Intoxicated vs .iLL.
 

5 barz

.iLL. spits first

G/L

checkity, check check, checkitty, check check...look at frosty goooo00!

:laugh: checkins are so boring...why not be creative..

just some quick shit..

-\Opener/-
Ima Make This Nigga 'unknown', It'd Be Best If Ya Just Postpone//
Voters Mistake Me For A 'pituatary gland', I'll 'make this whore-moan'(hormone)// (1)

-\Sorry To Be So Mean..But../-
Beat My Style? Kid Your Like 'Egypt' In 'a-state-of-de-nile'//
Reaching My Potential Is Like A Fat Kid Running 5 Miles// (2)

Like 'Auntie Kaths' Cookies, Yur Gonna Get Rolled, Roasted, Then Off To Dispatch//
This Battle's Like Women's Sumo Wrestlin, The Way Its A Huge 'Miss-Match'// (3)

I Could Give A Fuck About Intoxicated Cause Hes Fake Like A Silicone Titty//
Only Time Yur Flow Is Dope Is When U Do "coke lines" Like Whitney// (4)

-\Dat, Dat..Dat's All Folks!/-
My fist to ya face will 'connect' Faster Than DSL//
Have Ya 'ringin' More Times Than The Alexander Graham Bell// (5)

aLL you dawG..goooood luuuuuck...

Son...
I've seen that wordplay before... is ya brain in two spots??
Tox blazin ya drop ... i'm so .iLL. it can't be .contained in two dots. (Think on this 1)
rhymes haunt you ... echo in ya head like base in a box
ya punches?? ya, they're all forced ... like fakin a cough
leave you traced in the chalk ... another case for the cops
splattered ya head on cement n cleaned ya brains wit a mop
im sick of wack ass bitches who keep claimin they nice
But really couldn't think under pressure wit their brain in a vice
got you duct taped n tied ... got razors n knives that takin ya life
you couldnt escape if you were a dragon in a cage made of ice

hmm...aight battle...
but v/ intox
He had better punches and tha only one with personals
liked tha 2 dots one.. and tha dragon punch
...iLL.. get rid of all that shit you put in it
like tha \I'm gay so I'll Label my opener/
you had punches but they were horribly played
And they were not directed to intox at all

.ill. change ya style dawg...we get what the opener and closer is dawg...jus fucks with the flow...your lines are stretched...came with too many played lines and/or concepts..try and be more creative and original with ya verse man....ANd shorten ya lines
Intox- you got this battle cause of ya personals...and punches..both were harder and more original than ills...Still a few played lines in there....but otherwise a ok verse...Vote=Intox

PLease drop an honest vote ehre guys...thanks... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112786

Dis goes to Intoxicated hands down

.ILL. - you need to change ur style cause it didnt flow as well as toxics.You had a few good punches but overall u had no theme or style to it your stucture was all over da place.

Intoxicated - Good rymes and flow you attacked well but couldove done better dont get me wrong it was a good spit. ya punches?? ya,
Overall good match but my Unofficial vote goes to : Intoxicated

P.S Need votes and opinions on 1 of my battles
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this battle was aight

ill you had some decent lines,

the miss-match line was funny but alot of them where played

the first two i have seen b4 with almost the same wording

intox was just a little better with nicer structure

i also didnt like the labels throughout the verse

vote intox

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AIGHT..

.iLL. ...your flow was aight..the punches seemed ok, but some were played like the Whitney Houston line..other then that your punches were ok..you could have used personals to help you in this one tho..

Intoxicated, your ryme scheme was better..and the first line was Nice..mad nice..LoL
you had personals that iLL didnt, so i give this One to you easily..It's about the Prersonals Kids..Honestly..in my opinion...

vote Intoxicated..


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Break down..

.iLL.:

Your lines were horrible…stop that got damn dashing ish..
Your punches were not good. But you directed it towards your
Opponent.
Favorite line..
“Only Time Yur Flow Is Dope Is When U Do "coke lines" Like Whitney// (4”
The line on the bottom was horrible as well



Intoxicated:

Nice structure steady flow..Nothing spectacular with punches at all to me..
Nothing witty work on that,..You probably rushed your verse because you
Seen what he typed…over all average..

My vote goes to Intoxicated only because of structure and a better diss scheme

Ill:

First of all, get rid of the labels...first bars an open, last is a close, we can count the bars.

-\Opener/-
Ima Make This Nigga 'unknown', It'd Be Best If Ya Just Postpone//
Voters Mistake Me For A 'pituatary gland', I'll 'make this whore-moan'(hormone)// (1)
Nice play
-\Sorry To Be So Mean..But../-
Beat My Style? Kid Your Like 'Egypt' In 'a-state-of-de-nile'//
Reaching My Potential Is Like A Fat Kid Running 5 Miles// (2)
again, nice play
Like 'Auntie Kaths' Cookies, Yur Gonna Get Rolled, Roasted, Then Off To Dispatch//
This Battle's Like Women's Sumo Wrestlin, The Way Its A Huge 'Miss-Match'// (3)
hahah...
I Could Give A Fuck About Intoxicated Cause Hes Fake Like A Silicone Titty//
Only Time Yur Flow Is Dope Is When U Do "coke lines" Like Whitney// (4)
ok ok
-\Dat, Dat..Dat's All Folks!/-
My fist to ya face will 'connect' Faster Than DSL//
Have Ya 'ringin' More Times Than The Alexander Graham Bell// (5)
nice

intoxicated:

Son...
I've seen that wordplay before... is ya brain in two spots??
Tox blazin ya drop ... i'm so .iLL. it can't be .contained in two dots. (Think on this 1)
not much ta think about
rhymes haunt you ... echo in ya head like base in a box
ya punches?? ya, they're all forced ... like fakin a cough
brutal
leave you traced in the chalk ... another case for the cops
splattered ya head on cement n cleaned ya brains wit a mop
ok, basic
im sick of wack ass bitches who keep claimin they nice
But really couldn't think under pressure wit their brain in a vice
wordplay worked
got you duct taped n tied ... got razors n knives that takin ya life
you couldnt escape if you were a dragon in a cage made of ice
Not really a close

Aight. when I read Ill's verse, I was thinkin "this is pre-written", but really amazin word play. And, before I read intoxicated's verse, I was leanin towards givin it to intox, cuz there were no personals in ill's. But, then there was only one ( I think ) crappy personal in intox's, so hell no.

Vote - Ill

LoL, You're just mad cuz i voted against your wack shit against John Dough....

Fuck outta here you hate votin newbie....

Uppin for some non hate votes

wtf...fuck you man, he had ur ass. These are all dick ridin votes, you piece of shit. You had fuck all on Ill. I jus saw ur link and went ta vote, since you voted on my battle. Fuckin punk, now Im not allowed ta vote against you?

FUck you stay outta my threads


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Fuck you, I'll post where ever the fuck I want, you sucked! Take some criticism you fuckin pussy!