Wits End Diss
 

Deja Vu ..

Aisle Phive has something to say:

Yeah I'm done rippin herbs, this is where fags get hurt
I mean. . . DAMN! Com is your fuckin best battler!
Full of wack ass elite rejects, and i'm sick of yall
The reason Av n' Leth joined, was cuz they pity yall
Full of newbie frontliners, but realize this before you get slammed
The only exposure Wits End is gettin, is Lady D on webcam
Foldin towels n' washin dishes, that's Hottie's job, what's worse is
We would never stalk you, unless we needed room service
Beatin yall is a hobby, I do it for fun and just to keep sane
But yall ain't just gutter, yall the whole fuckin' bowlin lane!
And yall scared of aisle, bitches gettin' shook on the net
Oh & hottie PLEASE update your roster, everybody good on it left!

Outwrite, Out writing ya'll:

Ive Busted Warlords Before, Banged It In My Sig Too
But From Ruthless To Dez And Hottie? This Crews Thru
Messin With Deja Vu, I Think We Beat You, Im Sure
I Feel Amnesiac Deja Vu, Like Ive Forgottin Yall Before
This Crews So Lame That The Main Thang They Do Is Chat
They About As Wack As T-Ball, With No One To Step Up And Bat
And Dejas Back, Set Trip, Enjoy Your Murking
We Stay Lurking Hoping Youll Talk Mumble And Stay Murmuring
Talkin Shit, Set You Back Stall You Out Quick
She Must Be Transexual The Way They Ride Hotties Dick

Feeble .. Mind over matter, bitches:

& hottie the fact is, your wackness, means you could be next,
but its worse yu bin sun'd does audio when he aint understood in text ..
ya rosters pathetic. leaders always on my dick but now im staining my lover,
& whats it say for ya "dope heads" when 1 sides the same as the other !?
washed up roster, i'll leave all of ya'll ripped like hell,
& you praise com? he has the worst record in the entire triple L ..
this is an open mic diss.. not the real thing, ya stats aint worth it,
but the fact is, its still better than your battle verses ..

Walter Wall: the name is dope enough ..

Wits end is over! but I'm beyond simple wordplay, fuck it
A crew full of angry janitors...constantly kicking the bucket
Fact: You're all wack bunch of useless kids, led by an e-whore
Need'n more elevation than elevators stuck on the ground floor
Im dope, ure not, ya always rid'n my nuts and speak'n my name
LMAO, Wit's End collab and diss at them are one and the same
I'll use penskills, slaughtering this crysis COMpletely through
Hid'n behind ure bars!.....Proof: Dimense chose jail over you!
Leth left, along with everyone else who was dope, wack fostered
Originally Posted by Lethargic
Where's this big diss at? hmmmmm

.........check your roster

Praise it. Now.

Good job at not dissing the actual name of the crew...

...cause I named that shit

^word, I came up with the "Remember Warlords?......Neither Do We" Slogan

so I didn't diss that either

lol, very nicely done.

You all came with some very hard punchs, but the roster thing did get a little old and played.
All of you used the same structure which made it that much easier to read, all flowed very well. I could sense the animosity towards wits end through out the whole read.
Also, the comic value of this was stellar. I laughed out loud a good 4-5 times. The web cam thing with aisle 5 was great, the hard personals from out write, also hard personals from feeble, walter finished with that great ending. An exceptional diss. Well done, guys. You managed to hit all of wits ends VIP's within about 20 bars. This is due much applause.

If you could please, please, return the favor with some honest feedback on my piece, The Soldiers Creed, in my sig. I would appreciate it very much, it is being horribly slept on. And I tried out a new style, and I would really like to know what people think about it.

not bad not bad..enjoeyd walters verse a little better than the others
but overall not bad.

nice diss...every1 had dope punches...and good wordplay....structures were okay flowed pretty well....personals were hittin hard....overall some very good dissing..
fav lines:
aisle:
Beatin yall is a hobby, I do it for fun and just to keep sane
But yall ain't just gutter, yall the whole fuckin' bowlin lane!
And yall scared of aisle, bitches gettin' shook on the net
Oh & hottie PLEASE update your roster, everybody good on it left!
outwrite
Messin With Deja Vu, I Think We Beat You, Im Sure
I Feel Amnesiac Deja Vu, Like Ive Forgottin Yall Before
Talkin Shit, Set You Back Stall You Out Quick
She Must Be Transexual The Way They Ride Hotties Dick
feeble
washed up roster, i'll leave all of ya'll ripped like hell,
& you praise com? he has the worst record in the entire triple L ..
this is an open mic diss.. not the real thing, ya stats aint worth it,
but the fact is, its still better than your battle verses ..
walter
I'll use penskills, slaughtering this crysis COMpletely through
Hid'n behind ure bars!.....Proof: Dimense chose jail over you!
Leth left, along with everyone else who was dope, wack fostered
Originally Posted by Lethargic
Where's this big diss at? hmmmmm

