Tactixx Vs. Crunch
 

check in when you see this
10-15 lines
20-30 mins you go first

ummm you set up another battle too.....
you better show for this shit

yo im here i have no clue wut im doin tho wtf is goin on

just post your battle verse now 10-15 lines........within a half hour or so
aight

and ill check in when i see it and post mine within a half hour

are you gonna drop or should i go first???

Whatever i'll spit first
 

I'm ready for you are you ready for me? Ready to be fed by a steady I.V??
Yo i got a hunch that even my weakest punch would leave Crunch crushed and stumped,you couldn't spit a decent verse if i gave u a month,
you just a punk, and to this page you're just a rookie,
hey look his first battle he's playin hookie,
you mistook me, for someone who wouldn't beat you,
if i ever meet you, put you in high-heels to complete you,
this guy's just a bitch, but we let them compete too,
weak ass emcee and that's how ima treat you,
I'm playin back time like rewind reverses,
I'm slayin fine minds and defeating your purpose,
kid's too slow to drop.....keeps deleting his verses.


mleh......not my best but it should do.... :hump:

Look likes i got my first no-show
where you at punk??

uppin to give this guy one last chance.....

i posted this shit last night so you've had plenty of time to respond.....
drop something today at least....

im new on this scene but i always keep shyt tight
mah trigga finger stays squezzin through out the nite
u got lucky playa cuz mah computa froze
but ya weak ass rhymes put me in a doze
now im serious u gunna make me go american history x
bite the curb nigga u no wuts comin next
that aint style nigga ill switch to the a k
laugh a lil bit let u beg spit at u kid then let it spray
u dun now how it goes down in the streetz in mah hood
ull end up dead fuckin wit me now i hope u understood
im done smashin on u kid im feelin kinda bad
ill just end ya life n all the good tymes u had ~1~

.....there you go.....now people will vote on it.....

aint no1 votin on shyt

Uppin (1)................

yo, this was a weak battle but tactixx edged it i reckomn purely b'cos his verse had a better flow and structure. both of you had weak punches and personals. You both need to evaluate a bit, but keep it up.

vote tacktixx

retrun da favour plz man...http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112927

this was a kick ass series and of all of the punches between the two, this was the best. Crunche line, sumin like 'froze'....'doze' was just lame and tactixx had much better flow. my vote goes to tactixx.

Hit these up:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111280
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110315

uppin...need some votes.....
leave a link and i'll return the favor

votes??? anyone???
ill return the favor

uppin for votes.....

tactixx took this mainly bcuz his flow and structure had some good punches and overall struck harder
was still a weak battle but my vote is
tactixx

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uppin.......someone vote....il return the favor

opener:tactixx edged out on top with his opener..the flow alone was structured well.
crunch's opener was just filler, it really had nothing to do with anything..crunch you need to try and not use that gun shit, it makes you look really amature.... :tactixx::

structure:crunch's structure was decent, It was just a little choppy because each line was short a sylable or two....
tactixx structure changed after the third line, but it was still flowing pretty well.............::tactixx::


punches:tactixx had all these, but they got weak and played after the fourht line....::tactixx::

wordplay:none

multiples:tactixx whole opener used multiples ,I wish the whole verse was typed like that......
crunch needs to elevate and quick, or he is gonna end up losing a lot.::Tactixx:

closer:tactixx closer was simple and played, but not as played as crunch's closer::tactixx:

vote tactixx

uppin....finish this already.....

Uppin....gotta go to work.....drop a link or tiltle and i'll check it out when i get back

uppin.......
vote and leave a link
ill check your shit out and vote

tactix had better wordplay and punchlines in this battle.. i felt like crunch came wack and didnt post this best shit

tackik out did crunch in the wordplay, mulites.. disses and creativity
categories.. the only thing i saw that shined from crunches verse were a little bit of personals other than that tactik took this battle hands down


aiight man can you please vote in this battle shit needs votes man

heres the link http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113409

Uppin.......drop a link...........

yo tactixx ur hsit was nice but it didnt really rhyme except fo a couple lines , crunch ur shit rhymes but it was filler shit and didnt hit hard

yo weakkkkkk ass battle hardly any pucnhes structure was aiight i think there was only one multi in the whole battle, tactixx takes dis cuz he had da only real punches i think thats why he takes this battle.
vote=tactixx
sorry i cant poll

I'm goin to bed......uppin while i sleep...dont sleep....finish it up.....
drop a link......

aight, i was really dissapointed in this battle, but i have to go with tactixx. Even though half of his shit didnt rhyme, he still put punches in their, crunch, ur shit rhymed but i didnt even really know u were dissin him. Both of you need to work on your flow, and tactixx u need to work on your structure, but overall i go with tactixx for some good punches.

vote/Tactixx

i still dont know how to drop a link, but hit up my battle with GestofHonor