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{Jihad} vs OutCome
5-10 bars
No feeding Blind Spits No crew voting Due in less than 2 hours from time of both checkins |
This my checkin.. Are you ready, my verse is done..
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Holy shit - its osoma bin laden
im ill..snap ya neck n leave ya head bobin pulled up by the back, show you to the world Everyone stares like whats happen to that girl? West london huh? never been there, dont care to To bad theres no talent look they sent you In my first two lines i left you crippled Leave you pist, like pugs traded for pitbulls Thinking to himself, "what i godda strong bit" Jihad? didnt that nigga die in a 9/11 flight Ill give you portriats to make this timeless Battled you cause of poor taste, your rhymeless The definition is, no one to bite, define this? If im right your battle will be lineless I decide to research, and came across your openmic What the hell was that shit, you were high right? Im not expecting much really im not.. In all accuallality im not expecting you to drop |
Lmao, thank you for making those last lines really count!!!
Upping for you ass, man at least drop. |
bitch..
LOL...ignorant fawk..
Smokin this victim, Ji's puttin a choke hold on your system.. Your past-gay, acting like ash tray from don't be a menace.. 'The outcome'..im winning it Valiantly with a killa mentality.. Hard? in Mortal kombat you chose freindships over fatalities.. Im pissed off with the ya flow -no groom- how are you the best-man?.. You rock MICS in shows? lol only when rapping on your web-cam.. Left dead fam serving martini's the only time your controling bars.. putting fire to dude, theres no title for you like stolen cars.. Faggot ass cryin bout Holy war and laden and the way my fists sparkin.. Leavin the Outcome confused like blind lesbians in fish markets. lol (sniff) Takin your pride, hold it for ransom, leavin it ripped in a second.. God really stumbled upon talent, when he tripped in my presence.. Out's like cattle with a sense of humor the laughing stock.. Ji blasting off, Outcome?..''He dont Bling, He be bangin-cocks''.. Bitch, I'll have the crowd rollin...ova ya grave in laughter and cries.. Like fairy tales, I'll proceed to live happily ever...after you die.. I DID THIS TO YOU... Remember my name... lets get some votes in.. peace -1- |
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jihad check yo pm box and reply
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HOLY SHIT this is the best battle of the whole fuckin week....in my opinion jihad takes dis cuz his flow was better his punches were stronger and his punches made me laugh outcome u hade sum ill lines dere too but jihad made me laugh...i cant poll but if i could jihad u'd get my vote...no hate
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OUTCOME =
Holy shit - its osoma bin laden im ill..snap ya neck n leave ya head bobin OK pulled up by the back, show you to the world Everyone stares like whats happen to that girl? BLAH West london huh? never been there, dont care to To bad theres no talent look they sent you NICE PERSONAL In my first two lines i left you crippled Leave you pist, like pugs traded for pitbulls NICE Thinking to himself, "what i godda strong bit" Jihad? didnt that nigga die in a 9/11 flight HARSH, BUT OK Ill give you portriats to make this timeless Battled you cause of poor taste, your rhymeless NA The definition is, no one to bite, define this? If im right your battle will be lineless LOL, NICE I decide to research, and came across your openmic What the hell was that shit, you were high right? UMMM NO Im not expecting much really im not.. In all accuallality im not expecting you to drop OK FINISH JIHAD = Smokin this victim, Ji's puttin a choke hold on your system.. Your past-gay, acting like ash tray from don't be a menace.. DIDNT RHYME 'The outcome'..im winning it Valiantly with a killa mentality.. Hard? in Mortal kombat you chose freindships over fatalities.. NA NO PUNCH Im pissed off with the ya flow -no groom- how are you the best-man?.. You rock MICS in shows? lol only when rapping on your web-cam.. NICE LINE Left dead fam serving martini's the only time your controling bars.. putting fire to dude, theres no title for you like stolen cars.. UMM OK FIRST LINE Faggot ass cryin bout Holy war and laden and the way my fists sparkin.. Leavin the Outcome confused like blind lesbians in fish markets. lol (sniff) LOL, LOL Takin your pride, hold it for ransom, leavin it ripped in a second.. God really stumbled upon talent, when he tripped in my presence.. NICE Out's like cattle with a sense of humor the laughing stock.. Ji blasting off, Outcome?..''He dont Bling, He be bangin-cocks''.. BLAH Bitch, I'll have the crowd rollin...ova ya grave in laughter and cries.. Like fairy tales, I'll proceed to live happily ever...after you die.. NA AND PLAYED VERY CLOSE BATTLE, I'M GIVIN THE FLOW TO OUTCOME BUT THE STRUCTURE TO J, PUNCHES I THOUGHT OUTCOME CAME THE STRONGER, JUST AND HAD MORE PERSONALS. VOCAB GOES TO J ALSO. THIS IS A TIGHT BATTLE. VOTE = OUTCOME < ONLY ON THE FACT I FELT YOUR PUNCHES HITHARDER. PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOUR AND VOTE ON THE BATTLE UNDER MY SIG. THANKS . |
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Out had the better punches, more personal and direct. I also liked the flow better,the structure helped.
