:) vs $pitacular (under 100 post, and over 100 post can poll vote)
 

10 lines minimum.. 15 lines maximum.. you know the deal no hate votes

checkin in... but why?!? would you want peeps with less than 100 posts to vote? Fuck it, whatever

droppin soon

cuz niggas barely vote as is.. but yeah ill drop soon also

bitch every single lyric that you've ever WROTE BITES
just for having an annoying voice you deserve to get CHOKED TWICE
and have your THROAT SLICED
kid, the whole reason you've got 1000 post in 6 mounts is cuz you've got NO LIFE!
your just a GEEKY VET, your whole lifes a boring SLEEPY MESS
kid your a loser who always stays inside houses like TV SETS
and fuck your internet crew, all yall assholes form a WEAK CIRCLE
talkin a bunch of shit when behind the monitor yall resemble STEVE ERKEL
ill leave you sportin SCATTERED SCARS
with your rhymes left in SHATTERED BARS
your punk ass gets "smoked" worse than the cigar in your AVATAR,
and im by far the last nigga you want to be TESTING
cuz faggot ill punch your CHEST IN,
have your fuckin jaw broken in 3 places like kanye WEST CHIN

fuck that listen bitch
any amount of illness is what this DUDES TEXT LACK,
my punches will leave you with a BRUISED CHEST FAG
ill hit you so hard you'll be seing more stars than the US FLAG
ill hitting you with so many punches kid HOW WILL YOU SENSE?..
.. bitch just throw in the TOWEL NUISENSE
your rhymes are weak and dont flow like a constipated persons BOWEL MOVEMENTS
im INSANE WITH SPEECH
put the gun to your head and blow you out the FRAME WITH HEAT
i'll leave his brain on the pavement just so he can CLAIM HES STREET

damn what the fuck kid are you battling man..............

LMFAO

aight check it yo,

I set this battle up twice... and you fuckin No-Showed both Times
then you set it up for Dick Ridin... 0 post newb votes in Front Lines
you say you got 16 wins... but I Never heard of Nona ya Victims
that's cuz they all ya own Aliases... so no wonder you Ripped Em
you say 'No Hate'... LOL Butt Fuckin you is Never Gon Stop
check his sig - the sad thing is... that IS my mother On Top
Skill he Showed? No... should have No-Showed again Instead
Think about it - just type ya Name... and you're givin me Head
Smile Bitch... before me & my dick make better use of ya Jaw
please, you're only Current Streak... in the shit in ya Drawers

murdered.

lol.. aiight man uppin ...............................

Damn that was one hell of a fucking battle you both had your own things going for you but I gonna have to giv this to $pitacular because he had harder personals and the flow was off the hook

but no hate because :) held down but agian I have to give that to $pitacular

BUT NO HATE :)

peace

dis was one cool battle...its really to close to call..
:) ur verse was top...puches were good and hit hard.....some flow...and structure was good too....personals were good aswell...overall 9/10
$pitacular ur verse was top aswell....punches hit hard...structure was there...but flow was also there..personals were ok....overall 8.75/10
both verses were top but :) wins dis coz his was a bit longer and had more contnet..
keep it up both of u...
v/:)

PLZ RETURN DA FAVA: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=112929&page=2

damn can yall poll vote on this?.. i set the shit so that anyone can poll vote

yea, easy victory for $ over :), but here is the breakdown:

:) aka Smiley:
your punches hit like pillows, your flow was wack, your structure was all fucked up, vocab was ok, your personals were very wack, your opener was crap, your closer was ok, but other than that, your verse just sucked, now i know you are better than this..

Best Lines:
ill leave you sportin SCATTERED SCARS
with your rhymes left in SHATTERED BARS
your punk ass gets "smoked" worse than the cigar in your AVATAR
^wack, but the best line in ur verse..


$:
your punches were good, your flow was very nice, your structure was very nice, vocab was good, personals were nice, your opener was off the hook, your closer was played but still very funny (nice personal), your verse was very nice, and thats why u get my vote..

Best Lines:
you say 'No Hate'... LOL Butt Fuckin you is Never Gon Stop
check his sig - the sad thing is... that IS my mother On Top
^lol, nice, very funny..

Skill he Showed? No... should have No-Showed again Instead
Think about it - just type ya Name... and you're givin me Head
^lol, very nice, had me rollin..

