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killaconcepz 02-09-04 05:06 PM

killaconcepz v.s wordplay
 
10-20 lines
30 min. to drop
explained votes only

killaconcepz 02-09-04 05:08 PM

checkin' in
good luck kid

killaconcepz 02-09-04 05:10 PM

forget it i'll go first

killaconcepz 02-09-04 05:25 PM

listen up, u not ready for the rymes that ur facin'
wordplay get ready for ur third disqualifacation{check sig}
don't got no business battlin' this herb
this dudes penis is so small he had to play wit' his words
only way he could beat me is if he bit off rymes
right afta i posted the battle he immediatly went offline
battlin' me u could hurt ur reputation
had to rip just to crush the speculation
if u wasn't bbefore u batta get bold
i've been known to battle cats in my backyard and leave em' to dry wit the clothes
cuz i walk into beef
walk in a club without no heat turn ya face into tenderized meat
when i stomp nu wit' cleats
my hands could speak sign language but i let my fist talk in ya sleep
and leave a slash across ya cheek like it was part of ya speech
in this battle there's no goal your'e achevin'
you battled me in the aftanoon and bet u won't advance to the evenin'

wordplay 02-09-04 05:53 PM

check your e-mail, i sent you rope, to suspend you from home/
killa swing, until you extend and splinter your bones/

you got no wins, and I doubt you can even scrap /
your last verse had less punch, than an amputee boxing match /

I'll enter your dreams..and choke you with freddy's sweater/
you couldn't win this battle..if you were the only one that entered/

I refract your future punches, like fragments of light/
to throw a limp fist, speeding back to your eye/

you should change your name to "why can't I win"?/
you better recycle your dopest verse, and add my name in/

make them all believe you typed that whole thing/
and don't forget to say you did it quick, so you couldn't bring/

your full potential, you aint a rapper, your screen name is a rental/
when the mods find you out, your gonna disappear, like florence henderson's dentals/

sorry I took so long..there ya go

wordplay 02-09-04 05:55 PM

uppin for votes.......................................
.....................dont sleep..................................

killaconcepz 02-09-04 06:02 PM

uppin' 1

killaconcepz 02-09-04 06:22 PM

uppin' 2 c'mon vote pleaze

Holmes Jr. 02-09-04 06:24 PM

KillaConcepz- Your verse was alright, the flow was really weak I mean the syllable counts were like polar opposites..liked your punches, especially the penis one and your closer, I didn't see any multis but thats cool, I see you put some personals in there um the verse wasn't too original just sounded typical but overall 7/10

Wordplay- Your flow was MUCH smoother, however your punches weren't quite as powerful, still saw no multis, the personals werent all that personal..and this doesn't weaken your verse or anything but puttin your bars like that with // at the end is lame as fuck...5/10

Vote- KillaConcepz by a long shot

wordplay 02-09-04 06:32 PM

yeah yeah/......uppin' for votes..................
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killaconcepz 02-09-04 06:38 PM

uppin' 3 pleaze vote on this ya'll and be truthful

wordplay 02-09-04 06:40 PM

back to the top...I wont let this get ignored.
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killaconcepz 02-09-04 06:47 PM

c'mon uppin' 4 and f!@#in vote damn

Tactixx 02-09-04 08:13 PM

it was a close battle guys but i think wordplay took this one....
killaconcepz, i liked your verse, ok punches, nice metas, punches just didnt hit as hard
wordplay got the vote for the creative humuor....keep at it
vote:wordplay
return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113239
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112839

wordplay 02-09-04 09:06 PM

uppin for votes....this shit is getting redonkulous!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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wordplay 02-10-04 03:06 AM

last up I can do.............c'mon ya'll..........
.................................................v ote

MuSick 02-10-04 05:41 AM

Punches=Killa-some of wordplays didn't make sense
Structure=wordplay-Most of Killa's lines were either too long or too short
Flow=Wordplay=this was obvious, Killa's was all over the places at times
Wordplay=Killa, this was a good line-
this dudes penis is so small he had to play wit' his words
Origonality=Killa=had some new some
Overall=Killa=In spite of structure the punches were much better than wordplays who rhymes rarely made much sense.

Vote-Killa

Return the favour an give an honest vote on my battle wiv Baz187

killaconcepz 02-11-04 06:45 PM

uppin' 5

killaconcepz 02-11-04 07:27 PM

vooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooote
pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeze

Da_Killa_Kid 02-11-04 11:33 PM

This was an alright battle but i think Wordplay got it because of his punches. Killa you had some pretty good punches that hit hard at times but it seemed like you had alot of filler in ya verse. Wordplay had straight punches, but Killa did have a few more personals that were better. The flow was off in killas verse to me. some lines were too short and some were hella extended. In wordplays the // were a little played but his structure was good and his flow was on point. overall id give this to Wordplay.

VOTE_WORDPLAY
hit up battle in my sig.

wordplay 02-12-04 03:08 AM

top floor..........................this is my stop

Diverse 02-12-04 04:10 AM

wordplay took this battle easily.......he had much smoother flow and way more creative punches......killa, your verse just wasn't all that good.......you could have came much harder and dropped better punches but you just weren't very creative in this one......vocab was a tie, personals was pretty even as well.......the only thing that set wordplays verse aside was his better and more consistent use of punches, that is exactly what you need to do KC, in order to win more battles...just stay at your opponent more

wordplay 02-13-04 06:03 PM

somebody get over here and vote on this......I want this shit closed. asap

wordplay 02-14-04 12:27 AM

vote on this.........leave me a link to your battle and I'll come vote on your battles

killaconcepz 02-17-04 11:14 AM

Vote Now

.Syck. 02-17-04 11:35 AM

don't got no business battlin' this herb
this dudes penis is so small he had to play wit' his words
only way he could beat me is if he bit off rymes
right afta i posted the battle he immediatly went offline


^^killa took it with this
words was too simple.. amputee boxing match, way stretched.. if you were the only one that entered, way played.. recycle add my name in, way played.. he had a decent flow but no punches.. and a few disses, maybe one of which hit.. killa had a few punches.. a steady flow.. some good disses.. a few good personals.. a few notches above word's verse.. took it with the quoted lines above, vote-killa

.Syck. 02-17-04 11:58 AM

return an honest vote plz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114402

killaconcepz 02-17-04 01:40 PM

vote niggas

killaconcepz 02-17-04 02:27 PM

last TIME VOTE


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