your not witty, check your sig d your at wits end, and it'sa real pitty
I knock all hemispheres off the Y-axis so there pointing down
A I cant help but leave you x-up with your frown all fliped around
What the fucks an En-gland, that's not what you use to spit
Im expecting a good battle, maybe he'll be usual, and use his pre writs

wicky whooooooa

So ya excepted the battle… but the OutCome is set
Ya might have planted the ‘seed’… but they’re drowned cos ya wet!
And I approach you with ease… ive got no problem with defeat
but your verse tells me… this kid’s always getting beat!
So, don’t matter what you put in… your never gonna reap
You couldn’t elevate with helium… you’ve got a permanent leak!
And NO your not respected… and rb’s eyes aint reading
If ya bars were breathing… it be lung cancer… ya wheezing!
OutCome, come-out…. No difference ya still a fag
In or out the closet… still in the dark… wit skillz you wish you had!

lol fuck... i should have read over the basterd, lmao

Era.. eh eh eh era eh era eh era.... eh eh eh

now.. ahem... sit Judges sit down...

Alright class heres a simple equation, dev plus rap equals… a-bad-situation
So were does he come off? is his affixation hooked and on wack masterbation?
First line is good, second is mad played
Hes just mad, 24 and still cant find a job - geta mic and isa part time fag
Cant rap an to bad this cats drops enough wack herb shit, to call his crap schwag
played and whack
Punching with illusion fist, no real hits so i expose you like janets titty
Your not witty, check your sig d your at wits end, and it'sa real pitty
I swear of heard the 1st line before....Bit? Nah I'll trust you but its played already
I knock all hemispheres off the Y-axis so there pointing down
A I cant help but leave you x-up with your frown all fliped around
ok
What the fucks an En-gland, that's not what you use to spit
Im expecting a good battle, maybe he'll be usual, and use his pre writs
ehh played, but ok

wicky whooooooa



So ya excepted the battle… but the OutCome is set
Ya might have planted the ‘seed’… but they’re drowned cos ya wet!
hmmm ok I suppose
And I approach you with ease… ive got no problem with defeat
but your verse tells me… this kid’s always getting beat!
ok
So, don’t matter what you put in… your never gonna reap
You couldn’t elevate with helium… you’ve got a permanent leak!
lol..hehe kinda played but I laughed
And NO your not respected… and rb’s eyes aint reading
If ya bars were breathing… it be lung cancer… ya wheezing!
nice
OutCome, come-out…. No difference ya still a fag
In or out the closet… still in the dark… wit skillz you wish you had!
played

I think Dev pulled this one out. He was more creative in his punches. Out some of ya lines were stretched and lose the bold dawg. ALso try and be more creative and original with your punches/personals/metas. Dev you had some ok personals and punches. Good battle guys.

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Dev vs. Outcome
 

Outcome:

Era.. eh eh eh era eh era eh era.... eh eh eh

now.. ahem... sit Judges sit down...

Alright class heres a simple equation, dev plus rap equals… a-bad-situation
So were does he come off? is his affixation hooked and on wack masterbation?
Hes just mad, 24 and still cant find a job - geta mic and isa part time fag
Cant rap an to bad this cats drops enough wack herb shit, to call his crap schwag
Punching with illusion fist, no real hits so i expose you like janets titty
Your not witty, check your sig d your at wits end, and it'sa real pitty
I knock all hemispheres off the Y-axis so there pointing down
A I cant help but leave you x-up with your frown all fliped around
What the fucks an En-gland, that's not what you use to spit
Im expecting a good battle, maybe he'll be usual, and use his pre writs

wicky whooooooa

Flow- Had good flow and structure
Personals/Punches- Some good personals and punches.A Few punches
were a little played though.
Vocab- decent vocab, it gets the job done.
Creativity- I liked the creativity with the personals ( hemispherses,
wits-end). The masterbation punch was played out as well as the
pre-writs line, but they were worded well so it worked.

Dev:

So ya excepted the battle… but the OutCome is set
Ya might have planted the ‘seed’… but they’re drowned cos ya wet!
And I approach you with ease… ive got no problem with defeat
but your verse tells me… this kid’s always getting beat!
So, don’t matter what you put in… your never gonna reap
You couldn’t elevate with helium… you’ve got a permanent leak!
And NO your not respected… and rb’s eyes aint reading
If ya bars were breathing… it be lung cancer… ya wheezing!
OutCome, come-out…. No difference ya still a fag
In or out the closet… still in the dark… wit skillz you wish you had!