Vote - $pitacular

make sure to return da favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111358

:) came nice again with the multis a killer flow, fell off here n there, such as the 4th bar, didnt seem to me to go in fluency with the previous 3.. some kool lines , not many personals just disses n punches, which made for a solid verse.. spit had some nice personals, in fact a lot of them.. the finisher was fire nice line and his flow and multis were also above average.. with punches about tied.. flow about tied.. i have to go with consistancy and personals, which i feel spit edged in this bout.. so vote-spitacular.. plz return an honest vote no hate or beef

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113774

spitactular got this with better punches and way better structure

yo :) u gotta do sumthiung wit ur structure and please dont do that with ur lines anymore
dont cap ur rhymes either

but spitactular had a well eual verse that stayed consistant and he had better punches that hit harder and were more direct plus spitactular had better personals also

for those reasons

v/spit

my bad...hit up the battle in my sig please...i need one more

wow..& Spit called my battles wack

Smilie- please dont capitalise ya punches that jus makes
for bad style etc. some of ya punches were K but they
dint really connect.

Spit-can ya come any weaker than ya did? really horribly
wack..seriously. thought ya was a lil bit better but maybe
not. No wordplay, no style jus punches/facts. Blandest verse
I've ever read honestly. Smilie had better wordplay than you.
but ya took this for te fact ya Opponent came poop.
jus stay here in F.Lines tho..wots good for ya

V/Spit

hahaha this was a great battle both of u did every thing right.but $pitacular u had alittle better punches and that what got u the win in this battle..both of u are good MC no need ta elevate both did a great job but$pitacular just had a couple of better punches........
v/$pitacular

yo sence i hit this up go hit one of my battles up than hommie............*1*


sorry about the fre post..........

what a bunch of dickridding votes.. wtf man.............

: )
bitch every single lyric that you've ever WROTE BITES
just for having an annoying voice you deserve to get CHOKED TWICE
punch,punch = 3
and have your THROAT SLICED
kid, the whole reason you've got 1000 post in 6 mounts is cuz you've got NO LIFE!
punch,personal,-structure, = 6
your just a GEEKY VET, your whole lifes a boring SLEEPY MESS
kid your a loser who always stays inside houses like TV SETS
punch,metiphore,metiphore = 5
and fuck your internet crew, all yall assholes form a WEAK CIRCLE
talkin a bunch of shit when behind the monitor yall resemble STEVE ERKEL
personal,metiphore = 4
ill leave you sportin SCATTERED SCARS
with your rhymes left in SHATTERED BARS
your punk ass gets "smoked" worse than the cigar in your AVATAR,
multi,punch,punch,personal,wordplay = 8
and im by far the last nigga you want to be TESTING
cuz faggot ill punch your CHEST IN,
have your fuckin jaw broken in 3 places like kanye WEST CHIN
-self hype,multi,punch,metiphore = 6
any amount of illness is what this DUDES TEXT LACK,
my punches will leave you with a BRUISED CHEST FAG
ill hit you so hard you'll be seing more stars than the US FLAG
punch,-bad,metiphore = 4
ill hitting you with so many punches kid HOW WILL YOU SENSE?..
.. bitch just throw in the TOWEL NUISENSE
your rhymes are weak and dont flow like a constipated persons BOWEL MOVEMENTS
-vocab,metiphore = 2
im INSANE WITH SPEECH
put the gun to your head and blow you out the FRAME WITH HEAT
i'll leave his brain on the pavement just so he can CLAIM HES STREET
-self hype,punch,vocab,wordplay = 7

This was mediocre. Had how dropped the whole verse the same way you did in 2 of your bars i would have said this was a very nice drop. But you didnt. Im not a big fan of the CAPS either, sorry. What you need to do is just be more consistant with your heat insteada of Hot to Cold. Good Job.
Overall = 45
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$pitacular
I set this battle up twice... and you fuckin No-Showed both Times
then you set it up for Dick Ridin... 0 post newb votes in Front Lines
personal,personal = 8
you say you got 16 wins... but I Never heard of Nona ya Victims
that's cuz they all ya own Aliases... so no wonder you Ripped Em
personal,personal = 6
you say 'No Hate'... LOL Butt Fuckin you is Never Gon Stop
check his sig - the sad thing is... that IS my mother On Top
personal,punch,personal,wordplay = 8
Skill he Showed? No... should have No-Showed again Instead
Think about it - just type ya Name... and you're givin me Head
-indirect feed,personal,punch,wordplay = 7
Smile Bitch... before me & my dick make better use of ya Jaw
please, you're only Current Streak... in the shit in ya Drawers
personal,punch,metiphore,personal,wordplay = 9

The best I have viewed so far here. Refreshing after some of the battles I have voted on. Everything you had in here was near perfect, just the right amount of length and input into each line and well balanced with punches,personal's, and extensive wordplay. It was a pleasure reading this verse. This is an example of what you should do.
Overall = 38 + 15(for less lines and better wordplay) 53
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Vote = $pitacular

i dont know anybody around here to dickride lol.. but i dont have enough posts to pollvote anyway so no harm done.. 100 posts sucks.. no1 wants to vote on ur battles cuz u cant poll vote :-(

Great fucking merk, Spit!

