Oakley Vs. wordplay
 

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Word why are u here? when you belong in a promdress?
Far from skill....Your getting beat by Killaconcepz/1
Call a Pharmasist...You gon need summin to numb your face...
This kid's like his structure, He just takes up space!/2
Chalk line traced...your best play is to plead insanity...
It's clear ta see, Keep Goin...
An you gon' be endangered like them Manatee's/3
your 0-2 for a reason,WordPlay? You don't carry your name
It's easy to see thru...The fact your whiter than Hanes/4
Think it's cus disqualified? then keep quoting them lie's..
I'll sit an watch....as your Loss column multiplies/5

my name jumped the VS. stampeded em weak and verbless/
leavin' ya chained and burnin'...beggin' for gauze and surgeons/
oakley fucked up and battled someone better than/
half of this site, on one account, after my rhymes melted them/
after I retort, you'll require life support, you best aquire rhyme resource/
reply, and end up with shades, turned blades, with me applyin' force/
you can peep the morgue...after I leap the board/
retreat...before you recieve the beating you've been askin' for/
preda-tor, oh muther fuck a metphor, you couldn't turn a vote/
with a propellar, and a crooked new york senator/


sorry I took so long

my structure is kinda fucked...ah welll

uppin once

hmm....i think oakley wins

he threw some nice punches..wordplay had
killer flow and multies but not enuff cool punches...
both came nice...
just oakley hit harder and what not
cant poll...but please poll here

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112445

yeah, oakley definetly won this won, the only thing i saw wrong with this verse is tha damn chalk line, i swear i might have heard that line like 10 times on this site, its played to hell. Anyway, both of you could work on multies, and you both had good flow, but i think oakley had a better one. some good personals and punches from oakley, with a few from word too, but they just didnt seem to land as directly and frequently.

v/oakley(just never use the chalk line again)

drop an honest vote here http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113763

up up and aww fuck it.............................

wake your asses up...........you lazy fucks
vote....hate.....boo..I dont care, get in here

dis was a good battle,not da best tho...
wordplay made some good punches but some were a bit played...structure was pretty elmentry and flow wasnt really there....work on it bro..
oakley...ur verse wan'st bad for a newb......some good punches but some were a soft....not really any structure and flow wasn't there at all....as i said not bad 4 a new boy tho......both had no personals witch usaly wins battles...so both of uwork on dat....overall wordplay's punches were a bit stronger and did have a little flow not much tho.....both keep it up...
v/wordplay!!!

MY VERDICT

Flow:word
Stucture:Word
Punches:Word
multies:None

MY COMMENT

Word: good shit - needed stronger punches

Oak: fix ya structure

all around ok battle but overall WORDPLAY won

my unofficial vote WORDPLAY

Please drop sum feedbak or votes at

BlackGrenade VS ShortY

OK uppin

WOW a NEWB has beatin a fly weight....word play why is that your name you have no word play and a bad structuer you had some ok punches but u need to elevate..dont under estamate the NEWB's.......................ELEVATE

oakley same 4 you but u had alittle better structuer and same some ok punches didnt see and personals and not much of any word play..........both of u cheak out LL for some help and how it's done......................

v/oakley

just so u kno....u said no personals*
Far from skill....Your getting beat by Killaconcepz/1
his last battle down 0-1 to Killaconcepz
This kid's like his structure, He just takes up space!/2
all his other battles he double-spaced his Bar's apart
your 0-2 for a reason,WordPlay? You don't carry your name
He's 0-2 and he doesn't have any wordplay
Think it's cus disqualified? then keep quoting them lie's..
I'll sit an watch....as your Loss column multiplies/5
thats the whole thing in his sig

yo token close my vote it was invalid i re read the whole shit and this fag dont desever my vote fuck this GAY MC acually u dont even desever to be called a gay MC u a nothing nigga..............................

uppin

ok wordplay i dint like it i wasnt feelin it and as for word play u didtn have ne it didnt have good strutcure and it didnt flow good punches were ok no multies ... ELEVATE

now for oakley that was hot shit i liked it i loved ur word play better punches and it flowed like water in to a glass um no mulites good strutcure good flow good vocab

my vote: oakley

uppin

uppin

ima end this right now, i bet when oakley saw that i was the last person to update he thought id give my vote to word, but man, he sucked. Oakley had a better flow, exept that one short line, i dont know why that was there, and he actually threw punches, and though he could have had more personals he had a nice one with the record. Wordplay, u hade an ok flow, with stretched lines, and about zero punches and personls, which is the main reason that oakley won this.

v/oakley

AIGHT..

Both of your flows were aight, but OAKLEY had better flow to it..
punches, ima have to give it to Oakley..they just STOOD OUT more..
your Vocab was equal..im leaning towards wordplay on this tho..


OVER-ALL..i think that Oakley got this..wordplay you didnt really have any good punches in my opinion..

vote-oakley..


PLEASE DROPPA VOTE ON MY BATTLES. THEYRE GETTING MAD SLEPT ON.


me VS lyrical-03
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113705

me VS oliverclohsoff
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113661

Word why are u here? when you belong in a promdress?
Far from skill....Your getting beat by Killaconcepz/1
^weak punch and an Ok personal
Call a Pharmasist...You gon need summin to numb your face...
This kid's like his structure, He just takes up space!/2
^aight this is an ok simile punch.....
Chalk line traced...your best play is to plead insanity...
It's clear ta see, Keep Goin...
An you gon' be endangered like them Manatee's/3
^creative but came off kind of stupid......
your 0-2 for a reason,WordPlay? You don't carry your name
It's easy to see thru...The fact your whiter than Hanes/4
^aight nice punch .....racist but nice.......
Think it's cus disqualified? then keep quoting them lie's..
I'll sit an watch....as your Loss column multiplies/5
_^ok good closer good verse lots of personals .......not bad overall...._________________


my name jumped the VS. stampeded em weak and verbless/
leavin' ya chained and burnin'...beggin' for gauze and surgeons/
^ok this is a good opener....nice multis good wordplay/ punch
oakley fucked up and battled someone better than/
half of this site, on one account, after my rhymes melted them/
^kinda lost your flow on this one......not a good bar....
after I retort, you'll require life support, you best aquire rhyme resource/
reply, and end up with shades, turned blades, with me applyin' force/
^good multis, good wordplay....you got potential harness your skills more though...
you can peep the morgue...after I leap the board/
retreat...before you recieve the beating you've been askin' for/
^ok this is fine you already used leap though.........
preda-tor, oh muther fuck a metphor, you couldn't turn a vote/
with a propellar, and a crooked new york senator/
^hehe nice ending i like it...good shit...nice opener and closer....overall ok verse

This was a good battle Oakley came more consitent with personals which hit hard at times and wordplay banged out the multis with creative punches....I personally think that personal hit harder than multi punches and that Oakley just barely takes this one good effort by both MC's peace.