Chugs4Life ~vs~ KayOhh
 

10-16 linez blind spit

30 mins after you check in

stnadard rulez

Checking in................................................ ................................. ima spit since my internet about to run out

aight, im checkin, ive gotsta go, so les make it 15 minz

So we are makin it fifteen???? Let me know????????

Yes!!!1........................................... .................................................. ....

Im~flip~this~bitch~2~hell...snitches~slip~n~tell.. .watch this kid slip~N~fell..his nuts r like his dick in a bitch...its a little~stealth!/ (hahah not seen )

Next~2~smash...when i rip~up~Paths...Shit this kids on my dick...he's always the next~2~try~n~grab~my~ass...screaming Chugs4Life~can~i~get~an autograph!?/

Hell no...i speak~Out...you get beat~down aint no beef~now...shit when u go close 2 girls...thats about the only time you make people "Freak~out!"/


ima~make~this~fake~bitch~coil...saran wrap his ass and leave em crammed~in~foil...stuff em back in the cabinets back with the baking~oil!/

Im~gone~wrong...insane~when~i~pop~arms...This Dudes so fucken pathetic...he wanted 2 see~his~mom~in~a~thong!/

I Flip~pessts~internal...dont mess~with~my~arsenal...Shit ask the docs...he's~the~one~with~the~undescended~left~test ical!/

Finish~him...
ima~slam~this~bitch~kid...whos hype off a hand~ful~of~riddelan...shit his bad behavior has em in military~style~detention...and yet...he still couldnt get his shit 2 stand~at~attention!/ (not even homos he goes for get his shit HARD) hahah



ahahahaha Letz go votez please.... :laugh: :thumbup:

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Like his leprechaun, his rap lacks height, I mean, we both reppin the orange white, n green,
But he must not be full irish, cuz I'm the only one with fight, I've seen,

Its silent but you'll be lovin this beat, as I put my fork into position to eat,
You shoulda known motha fucka, ur gunna get burnt when fuckin with heat;

I aint liking mortal laws, so I be writing with the gods,
Youre jus resiting what you saw, cuz ur biting more than Jaws;

Your verse wasn't nuthin great, I'll post for ya somethin ta hate,
For fuckin sakes, I'll have you wining like you be crushin grapes;

Every rhyme I resite's witty, my raps are all holy like Fifty, ( think )
The punch from my lines, is leavin both of your eyes puffy, like diddy;

I'm still dominatin and he book spittin, I mean his shit look written,
Every line I spit is like a worm when I'm fishin, I jus hook it in;

And it sticks in so you should disperse son, before this verse is done,
You should do like Mase did, and go get yo church on;

You wanna run now? Aight, fag go, theres no where you can hide from the big K-O,
I'm everywhere you run, everywhere ya go, got all the blocks locked down like lego!

Aight, Ive gotsta go, your verse was aight, but you jus makin it look like ur rhymin with those " ~ "'s, but you aren't. Lets see some voting

Hit up my otha battle too, i jus need 2 more ( 3-0 ):
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...56&page=1&pp=15

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Uppin for some votes here, Comon, les see some votes, this one is pretty clear

vote- Kayohh

Chugs for life
Enough~of~these~hhm okay? They are annoying... only herbs use them anyways okay? now that we are done with that.. nice verse u used harder rhyme schemes but not to many punches/personals.. umm ur first bar sucked.. mayb if it was worded better

Kayohh-
you got this becuz.. you actually had personals.. and punches but still need to elevate becuz i see extreme potiential in your shit.. you had a nice closer very witty becuz i havnt seen that word play in a while

Overall- Kayohh

Uppin ( 2 ), comon, les see some votes here, I really wanna know how I did with this guy...