Ji u beat Out on creativity but ur structure wasn't as good which kinda ruined ur flow. Vote=OutCome Jihad peep my battle wiv Baz187 an drop an honest vote, appretiate it |
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^^^ OutCome Hadda Verse I aint Never Seen Really.. his stylz Different then Alotta Peeps Here..Read it Twice, then You'll Understand His Flow Better.. Ji-had..i like your avvy First..Second, your Flow was Boring..Punches were Ok, But Kinda Played..Dont givva Fuck what you say or think about this..my Post says 3 or 4, but i know iv'e been flowin longer then you, Especially on R.b.. Over-all.. Not bad of a Battle..Ji-had, your not bad, but your stylz Old.. cant Poll yet Vote - OutCome |
any1 with a bit of experience and knowledge wanna vote?
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Be quiet, first you post a day late then you feed off my verse when the rules say not to... LoL
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OUTCOME =
Holy shit - its osoma bin laden im ill..snap ya neck n leave ya head bobin Not bad thought u cud of dun better pulled up by the back, show you to the world Everyone stares like whats happen to that girl? Naaa didnt like this line horrible West london huh? never been there, dont care to To bad theres no talent look they sent you Nice line....this 1 made me laugh In my first two lines i left you crippled Leave you pist, like pugs traded for pitbulls didnt get this 1 Thinking to himself, "what i godda strong bit" Jihad? didnt that nigga die in a 9/11 flight Nice liked this Ill give you portriats to make this timeless Battled you cause of poor taste, your rhymeless Get rid of this line The definition is, no one to bite, define this? If im right your battle will be lineless Lol made me laugh agen nice line I decide to research, and came across your openmic What the hell was that shit, you were high right? not bad but ok Im not expecting much really im not.. In all accuallality im not expecting you to drop nice finisha JIHAD Smokin this victim, Ji's puttin a choke hold on your system.. Your past-gay, acting like ash tray from don't be a menace.. Wack line cum betta than this 'The outcome'..im winning it Valiantly with a killa mentality.. Hard? in Mortal kombat you chose freindships over fatalities.. NAAAA dont like this eitha Im pissed off with the ya flow -no groom- how are you the best-man?.. You rock MICS in shows? lol only when rapping on your web-cam.. lol nice Left dead fam serving martini's the only time your controling bars.. putting fire to dude, theres no title for you like stolen cars.. ok ish Faggot ass cryin bout Holy war and laden and the way my fists sparkin.. Leavin the Outcome confused like blind lesbians in fish markets. lol (sniff) lol but u fed off his verse Takin your pride, hold it for ransom, leavin it ripped in a second.. God really stumbled upon talent, when he tripped in my presence.. nice Out's like cattle with a sense of humor the laughing stock.. Ji blasting off, Outcome?..''He dont Bling, He be bangin-cocks''.. Get Rid Bitch, I'll have the crowd rollin...ova ya grave in laughter and cries.. Like fairy tales, I'll proceed to live happily ever...after you die.. Naaaaa ok battle but im givin this 1 2 outcome y?his flow and structure was better and had the better personals and punches also jihad fed of his verse in 1 of the lines so outcome gets this outcome go poll vote on this now plz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113153 once u poll voted imma cum bk hit this up wit a poll....... Jihad cud u also hit ^^^ it up wit a vote plz |
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outcome go poll vote on my battle and leave a lmsg 2 say u have then i will cum bk here and drop my poll vote the link 2 me battle is on the 1st page
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up.
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poll voted
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You newbie fucks. Outcome....your verse was garbage...nothing more, possibly less. Virtually everything about it was shit. What little punches you did have were weak as fuck. Jihad...used wordplay...had some nice concepts...much harder punches then outcome. There were a couple lines that were too extended...and a couple played. It wasn't a bad verse...with some polish and some work, you could be dope. Just keep the creativity up. Try and get in elevated front lines...get away from these newbie sluts.
