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Chek'Neq vs illtalic
10-14 lines.. due an hour at latest.. i'll drop first.. no feedin.. blah.
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aight lets get this rolling
i'll drop soon also.. |
Look....
in all honesty u suck to me, so why bother tryin ya luck newbie, tearin up the RB members list is the only way ur 'rippin everybody'... u cant fuck wit me, and ya punches dont pay rent, it isnt an accident is it? God, i bet u deliberately dont make sense... this is more like a cat fight, what am i in this battle for? with all ya odd wordplay, u dont even belong on scrabble boards... lets be serious, even ull be able to tell im the best by far, ill do you a favor kid.. even things up and assist u by stretchin my own elementary bars... look.. whats that around your waist? it could neva be a belt, i'll end your text career here, then let u bitch that u can better yaself... u list ur interests as "eatin mc's".. an ur from god forsaken Africa conclusion: ur still in the 'Genetic Soup'.. jus waitin to get a taster... it aint safe fa u here kid.. iv put ya noose on an pulled the lever u may wanna Chek ya Neq now.. cos the floors jus dropped beneath ya...// |
…*Wasting A Verse*!! It’s like I’m *Fishing With Guns*, just a ‘Hook Is Enough’!! Battling me is like *Selling Weed With Four Leaves* ‘cause this kid’s ‘Pushing His Luck’!!//1
…I’m *Setting Mag’s Death Bed* and ‘Bringing Linens To His Attention’!! I’ll put *Pictures Of NokSide In His Mucus* just so he can be the ‘Spitting Image Of Perfection’!!//2 …You’re *Smelling Defeat (Deaf-Eat) Already*!! The *Potency Of Soundless Meals* ‘Fills Your Lungs’… I’ll give you a *Taste Of The Belt That You Deserve* and really leave you ‘Silver Tongued’!!//3 …Hope he ‘Fights Back’!! Like *Welfare Fallacies*, he likes flowers and ‘Lilacs (Lie-Lacks)’… I’ll *Drag Him Through Maurice Green’s Backyard Crooked* just to leave him ‘Side Tracked’!!/4 …‘Untold Mottos’!! I’m the *Poker Of Caves*, I ‘Fold Grottos’… I could *Swat Flies With The Clothing Magazine You Feature In* and you still couldn’t be a ‘Role (Roll) Model’!!//5 Ok thats 5 bars right there. Lets get the votes rolling |
1 minute late.. tsk tsk!
-uppitty fukkitty- |
naw i was right on point u posted the thread at 11:27
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Clock mus be outta sync..
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ayo, cheq obviously took this on wordplay and punches, but ills flow was better and sometimes i didn't know where your rhyming words were cheq, this is really hard ta decide but
vote - cheq i think this because of his creativity, but it was really hard ta decide http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112669 vote on that please |
Yo, this was a good battle. both of your verse flowed nicely and both had personals, but ills hit harder. both of you had quite good wordplay but again, ill takes it for me.
chek'neq has good punches but ill has better ones. ill took this battle for me. vote illtalic iv been honest and taken da time to vote on this battle, so plz return da fava. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112522 |
hell no!!
Rapin' masters vote does not count! thats a hate vote, me and him is battling now in another battle ofcourse he's gonna vote against me. Doesnt count 1-0 and uppin' |
damn!! that was a battle for real! lemme give a shout out to chek and my man illtactic cuz y'all was both bringin it!! Chek used really lyrical word play/vocabulary and ill straight up dissed him thru his whole verse! both of y'all get at me!
vote: draw |
aigh 2-1 uppin'
keep those votes coming people.... |
0-0 kid.. lmfao thinkin ur winnin!
an it should be 1-0 me cos the only voter wiv enuff posts was in my favour.. -uppn- |
uppin............................................. ....
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lol at chek, fucking herb, i think illtalic got this with ease, get rid of all the @#$%#$'s from ur verse chek, ill got it easily, not much to really say, did wanna read che's due to the: [qoute=lethalnjectionz]@#$%#$[/qoute] lol.
return da favor: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111358 NOT A HATE VOTE OR ANYTHING BITCH! vote - illtalic Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded |
tell me this vote counts itallic???...............
