KRAKKA T vs MAGIC MK
 

10 TO 15 LINES
NO DR VOTES
NO CREW VOTED
NO HATE VOTES
SPIT WITHIN 30 MINUTES AFTER CHECKIN IN
I SPIT FIRST GOOD LUCK :laugh2:

Checkin In................
Getting Ready To Pic Up The Mic And Spit

you ave got no idea what you are getting yourself into

god dammit you are a slow mothafucker. is that how long it takes you to write your lyrics. go back home you backyarder.

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Yo In This Battle With Magic...
Im Gettin Weird Vibes Like Im Battlelin A Fagot.....
The Story Of This Battle Is That U Just Dont Have It..
U Just Another Victim Who Needs Practice....
U Just Could Never Hack This,they Be Callin Me Krakka Cus Im White....
And The ''t'' At The End Means That Im Tight....
Me Rippin Ur Wack Ass Just Doesn't Feel Right....
Im Not Even Tryin To Merk Ya Whimpie Ass With All My Might....
When I Saw Ya Style I Thought The Was Somethin Nice...
So Heres Some Advice Work On Ya Lines But Until Then Im Sayin Good Night...

yo.
allow me to start by sayin............................................. .....................................
your lyrics are shit and you fuckin suck.
you really cant spit and you win by luck.
i'm not scared whatever this faggot wants to do to me,
shoot at me
try to corner me
order me
try to kick me
lick me.
i am the one with the magic mic
and your the one who's mums a dyke
and will fuckin slaughter,
your little baby daughter.
how did ya like that?

Hahahahahak...lmao
Upinn For Votes Number 1.......

read my signature

come on people! Magic MK wit da Magic Mic

yo here is a honest vote..................................

personal=magic he came at krakka the most but not many punches
punches=krakka took this easily no explanation
structure=krakka magic yo shit was crazy just elevate on that
flow=krakka magic some of ur lines were to short to get a good flo
multies=magic well you did have better multies

overall-krakkat magic elevate and you'll get there

Get A Poll Vote Please
Uppin Number 2
Voteeeesssssss.....

Uppifor Votes Number 3
Votes.........
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BreakDown ....

Kracka T's verse



Yo In This Battle With Magic...
Im Gettin Weird Vibes Like Im Battlelin A Fagot.....
( Nice opener , your flows much better off the bat this time , personal 7.5/10 )

The Story Of This Battle Is That U Just Dont Have It..
U Just Another Victim Who Needs Practice....
( Simple effective , Good Flow 7/10 )

U Just Could Never Hack This,they Be Callin Me Krakka Cus Im White....
And The ''t'' At The End Means That Im Tight....
( Aigght , Coo , Personal Compliments to yourself , not as effective as to your opponet but you pulled it off 7/10 )

Me Rippin Ur Wack Ass Just Doesn't Feel Right....
Im Not Even Tryin To Merk Ya Whimpie Ass With All My Might....
(LOL , kinda of a corny line , weak 6/10 , but you whipped this together fast )

When I Saw Ya Style I Thought The Was Somethin Nice...
So Heres Some Advice Work On Ya Lines But Until Then Im Sayin Good Night...
( I lost you on the first line ?? ... 6/10 )

Total 33.5 /50 67%


Magic Mks Verse :

yo.
allow me to start by sayin............................................. .....................................
your lyrics are shit and you fuckin suck.
you really cant spit and you win by luck.
( Bare basics here , You fucking suck? , this aint 6th grade 5/10 )
i'm not scared whatever this faggot wants to do to me,
shoot at me
try to corner me
order me
try to kick me
lick me.
( Convoluted line here , you need to work on your structure, you might spit it tight , but we try and use the bar system here easier to follow 5.5/10 )

i am the one with the magic mic
and your the one who's mums a dyke
( Yo Man , MOM jokes are DEAD , Find something else ?? 5/10 )
and will fuckin slaughter,
your little baby daughter.
how did ya like that?
( Stupid ending , Real Weak - Supa Played 4/10 )

Total 19.5 / 40 48.8 %

Nothing Real special by both MC's , Krakka T takes the trophy ( but its a small one ) , Magic - Yo Dude I know the deadline was 30 mins and you spit quick , but some of your lines were pretty laimb , don't get discouraged , work on your flow and structure and keep elevating ....