Also see how I ripped ( in my opinion ) Kuniva up:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113456

Im~flip~this~bitch~2~hell...snitches~slip~n~tell.. .watch this kid slip~N~fell..his nuts r like his dick in a bitch...its a little~stealth!/ (hahah not seen )
eh, alright opening, nothign much though. the followthrough stealth part is alright, but the rest of the multis arent really doing it for me
Next~2~smash...when i rip~up~Paths...Shit this kids on my dick...he's always the next~2~try~n~grab~my~ass...screaming Chugs4Life~can~i~get~an autograph!?/
this almost came off as filler type ish. i mean looking at it its got a multi on it yes, but there isnt any real punch directing toward your oponent, or a good metaphor there
Hell no...i speak~Out...you get beat~down aint no beef~now...shit when u go close 2 girls...thats about the only time you make people "Freak~out!"/
not a bad bar i suppose.. think ive heard the freakout part though. the punch could have been more directed here you could have had a better connect with the lines here
ima~make~this~fake~bitch~coil...saran wrap his ass and leave em crammed~in~foil...stuff em back in the cabinets back with the baking~oil!/
alright part here. metaphor was eh.. the punch needed to be a little stronger, but over all concept was dope
Im~gone~wrong...insane~when~i~pop~arms...This Dudes so fucken pathetic...he wanted 2 see~his~mom~in~a~thong!/
punch was alright.. nothign that hard though, kind of lack the strength and direction
I Flip~pessts~internal...dont mess~with~my~arsenal...Shit ask the docs...he's~the~one~with~the~undescended~left~test ical!/
um.. this could have been alot better. theres no real connect through your lines and you lacked strength
Finish~him...
ima~slam~this~bitch~kid...whos hype off a hand~ful~of~riddelan...shit his bad behavior has em in military~style~detention...and yet...he still couldnt get his shit 2 stand~at~attention!/ (not even homos he goes for get his shit HARD) hahah
this wasnthtta bad of an ending. the attention part was alright but the setup of it was way off i thought

Over allyou should work on throwing in punchs for your shit. more consistent, harder punchs. then try for your metaphors, and multis.Also you lacked personals.. you could have really tryed upping this part of the verse.


Like his leprechaun, his rap lacks height, I mean, we both reppin the orange white, n green,
But he must not be full irish, cuz I'm the only one with fight, I've seen,
alright opening. good bar except a little more explannation would have helped your follow through alot more
Its silent but you'll be lovin this beat, as I put my fork into position to eat,
You shoulda known motha fucka, ur gunna get burnt when fuckin with heat;
eh, sort of a basic bar, above basic anyways. Good metaphor. but the punch could have been better
I aint liking mortal laws, so I be writing with the gods,
Youre jus resiting what you saw, cuz ur biting more than Jaws;
played follow through concept with jaws. the set wasnt a bad concept but it didnt really go anywhere and came off filler type is
Your verse wasn't nuthin great, I'll post for ya somethin ta hate,
For fuckin sakes, I'll have you wining like you be crushin grapes;
what the hell? what is this part i dunno if i fully get it^^^^ theres alot of ways to interpt that part.. after looking at it enough i decided how i wanted to take it. but over all this bar needed some rewording
Every rhyme I resite's witty, my raps are all holy like Fifty, ( think )
The punch from my lines, is leavin both of your eyes puffy, like diddy;
played bar.. Not much but ive used the holy bit. the puffy part is alright but thats some what played to. punch isnt much here
I'm still dominatin and he book spittin, I mean his shit look written,
Every line I spit is like a worm when I'm fishin, I jus hook it in;
dope bar, the follow through wasnt a bad concept. and the set was alright but could have had more punch in the bar
And it sticks in so you should disperse son, before this verse is done,
You should do like Mase did, and go get yo church on;
alright follow through but again played. the set up could have been a little more with a punch
You wanna run now? Aight, fag go, theres no where you can hide from the big K-O,
I'm everywhere you run, everywhere ya go, got all the blocks locked down like lego!
good ending, the metaphor with lego was alright i suppose. self boasting in the set didnt do much for you though

Over all i thought that you could have came off with some better bars, more directed punchs and then headed for metaphors.. ALright verse over all though i suppose.

vote-KayOhh
He took it with his punchs, and metaphors, over all they came off a little better.


