thing vs. provoke
 

10lines
blind
30min
no hate d/r
no feed
no bite
no recycling
no bull shit
check in
dont no show
if you dont drop in 30 i win
no krew votes
etc. .etc. .etc. .


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http://www.myimgs.com/data/philjohnmiles/rufus313.jpg
fag was sporting this sig^ jus in case she changes it. .

homegirl oh hell no u have ya mug n ya sig. .ya grotesque
provoke is jus a day away from losing her last 2 upper teeth
ya nose looks like a alien. .red &"rudolf" like,the thing secretes
ugly pose,get a comb,even adolf hitler's goteak is more unique
& who ya tryna inpress wit ya avy,maybe abortion babies
ya n distress,cuz that whack shit is as gangsta as the mid 80's
kill ya self now,ya conjest,not supported,an easily aborted mess
kill ya existence,ya nonexistent,distroted face,"bort" type pest

fuck it man 8 lines. .lets see what you had. .

I've checked your past weak battles.. they're merely text squabbles
It's hardly surprising.. My sig?.............. It's Things role model
Punches don't land.. intelligence shots that in reality.. all missed
Past verses.. Honestly.. you've used words that don't even exist
Exposing herbs.. I'll cane this chump.. he'll simply be left distraught
Thing takes time to chill out..... and organize his one thought!
I've been disconnected twice, got a drink.. and still I'll merk you
It's effortless.. this herbs a leader.. head of a one man crew!
Satans Descendants.. be realistic.. it's plain to see its fools talk
In all seriousness.. I've eaten this wannabee with his own damn fork..


The herbs head of a one man crew

Sorry bout bottom... I musta forgot to delete it...

Omg... please... it's my first bar for a start..
I posted my verse blind fool.. wrote my verse in reply.. posted when finished..
Dumb fuck..
Uppin...

vote provoke

he had doper lines

things verse was aight but the flow was all fucked

provoke had a nice flow and better punches

so whats ya real alias name. .cuz i no you not a herb and shit?
ya style looks fimiliar. .could it be?. .nah im not sure. .lol
uppin2

Lol... Harlem's Finest man..

harlem's finest. .hmmm. .havent recently heard that name. .lol
are you on the elite list or some shit?. .harlem dont battle in F.L.
ahha. .uppin3. .close this i think i lost haha. .fucking hoe:). .lol

Thing u came ok..
But the only real good thing u had..
Provoke flipped on you..so yeah..
& Provoke just came witty like hell..
But u are right, he should not..at any circumstances battle in FL
But yeah,
Provoke takes it with better punches & a overall better verse..
Basically..what it comes down to.
vote Provoke

Thing - your verse was just alright... nothing really specail, u had some decent punches but none the less it was just ok.. try to include more wordplay and metas... personals.. well u had some but they werent that great... just an ok verse overall

Provoke - you shouldnt be battlin in FL, get 5 wins fast and move to elevated... your verse was much better then things.. ya punches were good and ya wordplay was there and some of it was nice... i liked ya verse and u came alot doper then thing did... u won this battle wit much better punches

V/ Prove

Uppin x4..

uppin4 close this please...........................................

Thing
homegirl oh hell no u have ya mug n ya sig. .ya grotesque
provoke is jus a day away from losing her last 2 upper teeth
personal,-flo = 4
ya nose looks like a alien. .red &"rudolf" like,the thing secretes
ugly pose,get a comb,even adolf hitler's goteak is more unique
personal,metiphore = 5
& who ya tryna inpress wit ya avy,maybe abortion babies
ya n distress,cuz that whack shit is as gangsta as the mid 80's
-confusion,personal? = 3
kill ya self now,ya conjest,not supported,an easily aborted mess
kill ya existence,ya nonexistent,distroted face,"bort" type pest
punch,multi = 6

OK nothing breath taking, One line about his avy had me sort of confused. Maybe you can explain that one. Other than that you focused too much on that sig as if it was your only chance of winning. Next time a lil more creativity would be better. Work on that.
Overall = 18
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Provoke
I've checked your past weak battles.. they're merely text squabbles
It's hardly surprising.. My sig?.............. It's Things role model
personal,vocab,-indirect feed = 7
Punches don't land.. intelligence shots that in reality.. all missed
Past verses.. Honestly.. you've used words that don't even exist
metiphore,repeated personal,personal = 6
Exposing herbs.. I'll cane this chump.. he'll simply be left distraught
Thing takes time to chill out..... and organize his one thought!
metiphore,punch,vocab,punch = 8
I've been disconnected twice, got a drink.. and still I'll merk you
It's effortless.. this herbs a leader.. head of a one man crew!
-self hype,personal = 5
Satans Descendants.. be realistic.. it's plain to see its fools talk
In all seriousness.. I've eaten this wannabee with his own damn fork..
metiphore,personal,-flo = 5

I liked this one.Good mixture of personals and punches along with consistant flo apart from your ending. Not sure if that was actually feeding either, could have been a crazy coincidence, but i subtracted points to be safe. Just seemed to fall apart a lil bit in the end but overall well put.
Overall = 31
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Vote = Provoke

man thing you lost....prov took this
in every aspect of the battlefield....
if you knew of his skill you probably wouldnt have battle him though
its all good mayne.....you lost though
he just ripped right through you no problem..

v/prov

this shit still open. .lol
uppin5 to close this. .

iight provoke kill dis kid and hez only a newb
Struture: Tie
Flow: Tie
Multiez: NONE
PUNCHEZ: Provoke
VOTE~Provoke

Can you explain your vote man.... it'll be d/q'd otherwise...