.........check your roster


nice diss fellas worth the read

enjoyed feebles verse the most, all went very well
the last verse play on the names didnt come off too well

blah blah blah
word
check my nas remix

:(..I used to be in WIT's End.Overall, this was decent.I liked Walter's verse the most and I liked Aisle's verse the least.In second place was Feeble and in 3rd was Outwrite.Im surprised I read it all.Usually when 4 people collab it be long as hell.You all did a good job with the amount of lines. :thumbup: Peace.

i actually thought it was weak....a couple of good wordplay in there from
some cats..but all in all...i didn't enjoy it

^LoL, you never like anything you aren't in.

Anyway, decent diss. I was expecting much more, but nonetheless, it still wasn't bad by any means. I agree with the masses...Walter's verse was my fav.

13th, a diss doesn't need wordplay. It's the personal.s that count, some people don't get all the personals.

Foldin towels n' washin dishes, that's Hottie's job, what's worse is
We would never stalk you, unless we needed room service

Hottie works at a hotel, her location says :Why so you can come stalk me?

Blah, lol. I wasn't going to use dope lines in a diss, all personals, that's what it's about.

Hmmm~~~I use to be Wits End..anyway..this was a nice diss...I would've liked to have seen more personals...although I did write a diss on Deja Vu(when I was still with Wits End) I don't think it will come in handy now...or will it??????

If you were active you would get some of aisle's funny lines and personals.
upping for more feedback .

Nice and tight...

Several quotables.

Kinda thought ya'll took it easy on em...

But it's all good.

Peace

HAHA nice diss enjoyed Walters an Feeble's verse..........good shit.........dont know much about the beef but enjoyed the read!

Yea...Im Just That Damn Dope

I Only Liked WW's Verse, The Rest
Was Pretty Bland.

nice no doubt. all verses had the elements of a battle script. nonetheless they
all make for a good open mic also. the punches and the keys were nice. the flow
was tight. the complexity was tight enuff. the aspects of a great diss all compiled
in one or another in each of the verses. nice job.

hit this up in return plz:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113109

pz

nice drop guys..
i too liked walters verse the most...and then feeble
aisle and outwite came decent...not bad
overall it was a good read...i understoood most of the personals
which helps in reading a diss collab of course...

wondering how they will respond...interesting

Eh...Not As Good As I Was Expecting

Pretty basic...but then again i dont really battle...

I keyed my verse in a few minutes.....glad you all liked it

ehhh...

it was mediocre

it was aiiight...I don't really like versez without multiez too much...but the dissez were pretty good...Feebz was the only nigga with multiez though...but I liked Walter'z dissez...the rest was just ok...

Ok^

Nobody gets my personals. :(

Upp!

Aisle - first 2 bars didnt rhyme, dont care how u pronounce it it'd be a hell of a force.. bowling lane was really your only good line.. defenitely weak for a diss

Out - wack.. sorry kid, the rest even if they came wack have the foundation.. u got a simple rhyme scheme and horrible disses.. they shoulda left u out of this one, no offense

Feeble - a few decent multis, 2 good personals, rest seemed like filler with no good punches

Walter - had a different style from the rest, decent opener, and decent ending, but nothing in between seemed to hit.. need a more complex rhyme scheme

overall - not a bad diss, certainly not one that did damage, this is just an honest critque im not looking for beef, but from the name of cats considered "good" i was kinda disappointed in this, even i myself dont put much into open mics or disses i was still expecting more

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First of all, who the fuck is you?

Secondly, do you have some sort of speech impediment? pi - ty - yall, sick - uh - yall.

Moron, learn how to rhyme, and learn what a diss is. IT'S NOT A BATTLE VERSE, it's a diss with personals 99% of those that critiqued didn't understand, yourself included.

This was no so amazing, tho the line up was kinda impressive =( i expected more, no real wowies, in this here..some ok personals, but a little, simplistic...

so we all agree that Aisle's sucked the most... :)

Yes..

And OutWrites Was The Best...Cuz It Was All Personal

Damn you people definitely brought heat..
Nice disses and the way you came at them was
Just with pure anger…

Aisle I think came the strongest then feeble…the rest
Came equal however hard…nicely done

peace