Damn nice personals.
Great current events in the thread!
A complete sonning.

Smiley only had some pre-written, capitalized shit...

That he's been told to improve on before.

And refuses to do so.

Peace

that vote doesnt even count man your wack ass hell anyways what the hell you got to tell me man

prewritten shit? how the hell you know that shit was prewritten i type that shit up bitch

Why doesn't my vote count?

I explained it perfectly.

I highlighted the personals and current events in his verse.

Cuz that's what your's lacked.

You're only calling me a bitch and crying bout my vote cuz even your voting ring couldn't get you a win against me.

Peace

Smiley:

bitch every single lyric that you've ever WROTE BITES
just for having an annoying voice you deserve to get CHOKED TWICE
Aight punch, kinda weak opener, though nice
and have your THROAT SLICED
kid, the whole reason you've got 1000 post in 6 mounts is cuz you've got NO LIFE!
youre not gunna get anywhere dissin vets, but i aint no vet, so nice
your just a GEEKY VET, your whole lifes a boring SLEEPY MESS
kid your a loser who always stays inside houses like TV SETS
again with tha vet dissin, no good, thats what forcin multis get
and fuck your internet crew, all yall assholes form a WEAK CIRCLE
talkin a bunch of shit when behind the monitor yall resemble STEVE ERKEL
a forced rhyme, dun know too much about steve, weaker still
ill leave you sportin SCATTERED SCARS
with your rhymes left in SHATTERED BARS
your punk ass gets "smoked" worse than the cigar in your AVATAR,
This was your best bar, nicely done, by far
and im by far the last nigga you want to be TESTING
cuz faggot ill punch your CHEST IN,
have your fuckin jaw broken in 3 places like kanye WEST CHIN
nice, nice bustin
any amount of illness is what this DUDES TEXT LACK,
my punches will leave you with a BRUISED CHEST FAG
ill hit you so hard you'll be seing more stars than the US FLAG
should not have capped the first part, didnt rhyme, and the flag is jus played
ill be hitting you with so many punches kid HOW WILL YOU SENSE?..
.. bitch just throw in the TOWEL NUISENSE
your rhymes are weak and dont flow like a constipated persons BOWEL MOVEMENTS
I think i jus read this somewhere, i dunno, but well sent
im INSANE WITH SPEECH
put the gun to your head and blow you out the FRAME WITH HEAT
i'll leave his brain on the pavement just so he can CLAIM HES STREET
this is kinda copyin em, but, not exactly, u know what im talkin about

Get rid of the CAPS. If you have to sho that your multiyin, or that you have rhymes than they aren't good enough. take the advice.
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$pitacular
I set this battle up twice... and you fuckin No-Showed both Times
then you set it up for Dick Ridin... 0 post newb votes in Front Lines
Aight, thats fine
you say you got 16 wins... but I Never heard of Nona ya Victims
that's cuz they all ya own Aliases... so no wonder you Ripped Em
kind've a made up dis, aight multien
you say 'No Hate'... LOL Butt Fuckin you is Never Gon Stop
check his sig - the sad thing is... that IS my mother On Top
wordplay, nice
Skill he Showed? No... should have No-Showed again Instead
Think about it - just type ya Name... and you're givin me Head
shit, nuf said
Smile Bitch... before me & my dick make better use of ya Jaw
please, you're only Current Streak... in the shit in ya Drawers
crutchen on tha sig, betta close by far

this is goin to smilez, cuz he had betta flow, and didn't dwell on one thing. I was leanin ta $pit, but you repeated the same disses a couple times, not good.

haha, rhymed all the comments. I haven't had a battle, cuz these wont close, even tho I've pretty much won them. Anyways, check em out below.

uppin........ ayo Brix why don't cha read my verse again, get off ya mind-altering, stupidity inducing mentality, and give me the props I deserve for my blindspit. pz.......................

no honestly!! if i was hatin on ya i wudda voted for him.
but ya played wackly off his sig, avater etc
it was poor sorry!! it aint hard to do that...
I giv ya mad props for Front lines....lmao

Uppin............................................. .......................

uppin for the finish....................................

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