Flow- Also had good flow and structure
Personals/Punches- I liked personal about the 'seed', but I thought
that the first line was a little played. Some good
punches here, especially liked the 6 & 7th line and
and the closer.
Vocab- Decent, but again it flows good so it works
Creativity- Pretty good, some nice personals and punches,a few lines
a little played but still a good job


I felt that this was a pretty close battle. Both showed good flow and structure as well as some creativity. While there some good personals and punches, I just felt that Dev's hit harder.I cant officially vote( not enough post) but I would give my vote to: Dev

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I think Dev won this batle because of his better flow and structure,
And his punches are well better than da other guy outcomes....
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aiight not a bad battle but i thought DEV took this 1 because his punches hit harder and his flow was smooth...................
OutCome ur verse was aiight but ur flow was Patchy..............
V/DEV

Can u hit this up because i took the time to read urs............
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Yo a serious vote now
flow: Dev had sum gud rhymes in there and better wordplay than Outcome cu i felt that Outcome was forcing to much and because of that his flow didn't feel gud
punchlines:DFev had more sick punches and they came harder; Outcome you have to work on your punches and personals cuz I didn't saw any gud punches or personals
structure: both had a gud structure goin on
Originality: Dev has sum lines goin that were origanal lets say more original than Outcom
Outcome you need to elevate
VOTE DEV

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thnx, the ones that READ rules on voting...lol....upp[2]

flow-overall flow goes to Dev,lines were kept shorter, not so stretched. outcome, your flow wasn't bad either but your lines were a little long in spots

punches-i think dev had these as well, more creative at least, outcome has good punches as well but some are kinda played

vocab-tie

personals-outcome took the personals with the england line, the wits end line, all were good. dev had okay personals, not really very many except for name play

creativity-this was a tie, both came with some fairly creative verses in this battle

overall-Dev

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This is how I see it.

Flow=Dev, I had to give this one to Dev, both had okay flow but Dev's was much easier to read than Out's. Some of Out's line's were just to stretched.

Punches=Dev, he had some funny shit in there, and his punches just hit harder. Out, you had some okay shit, I just didn't think that they hit as hard.

Personals=Tie, I liked both of these verses in the personals catagory, you both had some good personals so it's a tie.

Vocab=Tie, I think you both had some okay vocab, it's not as good as it could have been, but you both had enough vocab to get the job done in this one.

Over all=Dev, you had some good punches and personals, your vocab could have been a bit better but it was still okay, and your flow was good as well. I liked this drop it was a good read and made me laugh a few times, it was a good drop, keep it up.
Out, you had an okay verse, you had some okay punches, and you had some good personals, your vocab was okay but could be improved upon, your flow needs some work mostly in structure because of the stretched lines but over all it was a good verse, keep at it and everything will pull together.

Vote=Dev

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To me a battle consists of two things mainly, and that is flow and punchlines but ofcourse intelligence, wording, vocab, technique and wittiness also come into the equation, so first is the flow and i felt that dev edged this one barely, but his punchlines outshone outcome, there wasn't really any amazing wording nor vocab or wittiness in this battle, i would have say some intelligence did show from both, ofcourse, lol, on the real dev had this through better quality pucnhlines and maintaining a good flow, pz

V/Dev

Ok. . .

OutCome - I Wasn't Feeling Your Verse At All, Too Many Played Lines, Bold Was Annoying. . Only Good Punch That Actually Hit Were The Two Hemisphere Lines, Flow Was OK, Structure Was Fine, Vocab Was Pretty Good IN The First Couple Of Lines But THen You Went Downhill. . Opener Sucked Bad Ones, Wack Masterubation Line Is Played As Fucking Fuck. . Closer Was Bad Too. . Gaaah, Played. . Your Verse Seemed Like A Park For Kids. . I Know You Got Better. . You Had Better Personals Than Dev. . You Win One Catergory. . Woot.

Best :

knock all hemispheres off the Y-axis so there pointing down
A I cant help but leave you x-up with your frown all fliped around
^^^ Nice. . Only Decent Punch You Had. .

Dev - More Creativity, Hella Nice Structure, Flow Was On-Point. . And Here's The Key To This Whole Better. . BETTER PUNCHES. . Permanent Leak Line Is Mad Played But Still A Bit Funny. . Your Closer Was Horrible And Played. . But That's The Only Two Complaints I Have. . Maybe Could've Included More Personals To Match OutCome's, Bu It Was Blind, So No Hate. . 2nd Line Was Nice, How You Flipped His Sig, Good Stuff. . Punches Should Win Battles, Although That's Not THe Case Here Sometimes. . Glad To See People Noticing. .

Best :

And NO your not respected… and rb’s eyes aint reading
If ya bars were breathing… it be lung cancer… ya wheezing!
^^^ Haha, Nice.

Vote - Dev.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...09&page=1&pp=15
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Honestly... the structure was a bit off
The BOLD was gay as fuck......
When you bold some of ya verse....
It makes it look like shit..
Ya punches were decent...
Personals were weak.. flow was decent
Overall..........10/20




Better....
Punches hit harder than OutCome's
Personals were decent.... some played
A few of the lines were played.. but it happens
Flow was pretty good...
Structure was better than OutCome's also
Overall........13/20


V/Dev
Came a lil harder
Verse looked better
ect...




ILLunatic v.s wordplay