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SplitSouL versus PROOF
10 lines i guess
45 minute deadline after checkin ill check in when u drop no crew votes swaying or d/r Hey, i can set up a battle, weird |
checking in................................................ .
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im not sure but i may have to post tomorrow, u got 2 get up at 5:30 tomorrow for baseball, but ill try and post tonight
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dont feed off my shit, thats gay
This cat got a weak mind, this shit must be confusin' call him slim, cause he keeps losin himself in my music I don't need to prove it, your record shows that your whack but claiming in bitch-slapped that you don't care about that weak ass bitch, I bet you spend hours looking for a punch or ya just wait for the one you get losing your money for lunch its just a hunch, but we all can tell your pretty new to this shit its evident because ya styles dryer then a senior citizens clitoris Followin me through the threads, constant begging me for a battle kid, you aint even good at dickryding, it seems your forgot to straddle... merked.... |
shit, i just saw this, i gotta post tomorrow, ill check in then 2
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you just saw this? you created this fool... why couldn't you have said that before the battle, would have made for a great punchline...
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lmao....just saw this...lmao!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thats fuckin great
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hey dumbass, i meant i just saw ur post, i just got back from baseball and ill post tonight after school, and no i wont feed off of your shit even though that wasnt a rule so i guess were even
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heres my check in, ill post on 45 minutes or sooner
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why did u change ur name, o well
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i aint gon go easy on you cause we from the same location
until this bitch gets skill, he should be on battle probation losin to a newb aint gon look good on ur record my lyrics are to complicated for u, u got confused with checkers hes got like 700 posts and he still doesnt know what to do why dont you take a day of and find a substitute i cant even imagine why i battled this bitch split i'll ruin his reputution, make him wanna get his wrists slit this guy in all the newb bitch slapped, lookin for a win after this im gonna be the only nigga uppin merked.... |
alrighty, lets get some votes! uppin numero uno.... will return favors
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Split
This cat got a weak mind, this shit must be confusin' call him slim, cause he keeps losin himself in my music metiphore = 4 I don't need to prove it, your record shows that your whack but claiming in bitch-slapped that you don't care about that personal,personal = 4 weak ass bitch, I bet you spend hours looking for a punch or ya just wait for the one you get losing your money for lunch metiphore = 3 its just a hunch, but we all can tell your pretty new to this shit its evident because ya styles dryer then a senior citizens clitoris -flo,metiphore = 3 Followin me through the threads, constant begging me for a battle kid, you aint even good at dickryding, it seems your forgot to straddle... personal,personal,wordplay = 4 Not good.Very below average, I think I voted on you before and I thought you were better than this. For startes you had no punches at all, all u had all verse was metiphores and personals. Try an say like your gonna do summin to him or that u did. Very below average here. Overall = 18 ---------------------------- PROOF i aint gon go easy on you cause we from the same location until this bitch gets skill, he should be on battle probation personal = 3 losin to a newb aint gon look good on ur record my lyrics are to complicated for u, u got confused with checkers -self punch,-irrelevent,-flo = 0 hes got like 700 posts and he still doesnt know what to do why dont you take a day of and find a substitute personal,punch,metiphore = 6 i cant even imagine why i battled this bitch split i'll ruin his reputution, make him wanna get his wrists slit -filler,-wrong,metiphore = 0 this guy in all the newb bitch slapped, lookin for a win after this im gonna be the only nigga uppin personal,-played,metiphore = 1 Didn't think you could lose after I read Split's verse, but yours was worste. You had one good line tho, so there is some sort of talent hiding in there. You need to work on being original, On maybe half the battles I have veiwed I've seen the "your a vet battling a newby" line. You insult your self and use a played line at the same time. Work on Witt and Creativity. Overall = 10 --------------------------- Vote = Split |
i am a newb, if saying the truth is a self punch, even though its not bad, its fucked up.
ur a newb to this site too, or at least ur name, but whatever |
uppin (1)
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upp numer tres, drop a vote, and i will be sure to return the favor.
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proof, aight verse, could of been stronger, you focused
to much on your metas though, and not enough on your punches, but you still had some decent lines in their, like, your opener was aight, but keep elevating. split, your verse was decent, just like proof you focused to much on 1 thing, except it was personals not metas, really i only saw like 1 or 2 punches in their, and they were weak, you definatley have to work on youor structure dawg, honestly i dont get it, cause you should be way more advanced than proof, in my opinion, but keep elevating, peace. my vote: proof this guy needs to get dq'd, please do that favor, if you agree with me. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113726 |
aight, you people need to poll vote lol, but w/e, and i dunno what your talkin about my structure, but w/e
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PROOF is DQed for having too many battles open at once.
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