Peep this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112998

vote-kayohh
chugga ya flow was nice but it was all bout u no personals at all n the punches were weak
kayohh came wit the punches n the personals they werent that strong eitha but overall he at least landed

well not really hard to determine the winner here

Chugs4Life- Overall you just came off to simple, played out lines and not really landing ur punches, ur flow was not even remotely good. Ur shit rhymed though, ill give u that, but u really got to work on personals, just elevate and ull be aight, and i think u get the picture but incase u dont yet, no more ~ shit, it makes it really hard to get a good flow goin while readin

KayOhh- pretty good, not great but ur punches hit and u had personals, ive seen better from you but you definetly won this. U had a pretty good flow and even though ur a newb u dont really battle like one.

v/KayOhh

Uppin ( 3 ), les finish this off, so I can battle again. Two more votes

Uppin ( 4 ), I'm only uppin one more time, comon, dont let this go ta sleep. Vote for one of us.

s-s-s-sway unit

g-g-g-gay unit...

I am not swayin. I'm jus askin for people to vote. If you think the other guy is better, fine, vote for him...I jus wanna get this shit done with so I can get on to some new battles, and get better raps out there.

I'm down for fuckin you up next! Your jus tryin to sway for Kuniva!!!

Look!!! Same IP address!!! Check it out people!

i dont think the other guy is better, but ur 5:06 up is a huge sway

first of all my name isint Kuniva. I dont even know proof so i dont know why he is doin that, and Kayohh wasent swaying at all he was just uppin the battle just like i am now..... uppin lets get some votes

aight dawgs, im done postin what im seein, what the truth is

aight, Uppin ( 5 ), les see some votes for someone here. I aint swayin, vote for chugs if you want, I dont mind losin to a fellow irishman