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I dunno kid..
-uppn- an plz drop a suitable explanation along wiv a poll vote. |
Still no poll votes?! wtf..?!
-uppn- |
So its gonna be one of 'those' battles huh?
I need this voted on so i can battle again. |
ill=
Look.... in all honesty u suck to me, so why bother tryin ya luck newbie, tearin up the RB members list is the only way ur 'rippin everybody'... ok start u cant fuck wit me, and ya punches dont pay rent, it isnt an accident is it? God, i bet u deliberately dont make sense... ok this is more like a cat fight, what am i in this battle for? with all ya odd wordplay, u dont even belong on scrabble boards... lol nice lets be serious, even ull be able to tell im the best by far, ill do you a favor kid.. even things up and assist u by stretchin my own elementary bars... umm ok look.. whats that around your waist? it could neva be a belt, i'll end your text career here, then let u bitch that u can better yaself... what?? blah u list ur interests as "eatin mc's".. an ur from god forsaken Africa conclusion: ur still in the 'Genetic Soup'.. jus waitin to get a taster... nice it aint safe fa u here kid.. iv put ya noose on an pulled the lever u may wanna Chek ya Neq now.. cos the floors jus dropped beneath ya... ok Chek'Neq = …*Wasting A Verse*!! It’s like I’m *Fishing With Guns*, just a ‘Hook Is Enough’!! Battling me is like *Selling Weed With Four Leaves* ‘cause this kid’s ‘Pushing His Luck’!!//1 umm ok …I’m *Setting Mag’s Death Bed* and ‘Bringing Linens To His Attention’!! I’ll put *Pictures Of NokSide In His Mucus* just so he can be the ‘Spitting Image Of Perfection’!!//2 ok punch …You’re *Smelling Defeat (Deaf-Eat) Already*!! The *Potency Of Soundless Meals* ‘Fills Your Lungs’… I’ll give you a *Taste Of The Belt That You Deserve* and really leave you ‘Silver Tongued’!!//3 ok …Hope he ‘Fights Back’!! Like *Welfare Fallacies*, he likes flowers and ‘Lilacs (Lie-Lacks)’… I’ll *Drag Him Through Maurice Green’s Backyard Crooked* just to leave him ‘Side Tracked’!!/4 blah …‘Untold Mottos’!! I’m the *Poker Of Caves*, I ‘Fold Grottos’… I could *Swat Flies With The Clothing Magazine You Feature In* and you still couldn’t be a ‘Role (Roll) Model’!!//5 na didnt feel this umm flow has to go to ill and also dose structure, chek i didnt like your structure at all, punches also go to ill as he hit harder. vote = ill < coz of a better spit |
vote=ill
good flow , soft punches, and focused chek lol what were u doing? i dont even think u mentins his name once, and you over did it with the punches...........calm down, half of them were garbage and they weer so forced it hardly made sense "You?re *Smelling Defeat (Deaf-Eat)" LMAO |
And finally a vote!
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ok here is my run down on this battle
Punches and Personals=Illtalic he came way stronger in these two categories Flow and Structure=Illtalic, dawg Chak'Neq ya juss have stretched line and it's hard to read, change it, good job though Wordplay and Vocabulary=Illtalic, he ripped and flipped the script on this kid in these categories, because he was more wittier Conclusion=Chek'Neq needs to elevate a lil, this was a merking by illtalic and it was a ood battle, but elevate chek'neq Vote=Illtalic |
whats with the fucken dick riding, even though my vote doesn't count and Ill was bringin heat, cheq's verse if anyone read it was out of this world. I would've voted cheq. Not dissn' you Ill, maybe underestimated the newbie. Cheq I really felt ya punches and you're wordplay. GREAT battle fellas.
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^ the fukk ya talkin bout 'outta this world'??!!
