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ILLunatic v.s Token
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Checkin In...
So Check In Ryan ........................ |
Check.
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Look at token, he's comin a bit short of cents
A mod caught up in glory... .....time to defeat 'em, and beat in some sense Remix, Token, Rekot... theres a list of changes Had problems with camarac... ......and thew a hissy fit over textual exchanges Get this kid a noose to reduce the abuse i produce Wittyness in disuse, i refuse ryans lame excuse *Coins, tokens, quarters, dimes, and nickels Flows like loose change..... ...embarassing enough, yet it sounds so simple Back in the day, couldn't get in Elements Elite So ya had ta join Elemental... ......yet again Token killed in the attempt of defeat |
Blah, KeyD... If you win you are on the elite list.
Your strategy is to annoy me.. Patience running thin Idiot hacked into my desk theme.. ..Just to get under my skin Kids concepts are wack.. with punches so played Fuck getting in Elite.. ..You're getting the opposite of OKed This is quite funny.. Something like a short joke but on the contrary.. ..You really are dope! I'm way ahead of you.. Never stood a chance Only slightly in view.. ..When taking a glance! Kids got no personality.. So Dry.. So Brittle I'd say you went overboard.. ..But your weight lies somewhere in the middle! |
Hmmm..........Heated..
Nice drop Token....... No beef.. still numba 1 stunna's |
ILLUNATIC =
Look at token, he's comin a bit short of cents A mod caught up in glory... .....time to defeat 'em, and beat in some sense LINE OK MAYBE A LIL PLAYED THO Remix, Token, Rekot... theres a list of changes Had problems with camarac... ......and thew a hissy fit over textual exchanges OK Get this kid a noose to reduce the abuse i produce Wittyness in disuse, i refuse ryans lame excuse NICE MULTIES *Coins, tokens, quarters, dimes, and nickels Flows like loose change..... ...embarassing enough, yet it sounds so simple LIKED THIS LINE Back in the day, couldn't get in Elements Elite So ya had ta join Elemental... ......yet again Token killed in the attempt of defeat UMMM OK TOKEN = Your strategy is to annoy me.. Patience running thin Idiot hacked into my desk theme.. ..Just to get under my skin NICE OPENER Kids concepts are wack.. with punches so played Fuck getting in Elite.. ..You're getting the opposite of OKed SHIT HOT LINE This is quite funny.. Something like a short joke but on the contrary.. ..You really are dope! OK I'm way ahead of you.. Never stood a chance Only slightly in view.. ..When taking a glance! UMM OK Kids got no personality.. So Dry.. So Brittle I'd say you went overboard.. ..But your weight lies somewhere in the middle! OK OK OPENER = TOKEN, I REALLY LIKED IT. FLOW = WENT TO TOKEN BUT ONLY JUST, HIS WAS A LIL BETTER ALL THE WAY THROUGH. STRUCTURE = TIE COZ THE STYLE WAS SOOO FIMILIER. PUNCHES = TOKEN LIKE HIS PUNCHES A LIL MORE. PERSONALS = ILL YA KEEPT THROWIN THEM AT HIM, MORE THAN TOKEN. MULTIES = ILL , FOR THAT LINE IN THE MIDDLE OF THE PIECE CLOSER = TIE, CANT DECIDE. SO VOTE GOES TO TOKEN, ONLY JUST, THE PUNCHES DID IT FOR ME, NICE BATTLE YA'LL VOTE = TOKEN |
Look at token, he's comin a bit short of cents
A mod caught up in glory... .....time to defeat 'em, and beat in some sense nice personal.. ..pretty direct.. ..but 8/10 Remix, Token, Rekot... theres a list of changes Had problems with camarac... ......and thew a hissy fit over textual exchanges nice combination of a punch and personal.. ..but 7/10 Get this kid a noose to reduce the abuse i produce Wittyness in disuse, i refuse ryans lame excuse wow yea.. ..nice multis no doubt.. ..8/10 *Coins, tokens, quarters, dimes, and nickels Flows like loose change..... ...embarassing enough, yet it sounds so simple nice lil meta fix up here and personal.. ..8/10 Back in the day, couldn't get in Elements Elite So ya had ta join Elemental... ......yet again Token killed in the attempt of defeat decent punchline.. ..7/10 ______________________________ Your strategy is to annoy me.. Patience running thin Idiot hacked into my desk theme.. ..Just to get under my skin nice creativity kinda blah.. ..ok punch.. ..but 7/10 Kids concepts are wack.. with punches so played Fuck getting in Elite.. ..You're getting the opposite of OKed kinda simple nonetheless showed vet quality.. ..ok punch.. ..8/10 This is quite funny.. Something like a short joke but on the contrary.. ..You really are dope! witty ass shit^.. ..nice personal.. ..7/10 I'm way ahead of you.. Never stood a chance Only slightly in view.. ..When taking a glance! nice creativity.. ..good punch.. ..8/10 Kids got no personality.. So Dry.. So Brittle I'd say you went overboard.. ..But your weight lies somewhere in the middle! good werdplay.. ..nice closer.. ..ok punch.. ..8/10 _______________________________________ token 38 score ratio.. .. ILLunatic 38 score ratio.. .. shit was pretty much tie but imma give it to ILL cuz had more multis,personals,metaphors.. .. vote/ILL.. .. return the favor and hit my battle in return |
Umm.. why isn't this in elevated?
I hate Front Line voters.. no one gets any wit or wordplay. Moved |
Thing wouldn't know how to vote if his life depended on it...
