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hardhitter VS TJwillingham
ightt here's the deal 10-20 lines u spit 1st
no crew votes no hate vote no biteing 3-0 kNock out or 1st ta 5 win's verse due with in 30min's after check in.....good luck |
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G'luck hommie.......check in..........*1*...............
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The check didn't go through at first........................
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ok u got 30mins ta drop it so make it hott.......................<~*1*~>
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Hard-hit-ta is a child molestes-ta yo....
He got that Micheal Jackson Icon and-his name-gives-him-away O…I C What, and who you B…stay your distance U homo-sexual M C, Yeah…you like Mic Checkin don’t you? You come the battle? You gonna leave typing with your brain half scrambled cuz-of-da-way I made it rattle... U sex craz, I’m more deranged I’ll drag you outta my range and beat your ass wit paddle that is wooden in the rain cause’ll-sting more when its wet micheal… I’m Pulp fiction and-M-Cee’s need to listen trust, Hard-hit-ta leavin-da-forum bitch’n Do your thang dog! |
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Damn yo typo my have fucked the shit up it's suppose to be "you come to battle?" |
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Damn your 30 minutes is up ain't it................................................ ...............
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ok....ok.....ightt.....yo...
TJ ya willingly geting handed a loss ya fake and soft.. im not even gunna try cuz 2 lines is blowin ya off.. like a dust dust breez in the wind,, your wack at hart,no beef dont start.. cuz your lines are faker then a whoopie cushin fart.!! you gettin hit in every direction.like talibins robbin a mighty mart.. dont start son i will rip you apart.. your just another skinny lost nigga livin in the dark.. jump quick ta this call out!?? no need nigga i see you tryed to go all out.. but ya not suceeding like a high school drop out........... your quick ta cop out thought u was gunna be another no show.. but u came in with 1 of the gayest flows///// who knows maby u will blow but i aint goin in the direction as this fag....... pop shit again your ass will be found in a body bag............nigga........ |
quick shit nothing speacil.............................uppin 4 sum votes
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no hommie it was ony 27mins i was 3 mins early...........LMAO
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yo hard hitter definelty won this shit , tj ur shit was so whack omg u talked bout the same thing michal jackson save it u had nothign on hard hitter
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Ok we going again? check whatever............................
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^^i aggree with lust, see Tj if you was battling Micheal jackson you would of won cus all you seemed to do through out ya verse is dis him insted of your opponent. hard hitter u shit actually dissed the opponent aswell as it had an ok flow and some good punches in there. The line about the woopy cushion had me laughing, it was unexpected and thats good in a verse, maybe im just childish o sum shit any ways i cant vote yet but if i could it would be for hard hitter
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Aight aight that's peace...so what now we go again or no.
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what are u talking about TJ its over there is no going again!!!!!!!!!!!uppin this mo fo........*1*
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Aight nigga I'll see you on the flipside!..................................
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ightt nigga u dont want none i wasnt even trying in that battle.....but what ever the fuck ever when this is done if u want a rematch i would love ta merk ya..........peace nigga.........(no beef)
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TJ =
Hard-hit-ta is a child molestes-ta yo.... He got that Micheal Jackson Icon and-his name-gives-him-away O…I C What, and who you B…stay your distance U homo-sexual M C, rubbish lines Yeah…you like Mic Checkin don’t you? You come the battle? You gonna leave typing with your brain half scrambled cuz-of-da-way I made it rattle... blah, ya need to sort it out U sex craz, I’m more deranged I’ll drag you outta my range and beat your ass wit paddle that is wooden in the rain cause’ll-sting more when its wet micheal… I’m Pulp fiction and-M-Cee’s need to listen trust, Hard-hit-ta leavin-da-forum bitch’n na, rubbish also hardhitter = TJ ya willingly geting handed a loss ya fake and soft.. im not even gunna try cuz 2 lines is blowin ya off.. ok like a dust dust breez in the wind,, your wack at hart,no beef dont start.. cuz your lines are faker then a whoopie cushin fart.!! ok,lol you gettin hit in every direction.like talibins robbin a mighty mart.. dont start son i will rip you apart.. your just another skinny lost nigga livin in the dark.. umm jump quick ta this call out!?? no need nigga i see you tryed to go all out.. but ya not suceeding like a high school drop out........... ok your quick ta cop out thought u was gunna be another no show.. but u came in with 1 of the gayest flows///// ummmok who knows maby u will blow but i aint goin in the direction as this fag....... pop shit again your ass will be found in a body bag............nigga........ better end than him this battle goes to hard hitter for better punches flow and structure, tj ya need to elevate your spitz dude. vote = hardhitter PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOUR ON THIS BATTLE.THANKS http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113480 |
