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Lust vs T west
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Another herb I gotta merk, another bitch I gotta fuck
How you gonna know how to beat me... ...When you didnt even know how to set this up! Couldnt make this battle, so you asked if I might Lemme guess... The next question u'll ask me is "is this thread where i type?" Can we picture Lust with gurls?...nah, it aint happenin By the lines u showin us...you got's no verbal tactics Stupid fuck, why for a battle is it a vet that you choose your name fits you perfect... ...cuz you must have a craving to lose! Puttin hyphins at the end of ya lines, what the heck? Oh, because all your punches are whack... ...you gotta use hyphins just to make em connect! You ain't good son, Just thank me right now for this loss So I can respond by saying... ...Welcome to Rapbattles.com! |
yo when i rip it i grab the mic and spit it right-
The ryhmes u spit against me better be perfect and make it tight- dont step to me with ur fuckign wreckless ryhmes- when you rip it like you do u dont deserve another chance- face it ur the worst and my skills will enhance- cant understand wat this dude is saying must be talkign like he got a lisp- rip that dick out ur mouth and spit it quick- ill go first, give you time to write your weak verse- T west lines or his bitchin, i dont know whats worse- Ill send ur ass to early retirement like barry sanders - this guy gunna post a verse, that looks like it was written by ann landers- |
yo when i rip it i grab the mic and spit it right-
The ryhmes u spit against me better be perfect and make it tight- this was so so dont step to me with ur fuckign wreckless ryhmes- when you rip it like you do u dont deserve another chance- face it ur the worst and my skills will enhance- decent but not hard cant understand wat this dude is saying must be talkign like he got a lisp- rip that dick out ur mouth and spit it quick- second part is nice ill go first, give you time to write your weak verse- T west lines or his bitchin, i dont know whats worse- aight Ill send ur ass to early retirement like barry sanders - this guy gunna post a verse, that looks like it was written by ann landers- very so so punch Another herb I gotta merk, another bitch I gotta fuck How you gonna know how to beat me... ...When you didnt even know how to set this up! very nice Couldnt make this battle, so you asked if I might Lemme guess... The next question u'll ask me is "is this thread where i type?" so so kinda hit hard Can we picture Lust with gurls?...nah, it aint happenin By the lines u showin us...you got's no verbal tactics Stupid fuck, why for a battle is it a vet that you choose so so kinda nice your name fits you perfect... ...cuz you must have a craving to lose! Puttin hyphins at the end of ya lines, what the heck? lmao funny Oh, because all your punches are whack... ...you gotta use hyphins just to make em connect! You ain't good son, Just thank me right now for this loss So I can respond by saying... ...Welcome to Rapbattles.com! all of that hit hard but didnt rhyme but was good personally.. i thought t west took this by a long shot punches The next question u'll ask me is "is this thread where i type?" Can we picture Lust with gurls?...nah, it aint happenin By the lines u showin us...you got's no verbal tactics Stupid fuck, why for a battle is it a vet that you choose that was nice...t this is how you should come in all your battle man peep my audio battle and the battles in my sig please |
ur shyt was horrible t u cnt flow fo shyt quit the game
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coo battle.......
i like T-West better though...he had some cool punches and disses.. i like how he structured his verse and he was consistent.. he didnt have any wack lines in his whole verse..pretty good the punch off his name was cool ..so was his closer lust-your verse was so so...nothing really got my attention like "oh shit!!"...but it was cool nonetheless..but u didnt hit hard enough to beat west with his harder punches.. my vote-T-West... now go vote on my battle with amabeaniggaforlife... |
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already voted but can yall peep this battle honestly please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111414 |
t-west took this lmao!
that hyphens line wus Ill.... (I might have to bite it) lol j/p nice spit by both but t-west had better punches,flow/structure and personals... he took this battle in every category including vocab... nahno one had vocab really... Lust your not very good you need to elevate in the following...punches personals/vocab/stucture...metafors... probly more... My V/T-West..Hit up my battles in sig verse Assain and Diverse! they gettin slept on like pillows... |
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T West has this hands down.... he had some nice punches like:
Another herb I gotta merk, another bitch I gotta fuck How you gonna know how to beat me... ...When you didnt even know how to set this up! Couldnt make this battle, so you asked if I might Lemme guess... The next question u'll ask me is "is this thread where i type?" ^^ 2nd was more of a diss rather than punch but still nice Stupid fuck, why for a battle is it a vet that you choose your name fits you perfect... ...cuz you must have a craving to lose! ^^ Good punch/personal His flow was a little stretched for me but the punches and personals owned this battle..... Lust was alright, obviously a noob, but he needs to work on harder punches, throw some personals and start usin some metahs n wordplay... shit was just too basic... good battle guys but this battle goes to T WEST |
a nice battle. a good verse by t. he had better punches and a better flow. his verse had more structure and it had better vocab.
physik had an aiight verse but it didnt contain any real punches or personals. there was an aiight flowand the structure was ok. but my vote goes to T west hit me bac on my battle plz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112927 |
T West has this hands down.... he had some nice punches like:
Another herb I gotta merk, another bitch I gotta fuck How you gonna know how to beat me... ...When you didnt even know how to set this up! Couldnt make this battle, so you asked if I might Lemme guess... The next question u'll ask me is "is this thread where i type?" ^^ 2nd was more of a diss rather than punch but still nice Stupid fuck, why for a battle is it a vet that you choose your name fits you perfect... ...cuz you must have a craving to lose! ^^ Good punch/personal His flow was a little stretched for me but the punches and personals owned this battle..... Lust was alright, obviously a noob, but he needs to work on harder punches, throw some personals and start usin some metahs n wordplay... shit was just too basic... good battle guys but this battle goes to T WEST Return the favor plz, vote on my battle wit Luminary TeXt, it really needs votes |
Structure: Tie
Respect: T west Vocab: Tie Multies: NONE Flow: Tie VOTE: T west yo return da favor da linkz are in my signature Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Token |
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First off neither one of the verses were all that great but T west had him none the less. T had better punches and personals that killed everything lust wrote, but his structure was horendous and it hella threw off his flow. lust was just the opposite in a way because he had the structure, but his flow was off anyway and he didn't have any good punches or personals. i dont know about lust but T coulda done alot better. because of the punches my vote goes to T west.
VOTE_T WEST open battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112317 |
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