Umm token got this Sorry ILL but he just had more witty punches Tha oKed punch was ill..same with Toke's closer.. Ya opener was a good flip.. ILL didn't really see that many punches in yours... your closer was tha best on.. v/ Token hit this up...both of you http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113270 |
Blah, Moved back to FL cuz ILLunatic said so.
:) |
Vote Token
Both came weak as fuck. However token had the better lines.... I'm disappointed in you both. Ill - too focused on multis yet.... in using too many multis you are ignoring quality punches for an attempt at flow. You had 2 good lines. Token - Really weak from you as well.... but I counted 2 bars with nice potential. In a battle of 4 vs 2 the 4 wins. Hence Token takes it in a closer battle than it should have been. I'll explain further if ya'll start to bitch |
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...Fuck it... Token Wins... End of story...
......................BLAH....................... |
Lol, up.
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ILL - real nice verse.. cos of the rewards of winnin u came ya strongest.. consistantly hard hittin.. flipped the personals into effective punches.. structure made for a nice flow.. didnt see u fall off at any point.. felt the opener an closer goes in ur favour too..
Token - u didnt really seem to care about this battle.. almost like u wanted him in.. iv seen various versions of ya first two bars.. 'under my skin' an 'opposite of OK'.. Quote:
^ def ya best punch.. flowed nicely.. but i felt the rest was surprisingly general fa u an it werent as consistant as usual. VoTe = ILLunatic Drop a vote here both of u plz: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111096 ...1 |
^ The only way you would have seen my OKed line before is if every other mod did this when battling for their opponent in elite.
*shakes head* Up. |
Wrong.. its jus an all-round played concept.. sorry if that offends u.
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Look at token, he's comin a bit short of cents
A mod caught up in glory... .....time to defeat 'em, and beat in some sense ^the cents sense thing.....kinda played if you ask me...weak personal... Remix, Token, Rekot... theres a list of changes Had problems with camarac... ......and thew a hissy fit over textual exchanges ^heheh good backround check...this is an ok personal...alias stuff... Get this kid a noose to reduce the abuse i produce Wittyness in disuse, i refuse ryans lame excuse ^good multis...ok punch..... *Coins, tokens, quarters, dimes, and nickels Flows like loose change..... ...embarassing enough, yet it sounds so simple ^i don't like the rhyme scheme on this one...weak punch... Back in the day, couldn't get in Elements Elite So ya had ta join Elemental... ......yet again Token killed in the attempt of defeat ^ok this is a good personal....kinda played with the who beat who but overall not bad..... Your strategy is to annoy me.. Patience running thin Idiot hacked into my desk theme.. ..Just to get under my skin ^meh computer wordplay....i'd stay away from it.... Kids concepts are wack.. with punches so played Fuck getting in Elite.. ..You're getting the opposite of OKed ^this was nice wordplay.....i think its been done b4 but still nice... This is quite funny.. Something like a short joke but on the contrary.. ..You really are dope! ^hheh short but sweet a good punch.... I'm way ahead of you.. Never stood a chance Only slightly in view.. ..When taking a glance! ^ok punch....good wordplay..... Kids got no personality.. So Dry.. So Brittle I'd say you went overboard.. ..But your weight lies somewhere in the middle! ^good personal...good wordplay nice punch..... Overall i think token came with a more creative verse and took this with a direct hitting style rather than a style that encompassed many aspects of the battle in moderation which is how i felt illunitics came off......pz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ight=UnderRated ^this is a crew battle and it has no votes and i dropped the link like 5 times so plz return the favor...thanx. __________________ |
ILLunatic
Look at token, he's comin a bit short of cents A mod caught up in glory... .....time to defeat 'em, and beat in some sense wordplay,personal...= 6 Remix, Token, Rekot... theres a list of changes Had problems with camarac... ......and thew a hissy fit over textual exchanges personal = 5 Get this kid a noose to reduce the abuse i produce Wittyness in disuse, i refuse ryans lame excuse self hype,multi,personal = 5 *Coins, tokens, quarters, dimes, and nickels Flows like loose change..... ...embarassing enough, yet it sounds so simple repeated personal,filler = 4 Back in the day, couldn't get in Elements Elite So ya had ta join Elemental... ......yet again Token killed in the attempt of defeat personal = 8 Alot of personals, not really any punches to see, you repeated one personal twice...the whole money talkin deal... Your closer was a nice hard personal.... Overall = 28 ------------------------------ Token Your strategy is to annoy me.. Patience running thin Idiot hacked into my desk theme.. ..Just to get under my skin personal,punch,wordplay = 8 Kids concepts are wack.. with punches so played Fuck getting in Elite.. ..You're getting the opposite of OKed personal = 6 This is quite funny.. Something like a short joke but on the contrary.. ..You really are dope! wordplay,punch = 6 I'm way ahead of you.. Never stood a chance Only slightly in view.. ..When taking a glance! filler = 4 Kids got no personality.. So Dry.. So Brittle I'd say you went overboard.. ..But your weight lies somewhere in the middle! metiphore,personal,wordplay,punch = 9 Good combination of wordplay,punches,and personals...also only metphore I had seen all battle, You keyed more in the punch category than you did anything, aside from that one pathetic line of filler that was a nice verse and a very good key.... Overall = 33 ---------------------------------- Vote = Token |
Token takes this for the better verse.
Period. Better wordplay, better punches. Ill went for some multi's I'm not used to seeing him go for... But overall his shit was just soft. Even the personals. Sorry. Token didn't bring a whole lot of heat himself. Seen way better (harder)... But, the "desk theme" line and the closer really stood out for me. Thought the rest was slightly mild... But really good nonetheless. Easily, Token Peace Holla back right here!!! |
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