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Lawyer Vs. Testament
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Due Asap, Deadline Midnight Tomorrow No Hate Dr Crew Feeding Biting All That Shit |
:)............................. im in
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when are u gonna spit??????????? so i can do the same
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Im Keying, When Im Done, I'll Post.................
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fucka testament cuz i break gods rules with hellish verses/ he's from dopeness but but his crew derives straight from the circus/(wow)* Stomach Bubbly So Takes Off Pants im heating up you not on my level not even able to cause Arson/(his sig) claims he is Da Elite but ur career's over before it even started/(chea!) your like a blown out speaker, the listeners cant stand your words/ not only are u the shit, but you look like the whole fuckin turd/(oh my!) not dope is your location but my station is set on killin emcees/ u got no balls to battle me like u got mad raisin disease/ Super Death Bar Taking A Dump On Your Face cant get the best of this, im relentless ill without medicine/ No 'w' in your name so make this ya last 'will' and 'testament'/(hotness death killer)! |
i forgot to edit...the second line is cuz his crew is called insane joker lyricists
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Accepting My Callout? Stupid, Saw My Verse And Quacked...
Im Throwin Hard Punches,U Getin Demolished By The Impact! Wanting Me To Spit 1st? Shit Son, You Really Want A Beating?? Im Delievering Hard Hits Personally, Like Two Boxers Competing... Expecting To Get Votes With That Garbage? Lawyer Get Serious... Kid Named Lawyer, But Yet, He Still Aint Able To Be Imperious... Like Muhammad Ali, Im Knocking You, Uh-Oh, Now Hes Delirious... Wishing You Werent Alive, Cuz My Verse And I Are Deleterious... Im Pushing This Kid, Thinking You Dope Cuz Your Record Is 1-0? Nope, Cuz He's 1-1 Soon, I Merked This Kid, Like.............Whoa!.. |
ok heres how i saw this
lawyer = good flow and nice structure, punches were also good and ya had some personals. vocab was ok. ill = flow was even better and also was the structure. punches a lil weaker than lawyer but your personas were better. vocab was also ok. breakdown flow = ill struc = ill punches = lawyer perso=ill vocab = tie vote = ill < but only just good battle both. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOUR ON THE BATTLE UNDER MY SIG THANKS. |
ok votes.............but that is no key.......lol...took u 30 minutes..mine was 10...nice
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OK THIS IS HOW ITS GOIN DOWN LAWYER
PUNCHES:6/1O ...NOT BAD STRUCTURE:6/10...NEEDS ALITTLE WORK BUT PRETTY GOOD FLOW:5/10......WASN'T FELLING THE FLOW MUCH PERSONALS:8/10....WOW DONT CHANGE NOTHING YOU HAD SOME PRETTY GOOD STUFF FROM WHAT I SAW TOTAL SCORE:25/40 WORK ON THE FLOW AND STRUCTURE A LITTLE..OTHER WISE NOT BAD ILL TESTAMENT PUNCHES:7.5/10...U HAD SOME NICE PUNCHES STRUCTURE:7/10.... NOT BAD FLOW:7.5/10....U HAD A NICE FLOW PERSONALS:6/10....NOT BAD,BUT LAWYER HAD SOME BETTER PERSONALS TOTAL SCORE:28/40 THIS WAS A NICE BATTLES I WAS FEELIN BOTH MC'S BUT WITH A LTTLE BETTER VERSE ALL AROUND EXEPT WITH PERSONALS GOES TO ILL TESTAMENT VOTE:ILL TESTAMENT NO BEEF BUT SINCE I TOOK THE TIME TO VOTE ON THIS BATTLE CAN YALL VOTE ON THIS...THANX http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112614 |
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v/ - Ill Testament
why vote ill? Stronger punches...he basically takes this in every category except for the closer...that's where Lawyer beats you. Testament for punchlines and personals. Why? Much better and more witty...comon on Laywer...son, never use da word "turd". It's so childish and doesn't sound hard at all. Flow also goes to testament...very good syllable count der. No need to break down any further. Return the favour and drop honest votes on my battles plz. |
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Ill- Nice Verse , Good Structure, Nice Flow With Good Punches, Work On Personals... They Were Weaker Compared To Lawyers Ones
Lawyer- Aight Verse Elevate Structure Wus Not Good,Had Ok punches And ok Flow . Aight Personals Eventhough Both Were Kinda Played...Make Ur Lines Shorter..cuz They Kinda Stretched. Flow- Ill Punches- Ill Structure- Ill Vocab- Both Personal- Lawyer Overall- Ill Enjoyed- None The Verses were BAsic...Nothin ExtraOrd Na'mean Goodluck. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. read strobes voting rule. - Feeble Minded |
