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King of Thievez [vs.] Technician
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microphone checka 1-2-1-2...don't start no shit...won't be no shit...if you don't give a damn we don't give a fuck...WHAT!!!!!!
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Here out of all the rappers, let me say....you far from wackest...
No where near the top though I use your name as target practice & with how hard you actin, you'll be the first to start the blacklist Your verse so tactless, herbs shouldnt talk shit if they cant back it! When I unvail for you my new found skill it's like you lookin at an atlas..... KOT bookin flights for passage but it's blind ambition like loosin ya glasses! See theres skilled and novice and I think your confusin' the classes... I'll abuse you with rachets, Tech give you battle scars bruises & bashes You can't withstand consistant punishment like kids with short tempers... Your the car that was totaled cause you were missin ur support fenders! Not protected enough when subjected to such neglection of guts...... I'm progressin so much that aggression is rush I'm fetchin' your blood! On Rb ur reflection is mud, nothin but dirt it was swept under the rug... Son needs a hug, tough luck! my punches like somethin hit u & ur still wonderin what! |
fucka Technician I molest writtenz...fuck ya style...
you ain't shit but a put on...it even sayz in ya custom title... battle me...you a dead man...I'll watch ya breathin' expire... ya like a car rollin' on a spare...you need to retire... tell me how this Technician is gonna fix a full clip in the chest... that will throw ya whole state back in time like Mitchell & Ness... fuck Chuck...to me ya nursery rhymez ain't nuttin' but Child's Play... you ain't a rapper you're and "artist" in other wordz ya stylez gay... what's this bullshit you been spewin' tryin' to be usin' against me?????? I'ma step on Chucks more than basketball playerz used to do in the 60's... I'ma call you cherry cause my big gun has been fiendin' to pop you... go door to door sellin' blowjobz then maybe I'ma have a reason to rob you... I'ma kill you, go to ya funeral and start strippin' ya hearst... when I tell my bitch to speak only then will you be spittin' ya verse... |
umm...this was an aight battle.....
In my opinion tha punches were on one side Tech...ya target practice punch was good But other than that...you just focused on multies You had another punch in ya verse(support fenders one) But thats it...it flow'd nice...and tha wordplay(KOT) was there King..you had a couple fillers here and there but besides that solid verse... Flow'd good..had some good personals(put on) & you had lots of punches with wordplay (retire, ness, 60's, rob u, and ya closer) Don't know what was up with tha whole chuck thing but King gets my vote for more consistant punches v/ KOT |
oh...the Chuck thing...his name'z Chuck...mine name'z Tomas...now that we've all been introduced let's get drunk and party all night...
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^lol truuuu....uppn this.....good battle.....welcome back..............
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everybody that visits this battle...take 2 puffs and pass...me and Tech will each get dome blunts...cause we special...I've alwayz wanted to roll either 2 Garcia y Vega Crystalz or 2 vanilla Dutchez together into one long blunt and smoke it to the dome...but my girl'z tryin' to motivate me to be sober...I'm doin' good so far...I think it's been 2-3 dayz now since I smoked last...I guess this meanz I gotta drink more now...
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^ yea same with my chic....she like u cant smoke every day blah blah blah same old hoop lah....i've been chillin out to like once or twice a day....but fuck that...i saty high and love it....lol uppn...............good luck with sobriety holmes....
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I'm tryin' to beat my month and a half record for not burnin'...
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yall are fuckin funny. i think that tech got this battle. i think he had herder punches than kot but kot had a few more personals tehn tech. both had a pretty good structure kots was a little shorter than usuall and techs was a little long but both made it work so thats a tie.tech nad more multis and they were mostly good.techs battle scars line was the best in both verses but i liked kots closer too. cause of the punches i give it to tech but it was a close battle though.
VOTE_TECHNICIAN open battle in sig |
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Here out of all the rappers, let me say....you far from wackest...