He didnt use a single personal.. anyone can jus spit metas.. no art in that.. now run along kiddo. |
open- illtalic (it was slick . . it was nice . . chek'neq's didn't seem like it hit hard enough)
close- illtalic (shit was slick as fuck! i liked the wordplay in it . . chek'neq's was just like a self gorlification thing . . didn't hit at all) personals- illtalic (stood out more to me) punches- illtalic (his shit was sick!) flow- illtalic (lines were even and it was easily read . . chek'neq's were over stretched . . no flow at all) nice battle fellaz . . just a lil some'm for chek'neq . . try evenin your bars dawg . . it'd make it an easier read . . and come wittier wit the punches and personals as well . . that's all that i have to say . . and oh! can any of yall peep my signature and hit that link up? it needs votes badly! drop an honest vote . . sall i ask . . get at me vote- illtalic |
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almost forgot about the sickest punch of the battle: it aint safe fa u here kid.. iv put ya noose on an pulled the lever u may wanna Chek ya Neq now.. cos the floors jus dropped beneath ya /\ clever as fuck! props to illtalic |
you've got to be joking!!! I really thought that the dudes voting in here knew what they were talkin bout. Something is up here. To say that Ill came close in word play is a joke, Ill got him in the punches...only coz cheq's verse didn't seem directly aimed at Ills. creativity, originallity vocab and all go to cheq. Someone said "even though I had trouble finding the rhyming words." Dude then read the verse again.....please, coz even the multis I give to cheq. Ill you brought heat, but u underestimated the newbie.
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where da votes at
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114144 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113450 pppppplllllllllleeeeeeeeeezzzzzzzzzzzzzzz |
dis was a ok battle
Chek'Neq...some ok punche most week tho...no flow or structure...personals were no good.....wordplay was ok...overall 5.5/10 ilttalic....so good punches...flow was aaiight...structure was ok.....wordplay was basic but effcetive....personals were basic also...overall..7/10 v/ittalic PLZ RETURN DA FAVA: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114198 |
dis was a ok battle
Chek'Neq...some ok punche most week tho...no flow or structure...personals were no good.....wordplay was ok...overall 5.5/10 ilttalic....so good punches...flow was aaiight...structure was ok.....wordplay was basic but effcetive....personals were basic also...overall..7/10 v/ittalic PLZ RETURN DA FAVA: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114198 |
Yo DeuceSquad.. ya need ta hop off Cheq's dikk now kid.. an get the fukk outta this thread before i have u reported.. an dont test me cos im dead sirius.
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aight ummm illtalic got this i thought because of better punches and personals
he had the better flow and structure along with better vocab and wordplay his lines were not stretched and the verse was pretty nice.....nice showing check-.......verse was stretched, didnt like the stars and shit and the strcuture was way off didnt like ur flow and i think ur verse was ok but for beter pun ches and i better verse....... v/illtalic can u hit my battle up in my sig then ill come back and poll |
polled................
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Not all the votes are gettin polled.. did i make it a 200+ post count to vote?
If a mods passin thru would ya count the valid votes an add them to the poll plz.. shits takin forever! -preciated- |
Old old old.
-upp- |
Chek'Neq i just like your verse better.Casual you thought just b/c he was abewbie that he couldn't flow. you underestimated your opponent. so thats why my vote goes to Chek'Neq-reason- his punchez hit harder and he had nice multiples.
vote=Chek'Neq |
Fuck off you moron.
Don`t vote on a battle of mine again. Ever. You have no idea what you`re talkin` about. |
The *Potency Of Soundless Meals* ‘Fills Your Lungs’… I’ll give you a *Taste Of The Belt That You Deserve* and really leave you ‘Silver Tongued’!!//3
that line murdered it, but ya lines can't be 3 lines long chek...ya strech ya verse again and you won't get the vote from me. but he took this with wordplay punches n vocab. this battle was not even close |
ill had this one...structure was better punches & wordplay were ok..but iLL got this one...it was an 'ok' battle...
vote = illtalic |
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