Vote ~ Jihad |
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Out: Holy shit - its osoma bin laden im ill..snap ya neck n leave ya head bobin laden's old...coulda picked a betta word than bobin, maybe hangin? my opinion pulled up by the back, show you to the world Everyone stares like whats happen to that girl? punch i guess, kinda weak West london huh? never been there, dont care to To bad theres no talent look they sent you first line's fillin, nex is aight In my first two lines i left you crippled Leave you pist, like pugs traded for pitbulls aight, you didnt really leave him crippled Thinking to himself, "what i godda strong bit" Jihad? didnt that nigga die in a 9/11 flight i don't know where the rhyme is here Ill give you portriats to make this timeless Battled you cause of poor taste, your rhymeless aight punch The definition is, no one to bite, define this? If im right your battle will be lineless aight I decide to research, and came across your openmic What the hell was that shit, you were high right? didn't go into his openmic, but the puch was aight Im not expecting much really im not.. In all accuallality im not expecting you to drop K, you already kinda said this J: Smokin this victim, Ji's puttin a choke hold on your system.. Your past-gay, acting like ash tray from don't be a menace.. Started aight, then didn't rhyme... 'The outcome'..im winning it Valiantly with a killa mentality.. Hard? in Mortal kombat you chose freindships over fatalities.. aight Im pissed off with the ya flow -no groom- how are you the best-man?.. You rock MICS in shows? lol only when rapping on your web-cam.. ok ok Left dead fam serving martini's the only time your controling bars.. putting fire to dude, theres no title for you like stolen cars.. alright rhyme, didn't really hit tho Faggot ass cryin bout Holy war and laden and the way my fists sparkin.. Leavin the Outcome confused like blind lesbians in fish markets. lol (sniff) You shoulda said "..fists spark it", that woulda flowed betta, nice punch tho Takin your pride, hold it for ransom, leavin it ripped in a second.. God really stumbled upon talent, when he tripped in my presence.. I dunno Out's like cattle with a sense of humor the laughing stock.. Ji blasting off, Outcome?..''He dont Bling, He be bangin-cocks''.. aight punch, good play Bitch, I'll have the crowd rollin...ova ya grave in laughter and cries.. Like fairy tales, I'll proceed to live happily ever...after you die.. Aight ending punches, goes to J, he had more, both kinda weak tho. flow, goes to J, Out, you had a couple non rhymers, really broke the flow. Aight, Ima say this is J's. When I have 100 posts, I'll vote, aight? Check out my battles. And Outcome, about that line you didnt understand: "I'll have you wining like you be crushin grapes;" I can't believe you didnt get it. Its a pun. Whining, like boo hoo, and wining like making wine? You crush grapes to make wine? get he? Joke joke ha ha??? aight, here's my battles, dont be pricks, hit em up, I took some time here: KayOhh vs Chugs4Life KayOhh vs Kuniva |
Thx for the experienced peepz...
these newbies suck.. uppin |
well, to correct oliver, this is not one of the best battles this week, but it was decent for frontlines..both had decent structure,and everything else was about even, flow was on point for both, but I have to give this one to Jihod because in my opinion, he had harder hitting punches that really connected harder and was better.
so my vote goes to Jihod http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112962 |
cool...
poll votes aswell plz... ............. . |
damn, I just have to post again, Jihod had some good ass wordplay, not that I read some shit over again..he should be winnin this shit 5-0..anyway..that lesiban line was hard,..that god line was tight also..this was just an continue of my last vote, so it wont get disqaulified..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112962 |
omg this is bullshit.....Jihad Ripped him....
Multis....Jihad....Off the hook and they made sense... Punches...Jihad...Outcome wordf your shit better...jihad nice Flow...Jihad for DAYYYYYYSSSS....outcome just didnt flow Opener....jihad....outcomes was just filler Closer....jihad.....agian dudes was just a filler(it didnt even flow) VOTE JIHAD.... Outcomes got some major d/r if this was on original it would be closed due to d/r |
Vote=OUTCOME
Reasons: Jilad, you had weak personals, not one punch you threw landed, its all basic you need to elevate or take shots better. Pluse YOU LOL'D in your rhyme, what are you a 10 year old gurl. who giggles in a battle???plus your structure sucks. keep it simple your shits choppy as hell OUTCOME, never seen a single post from you but you killed him with the one line...West london huh? never been there, dont care to To bad theres no talent look they sent you......then smacked him with .....Thinking to himself, "what i godda strong bit" Jihad? didnt that nigga die in a 9/11 flight.... good word play better flow structure, word play, and all around skill... |
that was amazin dogs, im biggin u up! u the men!
check this out http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=115505 |
yo this battle was close, jihad you had some good punches, structure hurt you, you need to make it easier for heads to be able to follow your flow, i gotta give this one to outcome, return the favor yall and check out my batttles, vango vs jdc, vango vs slaughta.
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This was a tought battle, I agree with majority of the above critiqes, you guys did a great job voting on this, one. But I'm giving this one to Jihad cause I thought that his was a bit more complex and was a little more peronsal.
--> ihad? didnt that nigga die in a 9/11 flight Ill give you portriats to make this timeless Battled you cause of poor taste, your rhymeless The definition is, no one to bite, define this? If im right your battle will be lineless I decide to research, and came across your openmic What the hell was that shit, you were high right? Im not expecting much really im not.. In all accuallality im not expecting you to drop<-- I kinda thought that this was generic, you kind of said the same thing over on how he's not even showing up (which is a good personal for sure) but i don't know if there should have been this much emphasis put on it. Now can some people vote on this one: we need a few more http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116046 |
GREAT BATTLE..but i gotta say Jihad won..hiz personalz wurr ill and he wuz tha betta rappa THIS tyme...but i wud like to c ya'll battle again latter...good job both
VOTE:JIHAD |
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