No where near the top though I use your name as target practice hmm..ok...4/10 & with how hard you actin, you'll be the first to start the blacklist Your verse so tactless, herbs shouldnt talk shit if they cant back it! nah....2/10 When I unvail for you my new found skill it's like you lookin at an atlas..... KOT bookin flights for passage but it's blind ambition like loosin ya glasses! good try...4/10 See theres skilled and novice and I think your confusin' the classes... I'll abuse you with rachets, Tech give you battle scars bruises & bashes not really a punch..3/10 You can't withstand consistant punishment like kids with short tempers... Your the car that was totaled cause you were missin ur support fenders! coulded worded to dopeness but no...3/10 Not protected enough when subjected to such neglection of guts...... I'm progressin so much that aggression is rush I'm fetchin' your blood! multies dont win battles...3/10 On Rb ur reflection is mud, nothin but dirt it was swept under the rug... Son needs a hug, tough luck! my punches like somethin hit u & ur still wonderin what! multies too much again....4/10 overall for Tech...23/70... fucka Technician I molest writtenz...fuck ya style... you ain't shit but a put on...it even sayz in ya custom title... reckon u get a 3/10 battle me...you a dead man...I'll watch ya breathin' expire... ya like a car rollin' on a spare...you need to retire... not at all...2/10 tell me how this Technician is gonna fix a full clip in the chest... that will throw ya whole state back in time like Mitchell & Ness... no comment...3/10 fuck Chuck...to me ya nursery rhymez ain't nuttin' but Child's Play... you ain't a rapper you're and "artist" in other wordz ya stylez gay... hell no!!....2/10 what's this bullshit you been spewin' tryin' to be usin' against me?????? I'ma step on Chucks more than basketball playerz used to do in the 60's... pretty coo....6/10 I'ma call you cherry cause my big gun has been fiendin' to pop you... go door to door sellin' blowjobz then maybe I'ma have a reason to rob you... nah...didnt like...3/10 I'ma kill you, go to ya funeral and start strippin' ya hearst... when I tell my bitch to speak only then will you be spittin' ya verse... not good...3/10 overall for KOT...22/70 oohh...tech wins by one...pretty weak battle...not too much was real creative on both sides...but tech barely edged it out even though he overdid the multies...peace |
^^^obviously has no clue what he'z talkin' about...but uppin' anywayz...
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^hey dont hate my voters:)...or sway!...but good at least ppl are voting.....
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Vote KOT.....
Punches.....Kot gets it for the fact that other dude didnt have any Wordplay....none really to speak of Meta.....Kot for the CHuck line multis....Tech...but slow down with um partner they have to make sense line of the battle.... "what's this bullshit you been spewin' tryin' to be usin' against me?????? I'ma step on Chucks more than basketball playerz used to do in the 60's..." vote KOT pce...Audible |
I don't sway...I just said that kid don't know what he'z talkin' about...he was just hatin' on the battle cause most of our punchez were over his head probably...
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Aight, I'm still with the bitches a level down, tryin ta get up here. ima share my opinion, n come back to vote when ive got 100 posts, im at 70 now. so check out my battles, it would really be appreciated, plus, im uppin ur battle now:
KayOhh vs Kuniva ( 3 - 0 ) KayOhh vs Chugs4Life ( 2 - 0 ) Here out of all the rappers, let me say....you far from wackest... No where near the top though I use your name as target practice good hit, multied, and not too cocky & with how hard you actin, you'll be the first to start the blacklist Your verse so tactless, herbs shouldnt talk shit if they cant back it! well, the multi was there, but maybe not needed, kinda weak When I unvail for you my new found skill it's like you lookin at an atlas..... KOT bookin flights for passage but it's blind ambition like loosin ya glasses! aight hit See theres skilled and novice and I think your confusin' the classes... I'll abuse you with rachets, Tech give you battle scars bruises & bashes hmm....i dunno You can't withstand consistant punishment like kids with short tempers... Your the car that was totaled cause you were missin ur support fenders! some of it didn't really make sense, but its aight Not protected enough when subjected to such neglection of guts...... I'm progressin so much that aggression is rush I'm fetchin' your blood! nice multis, the punch was good On Rb ur reflection is mud, nothin but dirt it was swept under the rug... Son needs a hug, tough luck! my punches like somethin hit u & ur still wonderin