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B.I.Detained 02-12-04 04:54 PM

Tribute/Remark--The Helpfull/Hated
 
Tribute/Remark


I'd like to thank all the helpfull, who helped me Elevate
& speak my Mind to losers who do nuttin but jus hate
I'll start of w/ Axiom..seen as tho he's just Left..
he'll prob be the only Mod..who'll leave w/ my Respect
not that I disrespect..other Mods..shout at to Feebs
gave me a shot at LLL..after sayin 1000 times..please
lol..at least he gave me a shot & actually read my Rhymes
unlike Walter Wall & Chrit..who can all be pricks at times
Blindfolded lines..they see my name, automatically dont Read
I even tried to grow on you..N you str8 rejected the Seed
Y cant you believe?? just Critique..be helpfull for Once
see I thought thats wot Mods are for..not sit in Silence
& promote gay net beef Violence..stop puttin peeps Down
Hoped Cam' had left..now there seems to be triple him Around
slowly Makin more sound..for peeps like Maven..nice guy!!
even if a bird didnt have Wings..he'd encourage it to Fly
gives peeps material a Try..& actually reads In-Depth
why not make him a Super Mod--now his stature has Leapt
& for the useless and Innept..Phrantik, wot du actually do
Moderates Crews/Hook ups..yet he's not active in HIS Crew
can I get a O.o.o.O..Eddy works his ass off..Dope @ Open Mics
never really spoke till now..but he's in the group I like
coz he's friendly, funny & helpfull now & then
& in my Underated opinion..very usefull w/ his Pen
on to Token..we beefed before but he damn sure helps RB
nearly answer everythin in I.R..cleanin it up fast n Cleanly
no gay Remarks & listens to each Case
its peeps like him...who shud have inactive Mods Replaced
now to Aisle 5..is harsh w/ his Remarks..not helpfull to Brix
but he helps around RB nicely..but can also be a Dick
if ya took the Cockiness away...you'd have another helper
but he jumps bk on the bandwagon..to be another Brix hater
I also can be a Rater..Most Underated=Lethargic by a Mile
he's def the best battler on the site..but not Praised in a While
so heres my Appraisel..Leth jus do wot ya do
coz nobody will beat ya arse..except probably you
howdy TR..big big help..& grasped bk some SS Integrity
the League was goin downhill..untill Realist made it Resurectory
& a massive Beef to Spitacular..the gayest member on this Site
the only person on the net..that i would like to Fight
@ one point he said i was the best..now his opinions CHANGE
maybe coz I dint d/r him..stuck w/ a ball & Chain
to my boy Emerge..keepin the Audio sections alive..
instead of slapping ya face..I introduce ya to a High Five lol
coz he helps bigtime & is one of the coolest on the site
we clearly had a beef in the past..but now we got it right
Finally to The End & Self..Supers Mods who actually Moderate
& wen they show there Wittiness..its Humour & not hate
been on the recieving end off Both..& laughed at there diss
coz they helpfull/funny motherfuckers..each deservin a Kiss..
to all others who are cool..& help peeps w/ you assistance
keep doin all good deeds..to the other..keep ya Distance

Dev 02-12-04 05:09 PM

thought the concept was good... most of the scheme and rhying, but a couple neat the start seemed a bit forced [silence-for once]... but alot was decent.... pretty smooth, but in places it seemed a bit well.. you know...too appreciative.... but most nice.... decent drop.... apart from a few glitches, the scheme had some nice multi's n shit....

Rawhead Rex 02-12-04 05:31 PM

This was real good in effort and meaning and I'll have to agree with you on most of your points.
Nice execution, flow never really skipped a beat.
Some of the name dropping coulda had wordplay thrown in, but that really wasn't what you were going for.
I felt you wanted a straight forward message with no minced words.
You accomplished that.
Despite leaving out some of the other active names:
13th Disciple, Young P, Born to Kill, Avalon, Evolve, Diverse, etc.
I guess the rhyme woulda gone on forever if you'd listed the whole roster.
I liked what I read, it came from the heart.
That's what counts the most.

B.I.Detained 02-12-04 05:51 PM

up..thanx

Nic Caesar 02-12-04 06:02 PM

NIce slice an dice homie ... i was likin this... seems you was on a bit of converted seriousness.. like u pissed of at somthin... or just concentrating way too hard... i dunno... its just me... but overall i liked it fa sho...executed nicely... feelinit dunny... just keep doin big like you have been doin... Yep

Peep out my drop. H.E.l.l. its a good piece no one should miss out on...

Caesar - On3

B.I.Detained 02-12-04 06:46 PM

thanx

carlosbarrett 02-12-04 09:37 PM

what the hell happen.This shit was too long. You dedicated a whole page to other people. You don't suck..but it was not good enough for me to read all of it...hate me or listen to me.

B.I.Detained 02-13-04 10:12 AM

I'll hate you

Edicius 02-13-04 10:20 AM

can I get a O.o.o.O..Eddy works his ass off..Dope @ Open Mics
never really spoke till now..but he's in the group I like
coz he's friendly, funny & helpfull now & then
& in my Underated opinion..very usefull w/ his Pen


Awww, thank you =) .. well back to writtin, of this piece =P .. this was good, ..vocab was not an big issue here, due its more about the content, & that came thru real clear.. what was on your chest, was well pulled of here, .. it was a solid read, & some nice playing w/ words..very smooth flow to it, very good =) .. I liked it O.o o.O

Mr.Christensen 02-13-04 10:21 AM

wow i was mentioned

twice!

thanks..but SS is run by deacon, Maven, and myself
so credit where its due

B.I.Detained 02-13-04 10:22 AM

lol..dont worry I did mention Maven @ the beginning

Kwizikz 02-13-04 10:23 AM

know what u talkin bout wit this.....
Some mods deserve respect....
N obvoiusly some don't........
Good, original concept........
Flow flawless...........
7.5/10...Becasuse U work better
with a more depressed attitude..lol...


a massive Beef to Spitacular..the gayest member on this Site
the only person on the net..that i would like to Fight

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Like this a lot
Kno how you hate this guy!

Check my new open mic...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113801

B.I.Detained 02-13-04 12:32 PM

up up

Emerge 02-13-04 07:58 PM

awwwww.... how sweet of you :)

you love me....you really love me


thanks for the shout out Brix...
nice vershizzle... get a mic in ure room!!

lol

peace

B.I.Detained 02-14-04 06:49 AM

its coo up up

B.I.Detained 02-14-04 11:32 PM

up up


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