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killaconcepz v.s wordplay
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30 min. to drop explained votes only |
checkin' in
good luck kid |
forget it i'll go first
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listen up, u not ready for the rymes that ur facin'
wordplay get ready for ur third disqualifacation{check sig} don't got no business battlin' this herb this dudes penis is so small he had to play wit' his words only way he could beat me is if he bit off rymes right afta i posted the battle he immediatly went offline battlin' me u could hurt ur reputation had to rip just to crush the speculation if u wasn't bbefore u batta get bold i've been known to battle cats in my backyard and leave em' to dry wit the clothes cuz i walk into beef walk in a club without no heat turn ya face into tenderized meat when i stomp nu wit' cleats my hands could speak sign language but i let my fist talk in ya sleep and leave a slash across ya cheek like it was part of ya speech in this battle there's no goal your'e achevin' you battled me in the aftanoon and bet u won't advance to the evenin' |
check your e-mail, i sent you rope, to suspend you from home/
killa swing, until you extend and splinter your bones/ you got no wins, and I doubt you can even scrap / your last verse had less punch, than an amputee boxing match / I'll enter your dreams..and choke you with freddy's sweater/ you couldn't win this battle..if you were the only one that entered/ I refract your future punches, like fragments of light/ to throw a limp fist, speeding back to your eye/ you should change your name to "why can't I win"?/ you better recycle your dopest verse, and add my name in/ make them all believe you typed that whole thing/ and don't forget to say you did it quick, so you couldn't bring/ your full potential, you aint a rapper, your screen name is a rental/ when the mods find you out, your gonna disappear, like florence henderson's dentals/ sorry I took so long..there ya go |
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uppin' 2 c'mon vote pleaze
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KillaConcepz- Your verse was alright, the flow was really weak I mean the syllable counts were like polar opposites..liked your punches, especially the penis one and your closer, I didn't see any multis but thats cool, I see you put some personals in there um the verse wasn't too original just sounded typical but overall 7/10
Wordplay- Your flow was MUCH smoother, however your punches weren't quite as powerful, still saw no multis, the personals werent all that personal..and this doesn't weaken your verse or anything but puttin your bars like that with // at the end is lame as fuck...5/10 Vote- KillaConcepz by a long shot |
yeah yeah/......uppin' for votes..................
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uppin' 3 pleaze vote on this ya'll and be truthful
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back to the top...I wont let this get ignored.
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c'mon uppin' 4 and f!@#in vote damn
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it was a close battle guys but i think wordplay took this one....
killaconcepz, i liked your verse, ok punches, nice metas, punches just didnt hit as hard wordplay got the vote for the creative humuor....keep at it vote:wordplay return the favor http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113239 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112839 |
uppin for votes....this shit is getting redonkulous!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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last up I can do.............c'mon ya'll..........
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Punches=Killa-some of wordplays didn't make sense
Structure=wordplay-Most of Killa's lines were either too long or too short Flow=Wordplay=this was obvious, Killa's was all over the places at times Wordplay=Killa, this was a good line- this dudes penis is so small he had to play wit' his words Origonality=Killa=had some new some Overall=Killa=In spite of structure the punches were much better than wordplays who rhymes rarely made much sense. Vote-Killa Return the favour an give an honest vote on my battle wiv Baz187 |
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This was an alright battle but i think Wordplay got it because of his punches. Killa you had some pretty good punches that hit hard at times but it seemed like you had alot of filler in ya verse. Wordplay had straight punches, but Killa did have a few more personals that were better. The flow was off in killas verse to me. some lines were too short and some were hella extended. In wordplays the // were a little played but his structure was good and his flow was on point. overall id give this to Wordplay.
VOTE_WORDPLAY hit up battle in my sig. |
top floor..........................this is my stop
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wordplay took this battle easily.......he had much smoother flow and way more creative punches......killa, your verse just wasn't all that good.......you could have came much harder and dropped better punches but you just weren't very creative in this one......vocab was a tie, personals was pretty even as well.......the only thing that set wordplays verse aside was his better and more consistent use of punches, that is exactly what you need to do KC, in order to win more battles...just stay at your opponent more
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somebody get over here and vote on this......I want this shit closed. asap
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vote on this.........leave me a link to your battle and I'll come vote on your battles
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don't got no business battlin' this herb
this dudes penis is so small he had to play wit' his words only way he could beat me is if he bit off rymes right afta i posted the battle he immediatly went offline ^^killa took it with this words was too simple.. amputee boxing match, way stretched.. if you were the only one that entered, way played.. recycle add my name in, way played.. he had a decent flow but no punches.. and a few disses, maybe one of which hit.. killa had a few punches.. a steady flow.. some good disses.. a few good personals.. a few notches above word's verse.. took it with the quoted lines above, vote-killa |
return an honest vote plz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114402
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vote niggas
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