what! nice close, nice close fucka Technician I molest writtenz...fuck ya style... you ain't shit but a put on...it even sayz in ya custom title... k battle me...you a dead man...I'll watch ya breathin' expire... ya like a car rollin' on a spare...you need to retire... i cant beleive you got a 2/10 from that other guy for that, cuz that shit was dope tell me how this Technician is gonna fix a full clip in the chest... that will throw ya whole state back in time like Mitchell & Ness... aight aight fuck Chuck...to me ya nursery rhymez ain't nuttin' but Child's Play... you ain't a rapper you're and "artist" in other wordz ya stylez gay... nah what's this bullshit you been spewin' tryin' to be usin' against me?????? I'ma step on Chucks more than basketball playerz used to do in the 60's... nice play I'ma call you cherry cause my big gun has been fiendin' to pop you... go door to door sellin' blowjobz then maybe I'ma have a reason to rob you... nope I'ma kill you, go to ya funeral and start strippin' ya hearst... when I tell my bitch to speak only then will you be spittin' ya verse... not good enough for a close. This here was the best line: "battle me...you a dead man...I'll watch ya breathin' expire... ya like a car rollin' on a spare...you need to retire..." This was such a close battle, and even tho KOT got the best line, you finished weak, so this goes out to Tech... vote tech Comon, I took time for this, hit up the links, i only need a couple more: KayOhh vs Kuniva ( 3 - 0 ) KayOhh vs Chugs4Life ( 2 - 0 ) peace |
uhm, yeah, otherwords got this
ambitious or KOT just rhyming words 2gether not 2 hard 2 do work on punches |
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ummm...Tech is Ambitious...Kot is Otherwordz...:-D |
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I actually have to disagree with Game....and agree with Wise.....KOT had the better in this battle....he focused on hitting hard punches and personals....Tech had some good lines.....but he did focus on mostly rhyming his verse instead of using it for hard hits....u both had pretty good wordplay and shit.....and KOT had the personals...and punches...he gets punches for simply having more......vocab and multis goes to Tech....but KOT gets it for having harder more hits....
Vote - KOT peace |
technician
Here out of all the rappers, let me say....you far from wackest... No where near the top though I use your name as target practice not too bad, nice wordplay, 6/10 & with how hard you actin, you'll be the first to start the blacklist Your verse so tactless, herbs shouldnt talk shit if they cant back it! hardly hit, 3/10 When I unvail for you my new found skill it's like you lookin at an atlas..... KOT bookin flights for passage but it's blind ambition like loosin ya glasses! [bnice wordplay, 5/10[/b] See theres skilled and novice and I think your confusin' the classes... I'll abuse you with rachets, Tech give you battle scars bruises & bashes blah, didnt hit, 3/10 You can't withstand consistant punishment like kids with short tempers... Your the car that was totaled cause you were missin ur support fenders! not too bad, 5/10 Not protected enough when subjected to such neglection of guts...... I'm progressin so much that aggression is rush I'm fetchin' your blood! nah, just multies, 4/10 On Rb ur reflection is mud, nothin but dirt it was swept under the rug... Son needs a hug, tough luck! my punches like somethin hit u & ur still wonderin what! bad wording let you down, 5/10 overall 31/70 king of thievz fucka Technician I molest writtenz...fuck ya style... you ain't shit but a put on...it even sayz in ya custom title... not too bad, wording let you down, 4/10 battle me...you a dead man...I'll watch ya breathin' expire... ya like a car rollin' on a spare...you need to retire... played, i heard the retire line before, 3/10 tell me how this Technician is gonna fix a full clip in the chest... that will throw ya whole state back in time like Mitchell & Ness... didnt hit, 3/10 fuck Chuck...to me ya nursery rhymez ain't nuttin' but Child's Play... you ain't a rapper you're and "artist" in other wordz ya stylez gay... bad wording, an concept wasnt too god, 3/10 what's this bullshit you been spewin' tryin' to be usin' against me?????? I'ma step on Chucks more than basketball playerz used to do in the 60's... lol, pretty nice, 6/10 I'ma call you cherry cause my big gun has been fiendin' to pop you... go door to door sellin' blowjobz then maybe I'ma have a reason to rob you... gun lines are wack, an so was ur second, 3/10 I'ma kill you, go to ya funeral and start strippin' ya hearst... when I tell my bitch to speak only then will you be spittin' ya verse... second line could of been made better, but it was wack, 3/10 pverall 26/70 |
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