retard101 V/S Diverse
 

oy u know the rules

10-25 line spit
3-0 ko
blind spit (no pre written bull shit)
no Crew Hate or D/R votes/

hope this aint for notin

check check...callin me a lil bitch...consider this your eulogy

im a put it on ya Diverse

look at this fool messin with a member of Kryogenix/
ya names Diverse man that must be a curse/
cause fuckin wit me will just put your ass in a herse/
hold on a min. your your record is 24-6 y you messin wit dis/
runin around bitch slapped tryin to get a few more noobie battle wins/
aint that kind of a bit pussyish for you/
so as i leave you with this can you stand up to a mid west CRIP/

I'll leave this crip profusely drippin with blood
Reached for his keyboard but pulled back a stub
Kryogenically frozen in his mental retard state
Missed a whole day of school cuz the short bus was late
Retard 101, this kid needs much special attention
kids not ill, he's a hypochondriac, thought i would mention
called out for a 10-25 line spit, hit his 7 max,& suddenly quit
But this ain't for nothin, it's the first loss your gonna get
Fuck these last lines I'll just use them strictly for filler
blah blah blah..Tombstone reads:Diverse was my killer

put this bitch down with ease...R.I.P. fuckin tard'

okay, let the voting begin............................

retard101
look at this fool messin with a member of Kryogenix/
ya names Diverse man that must be a curse/
-flo,personal = 2
cause fuckin wit me will just put your ass in a herse/
hold on a min. your your record is 24-6 y you messin wit dis/
-flo,punch,personal,self hype = 3
runin around bitch slapped tryin to get a few more noobie battle wins/
aint that kind of a bit pussyish for you/
so as i leave you with this can you stand up to a mid west CRIP/
personal,-flo = 2

By far the worste I have seen so far. Alot didn't make sense and nothing really ryhmed. It seemed as if you let your anger get to your verse. Work on this stuff.
Overall = 7
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Diverse
I'll leave this crip profusely drippin with blood
Reached for his keyboard but pulled back a stub
punch,metiphore,personal = 7
Kryogenically frozen in his mental retard state
Missed a whole day of school cuz the short bus was late
personal,metiphore,punch = 6
Retard 101, this kid needs much special attention
kids not ill, he's a hypochondriac, thought i would mention
personal,vocab,punch = 6
called out for a 10-25 line spit, hit his 7 max,& suddenly quit
But this ain't for nothin, it's the first loss your gonna get
personal,-feed = 6
Fuck these last lines I'll just use them strictly for filler
blah blah blah..Tombstone readsiverse was my killer
-confusion,filler = 4

This was OK, much better than the above retard101, I noticed you fed a lil bit so I'm guessing you slacked off because you read his verse before hand. So I understand the lack of effort here. Much better any ways, clearly.
Overall = 29
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Vote = Diverse

uppin for more honest votes.......................

come on up it up it

lol thgis was a wck wack wack wakc battle man, i dunno wtf is going on, ima go with diverse just becuz his flo was betta though u both really need to elevate ur stuff.







vote: diverse

Vote Diverse

Diverse- Nice PUnches, I Was Feeling IT. You Had Nice Flow And Your Punches Helped That Alot. Nice Structure, Can Be Better Tho, But Nice Structure. Vocab Was Decent, Nothing To Impressive There. Personals, Ehh, You Can AAAWork On Those So...Nice verse

Retard? FOr Real, Elevate, Match up Ur Lines Straight< And Take Away The / at The End Its "Newbie" Lol. Put Punches In There, They failed :( And Get Better Flow. Make Sure You Have Nice Short LInes, That line Up LIke So

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Feel Me? Bad Verse..

DIVERSE
Punches= B
Flow= A -
Vocab= B
Personals= C+
Overal Grade = B/B-

RETARD
Punches= C-
Flow= C +
Vocab= D
Personals= C
Vocab= E
Overall Grade= D-/D+

HIt This UP Please!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113254

up it

uppin this shit to hurry up and end this battle...

im a put it on ya Diverse

look at this fool messin with a member of Kryogenix/
ya names Diverse man that must be a curse/
cause fuckin wit me will just put your ass in a herse/
played rhymes...weak punches
hold on a min. your your record is 24-6 y you messin wit dis/
runin around bitch slapped tryin to get a few more noobie battle wins/
decent personal lol
aint that kind of a bit pussyish for you/
so as i leave you with this can you stand up to a mid west CRIP/
whack
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I'll leave this crip profusely drippin with blood
Reached for his keyboard but pulled back a stub
ok
Kryogenically frozen in his mental retard state
Missed a whole day of school cuz the short bus was late
lol ok
Retard 101, this kid needs much special attention
kids not ill, he's a hypochondriac, thought i would mention
ehhh..weak
called out for a 10-25 line spit, hit his 7 max,& suddenly quit
But this ain't for nothin, it's the first loss your gonna get
decent
Fuck these last lines I'll just use them strictly for filler
blah blah blah..Tombstone readsiverse was my killer
blha blah blah

Diverse takes this easy win...retard had no flow or structure..no goos punches...and only 1 good personal...Diverse came with some good punches/personals/metas/...good battle by him

Please drop an honest vote here...i took the time for you...thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113550

put this bitch down with ease...R.I.P. fuckin tard'

up it come on up it

lets get some more honest votes up in this bitch

up it up it up it up it up it up itup it up it up it up it up it up it

mann i dont think u know the rules u have more then 2 active battle going on........

uppin this shit like a penguin in a bathtub...???????????????????????

uppin again...damn, finish the votes...............

come on up it up it up it up it up it up it up it up it up it up it up it up it up it up it up it up it up it up it up it up it up it

vote=diverse
no need to explain dat retard was slain

vote=diverse no need to explain dis bitch was murked easy
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sorry for da double post i fucked it up ah well peace
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I totally felt Diverse his verse, he had a nice flow going on with sum gus rhymes and wordplay and a lot of variation; Your punches were also pretty gud, I felt that they just came hard; you can work a little bit on your personals tho cuz that's how you really win a battle, no offence; You also had a couple of multis that were GUD; structure was aight but nothin special

retard yours I din't fell so much cuz your flow was kinda weak, you had no variation with a bad voc; Your punches were ok but they didn't came so hard as Diverse, same with your personals, you have to work on that man; you has sum multis but I felt th

I totally felt Diverse his verse, he had a nice flow going on with sum gus rhymes and wordplay and a lot of variation; Your punches were also pretty gud, I felt that they just came hard; you can work a little bit on your personals tho cuz that's how you really win a battle, no offence; You also had a couple of multis that were GUD; structure was aight but nothin special

retard yours I din't fell so much cuz your flow was kinda weak, you had no variation with a bad voc; Your punches were ok but they didn't came so hard as Diverse, same with your personals, you have to work on that man; you has sum multis but I felt that they were played; you had an ok structure

Vote Diverse
Return the favour man, thx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113596