uppin this shit...................leave a link and ill hit it up...........uppin
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TJwillingham
Hard-hit-ta is a child molestes-ta yo.... He got that Micheal Jackson Icon and-his name-gives-him-away O…I C What, and who you B…stay your distance U homo-sexual M C, -confusion,personal = 1 Yeah…you like Mic Checkin don’t you? You come the battle? You gonna leave typing with your brain half scrambled cuz-of-da-way I made it rattle... -played,punch,metiphore = 1 U sex craz, I’m more deranged I’ll drag you outta my range and beat your ass wit paddle that is wooden in the rain -strecthed,multi,-pointless,-filler = 1 cause’ll-sting more when its wet micheal… I’m Pulp fiction and-M-Cee’s need to listen trust, Hard-hit-ta leavin-da-forum bitch’n -flo,-structure,-retarded,metiphore,-confusion = 0 The absolute worste I have veiwed here so far. Terrible beyond belief. Im not going to give advice. Just Quit. You don't belong doing this. It's a waste of every one that try's time. Overall = 3 ------------------------------ hardhitter ok....ok.....ightt.....yo... TJ ya willingly geting handed a loss ya fake and soft.. im not even gunna try cuz 2 lines is blowin ya off.. punch,metiphore = 3 like a dust dust breez in the wind,, your wack at hart,no beef dont start.. cuz your lines are faker then a whoopie cushin fart.!! -filler,multi,metiphore = 3 you gettin hit in every direction.like talibins robbin a mighty mart.. dont start son i will rip you apart.. your just another skinny lost nigga livin in the dark.. metiphore,-filler,punch,metiphore = 3 jump quick ta this call out!?? no need nigga i see you tryed to go all out.. but ya not suceeding like a high school drop out........... personal,-repetivness,metiphore = 2 your quick ta cop out thought u was gunna be another no show.. but u came in with 1 of the gayest flows///// -feed,punch = 2 who knows maby u will blow but i aint goin in the direction as this fag....... pop shit again your ass will be found in a body bag............nigga........ metiphore,punch,-played = 4 A weak verse but not a terrible one. Your worste part was that out out out bar. It really required no creativity what so ever and it was filled with a fairly weak highschool metiphore. You were short and to the point which was good. And your last line was your best even tho the body bag concept is quite played. Work on the creativity. Overall = 17 and mind you....this was out of a possible 60 not 30 ---------------------- Vote = hardhitter |
Uppin this mo fo leave a link and ill return the favor.......................uppin.......*1*
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hardhitter verse hit hard unlike the opponent, "hard" had nice structure and wordplay"
the opponent definently needs elevation my vote -- Hardhitter |
hardhitter, nice verse, you had some dope punches in their,
like the whoopie chsion one, structure was pretty good, not much to say about it though, your opener was dope too, next time put some personals in their dawg, same thing with multis, its all good though, keep elevating, peace. Tj, decent verse, nothing really caught my eye, just another wanna be emcee, you got to work on your punches dawg, you thorugh alot of them but they were weak, you also need some personals and multis, but keep elevating dawg. my vote: hardhitter hit up any of my battles!!! |
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Hardhitter Won But Hes Not A "seal The Deal" Mc
I Want Both Yall Wack Fagets... Come Battle A "real" Mc |
..............................................plea zzzzzzzzzzz 1 more vote................
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that was a tight battle.........hardhitter got ya good
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v/hardhitter
you had better pumches then this cat and he isnt even on this site anymore......your structure was okay but could use some work j-you need to elevate......work on your punches cause they dont hit hard at all and your structure i didnt really like either......pc |
Vote = HardHitter
HardHitter You had some punches in there..structure was aight..elevate a little more TJwillingham You need to elevate a little more..work on some punches so that you can win battles 'n' shit..and work on yo structure |
aight tj had no hard hittin lines all he was talkin about was mike jackson.......hard hitter could have beat u wit the first to line of his shit.......tj u need to step ya game up ALOT!!!
vote:Hardhitter |
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