Im~flip~this~bitch~2~hell...snitches~slip~n~tell.. .watch this kid slip~N~fell..his nuts r like his dick in a bitch...its a little~stealth!/ (hahah not seen )
````decent punch gay ta repeat what u said, woulda laughed if u didnt do that
3/5 good multi
Next~2~smash...when i rip~up~Paths...Shit this kids on my dick...he's always the next~2~try~n~grab~my~ass...screaming Chugs4Life~can~i~get~an autograph!?/
```not really a punch but decent self exalt 3/5
Hell no...i speak~Out...you get beat~down aint no beef~now...shit when u go close 2 girls...thats about the only time you make people "Freak~out!"/
````funny and flowed into next puch good did just jump from topic to topic 4/5

ima~make~this~fake~bitch~coil...saran wrap his ass and leave em crammed~in~foil...stuff em back in the cabinets back with the baking~oil!/
```dumb vocab ta rhyme wit bad punch 1/5
Im~gone~wrong...insane~when~i~pop~arms...This Dudes so fucken pathetic...he wanted 2 see~his~mom~in~a~thong!/
```i get it but not too cool, didnt flow too good either cus didnt rhyme that good 2/5
I Flip~pessts~internal...dont mess~with~my~arsenal...Shit ask the docs...he's~the~one~with~the~undescended~left~test ical!/
```not a good punch didnt make sence why your arsenal had anything ta do wit his left testical, but good vocab 3/5
Finish~him...
ima~slam~this~bitch~kid...whos hype off a hand~ful~of~riddelan...shit his bad behavior has em in military~style~detention...and yet...he still couldnt get his shit 2 stand~at~attention!/ (not even homos he goes for get his shit HARD) hahah
```what, thats a bad punch, riddelan is to calm hyper kids down, but good wordplay, bad punches if it was funnier u could get away wit makin fun of someon cus their hyper but that wasn't funny 3/5

19/35
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kayohh

Like his leprechaun, his rap lacks height, I mean, we both reppin the orange white, n green,
But he must not be full irish, cuz I'm the only one with fight, I've seen,
```decent opener decent muti 4/5
Its silent but you'll be lovin this beat, as I put my fork into position to eat,
You shoulda known motha fucka, ur gunna get burnt when fuckin with heat;
````played rhymes and concept, coulda gone more origianl wit that beginin silent beat thing 2/5
I aint liking mortal laws, so I be writing with the gods,
Youre jus resiting what you saw, cuz ur biting more than Jaws;
````weak personal exalt, but original, decent meta 4/5
Your verse wasn't nuthin great, I'll post for ya somethin ta hate,
For fuckin sakes, I'll have you wining like you be crushin grapes;
```good multi's,but need cooler vocab, original wining grap line, 4/5
Every rhyme I resite's witty, my raps are all holy like Fifty, ( think )
The punch from my lines, is leavin both of your eyes puffy, like diddy;
```i thought, hah, decent lines but didnt flow too good, 3/5
I'm still dominatin and he book spittin, I mean his shit look written,
Every line I spit is like a worm when I'm fishin, I jus hook it in;
```havin your line look writen is a good thing and that was a gay meta, 2/5
And it sticks in so you should disperse son, before this verse is done,
You should do like Mase did, and go get yo church on;
```good simily but bad vocab wit the rhymes 3/5
You wanna run now? Aight, fag go, theres no where you can hide from the big K-O,
I'm everywhere you run, everywhere ya go, got all the blocks locked down like lego!
```good flow and tryin ta put energy into it, decent finisher 4/5

26/ 40

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vote-kayohh
chugs u had some gay topics das what killed u but good muti's easy ta read wit those ~ but i still ddint like them. other guy kayohh had better topics wit relatin ta fidy diddy and mase, jus cooler

hit my battle up and search my name if u want i think i got others i aint sure.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107529

Im~flip~this~bitch~2~hell...snitches~slip~n~tell.. .watch this kid slip~N~fell..his nuts r like his dick in a bitch...its a little~stealth!/ (hahah not seen )
seriously the ~~~ shit is gay as hell...stretched line...useless multis for the most part
Next~2~smash...when i rip~up~Paths...Shit this kids on my dick...he's always the next~2~try~n~grab~my~ass...screaming Chugs4Life~can~i~get~an autograph!?/
~W~H~A~C~K~
Hell no...i speak~Out...you get beat~down aint no beef~now...shit when u go close 2 girls...thats about the only time you make people "Freak~out!"/
played

ima~make~this~fake~bitch~coil...saran wrap his ass and leave em crammed~in~foil...stuff em back in the cabinets back with the baking~oil!/
not a hard punch at all
Im~gone~wrong...insane~when~i~pop~arms...This Dudes so fucken pathetic...he wanted 2 see~his~mom~in~a~thong!/
weak
I Flip~pessts~internal...dont mess~with~my~arsenal...Shit ask the docs...he's~the~one~with~the~undescended~left~test ical!/
weak...nothing against ya opponent
Finish~him...
ima~slam~this~bitch~kid...whos hype off a hand~ful~of~riddelan...shit his bad behavior has em in military~style~detention...and yet...he still couldnt get his shit 2 stand~at~attention!/ (not even homos he goes for get his shit HARD) hahah
Dun explain ya punches...stretched as fuck...sex jokes are played


Like his leprechaun, his rap lacks height, I mean, we both reppin the orange white, n green,
But he must not be full irish, cuz I'm the only one with fight, I've seen,
Dun space between bars..lil stretched...ok punch]
Its silent but you'll be lovin this beat, as I put my fork into position to eat,
You shoulda known motha fucka, ur gunna get burnt when fuckin with heat;
weak
I aint liking mortal laws, so I be writing with the gods,
Youre jus resiting what you saw, cuz ur biting more than Jaws;
ok...kinda played
Your verse wasn't nuthin great, I'll post for ya somethin ta hate,
For fuckin sakes, I'll have you wining like you be crushin grapes;
weak...useless multis
Every rhyme I resite's witty, my raps are all holy like Fifty, ( think )
The punch from my lines, is leavin both of your eyes puffy, like diddy;
ehhh ok
I'm still dominatin and he book spittin, I mean his shit look written,
Every line I spit is like a worm when I'm fishin, I jus hook it in;
ok
And it sticks in so you should disperse son, before this verse is done,
You should do like Mase did, and go get yo church on;
kinda weak...not all bad
You wanna run now? Aight, fag go, theres no where you can hide from the big K-O,
I'm everywhere you run, everywhere ya go, got all the blocks locked down like lego!
ok

Kayohh took this easy...guys...multis are useless unless they are also punches/personals/metas...most of yalls weren't...But KO had some good personals and punches...Chugs came played and had nothin original...Vote-KO

PLease hit this up with an honest vote! I took the time for you http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113978