Peace to Both and All
CrazyE

Somebody Hit this up , and I'll give you a breakdown ..... No favas Tho
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112213

ok....

-KrakkaT...better flow, better punches,
better use of your wordplay and your
metafors, also had a better structure
that wus overall better and you came
harder... even tho you didnt try...

-Magic...you had the multis... i didnt
see personals form either of you really,
multis all you got no flow/structure
horribkle punchlines looks like a 5
year old wrote your shit....

My VOte-KrakkaT...return favor wit honest votes on my battle in sig(assassin)
and this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110949

flow- T, other doo wus choppy
multi- Magic, choppy but had the multi's
punches- Magic, gay and mom jokes are too played but magic still had a decent opener wit it
originallity-neither thas where u could tell this was a weak battle. get some pre-writen topics or sumin so u cover summin other than gays and moms
vote- KT , cus he looked like he new what he was doin a lil more

return the favor drop a real vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112426

ight uppin for more votes number 4
even tho right now i got my self a ko goin but yeah vote

upin number 5 i think yea but vote people ight.......
i need 2 more
and im up this 3-0

damn...krakka t you merked him by far
magic mk-lmao, he don't know what he gettin into ahhahhahaha i spit on my computor screen i was laughin so hard at you

vote-krakka t

i voted on this, yall go vote on my battle against cashmere

Mods Sorry For Freepostin In This Shit But Isnt This A Knockout 3-0 I Win ?
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Ok Here It Goes

Magic = Flow And Structure Were Passable, Punches Were Near Non Existant. And Vocab Was Shockin.

Krakka T = Good Flow And Structure Was Ok. Punches Hit Harder Than Magic, Vocab Was Ok.

Breakdown

Flow = Krakka
Structure=krakka
Punches=krakka
Vocab=krakka

Vote Krakka

Please Please Please Return The Favour On The Battle Under My Sig.thanks

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Token

sorry for freepostin but i need one more vote this battles being slept on
......

Stop Sleeping People I Voted On Mad Battles But No One Wants To Vote This Shit Comeon
Sorry Mods But This Is Messed Up I Be Tryin To Be Patient But Cats Be Laggin It Yo

krakka T, i already voted fo yo shit.............................................. .............................

WHAT THE FUCK????

No hate Magik, but that was hurt!! You jus bit Xzibit:

"shoot at me
try to corner me
order me
try to kick me
lick me."
...switchin like fake identities, while i gotchya runnin for ya lives, while I sit in the coat room waitin on mine...or sum shit.

Jesus man...I hate it when people do dumb shit like that. I didn't even like Kracka's verse, but yours was worse. Five of your lines, weren't even yours. Don't do that again.

Magik - nuthin great man, really gotsta throw in some wordplay, some intelligence. At least you opened and closed properly tho.

Vote Magik

WAIT! I fucked up, the vote should be to Kracka. This is how my post should go:

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WHAT THE FUCK????

No hate Magik, but that was hurt!! You jus bit Xzibit:

"shoot at me
try to corner me
order me
try to kick me
lick me."
...switchin like fake identities, while i gotchya runnin for ya lives, while I sit in the coat room waitin on mine...or sum shit.

Jesus man...I hate it when people do dumb shit like that. I didn't even like Kracka's verse, but yours was worse. Five of your lines, weren't even yours. Don't do that again.

Kracka- nuthin great man, really gotsta throw in some wordplay, some intelligence. At least you opened and closed properly tho.

Vote Kracka
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ok heres how it is
 

nice verse quick and short and got the poin across..........nothing really wrong with it.......good work...........



yo.
allow me to start by sayin............................................. .....................................
your lyrics are shit and you fuckin suck.
you really cant spit and you win by luck.
i'm not scared whatever this faggot wants to do to me,
shoot at me
try to corner me
order me
try to kick me
lick me.
i am the one with the magic mic
and your the one who's mums a dyke
and will fuckin slaughter,
your little baby daughter.
how did ya like that?

ok ovisly your a newb elevate and work on better punches AND personals..the only thing u really had good was your structuer.......if u need help elevateing PM me.......

v/KRAKKA T