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lol dis was sum ill ass battle but i'd say lawyer takes dis one cuz he had comedy in his battle and his punches were harder thrown....but ill only lost by a lil in my eyes he had sum good lines like his closer but dat was only one line compared to lawyers whole verse..sorry cant poll
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peep links in my sig
Accepting My Callout? Stupid, Saw My Verse And Quacked... Im Throwin Hard Punches,U Getin Demolished By The Impact! pretty good Wanting Me To Spit 1st? Shit Son, You Really Want A Beating?? Im Delievering Hard Hits Personally, Like Two Boxers Competing... so so punch... Expecting To Get Votes With That Garbage? Lawyer Get Serious... Kid Named Lawyer, But Yet, He Still Aint Able To Be Imperious... second line....i have no clue Like Muhammad Ali, Im Knocking You, Uh-Oh, Now Hes Delirious... Wishing You Werent Alive, Cuz My Verse And I Are Deleterious... the first parts aight Im Pushing This Kid, Thinking You Dope Cuz Your Record Is 1-0? Nope, Cuz He's 1-1 Soon, I Merked This Kid, Like.............Whoa!.. lmao so so punch fucka testament cuz i break gods rules with hellish verses/ he's from dopeness but but his crew derives straight from the circus/(wow)* aint feelin it Stomach Bubbly So Takes Off Pants dont do that..makes verse wack im heating up you not on my level not even able to cause Arson/(his sig) claims he is Da Elite but ur career's over before it even started/(chea!) so so nothing special your like a blown out speaker, the listeners cant stand your words/ not only are u the shit, but you look like the whole fuckin turd/(oh my!) blah nothing...not hard not dope is your location but my station is set on killin emcees/ u got no balls to battle me like u got mad raisin disease/ .....................no Super Death Bar Taking A Dump On Your Face cant get the best of this, im relentless ill without medicine/ No 'w' in your name so make this ya last 'will' and 'testament'/ second part is tight overall i think ill took it...peep links in my sig |
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fucka testament cuz i break gods rules with hellish verses/
he's from dopeness but but his crew derives straight from the circus/(wow)* ^^not a bad opener... Stomach Bubbly So Takes Off Pants im heating up you not on my level not even able to cause Arson/(his sig) claims he is Da Elite but ur career's over before it even started/(chea!) ^^nice personal on the crew..but nothin great your like a blown out speaker, the listeners cant stand your words/ not only are u the shit, but you look like the whole fuckin turd/(oh my!) ^not feelin it...^^..um..YA not dope is your location but my station is set on killin emcees/ u got no balls to battle me like u got mad raisin disease/ ^^punch was there..but..not great^^ Super Death Bar Taking A Dump On Your Face cant get the best of this, im relentless ill without medicine/ No 'w' in your name so make this ya last 'will' and 'testament'/(hotness death killer)! ^^nice finisher...if u would write everything lil more like this..ud get more votes! Accepting My Callout? Stupid, Saw My Verse And Quacked... Im Throwin Hard Punches,U Getin Demolished By The Impact! ~nice flow..ok punch~ Wanting Me To Spit 1st? Shit Son, You Really Want A Beating?? Im Delievering Hard Hits Personally, Like Two Boxers Competing... ^^FILLER^^not a great punch Expecting To Get Votes With That Garbage? Lawyer Get Serious... Kid Named Lawyer, But Yet, He Still Aint Able To Be Imperious... ^^pretty ok personal...attempted Like Muhammad Ali, Im Knocking You, Uh-Oh, Now Hes Delirious... Wishing You Werent Alive, Cuz My Verse And I Are Deleterious... nice vocab...ok punch Im Pushing This Kid, Thinking You Dope Cuz Your Record Is 1-0? Nope, Cuz He's 1-1 Soon, I Merked This Kid, Like.............Whoa!.. Agh...not a strong finisher..not impressed FLOW...ILL punches..ILL VOCAB...ILL wordplay..tie structure..tie multies...n2many..but agh...Lawyer originality...tie overall...ILL TEST ^^ILL..just had the better...more well written piece....Lawyer had an average..spit good but nothin up 2 ILLs verse GOOD BATTLE U 2.. KEEP UPZ VOTE ILL |
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